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Write a reviewwell the story is quite good, the development goes up and down. The mc is sometimes quite smart sometimes marvel accurate dumb and sometimes just insufferable
MC had potential but he wasted it. the plot could have been much better but it couldn't.,..... . .....,........... . ...................
Itβs good story and I love It but MC seems to be distracted or ignorent now as even with all his planning and equipment he kind of forgets to double check for main villains such as Trask,Shadow Lord,Magneto and Apokalypse.Also he needs to upgrade his suit with with Adamantium,Proto Adamantium,Vibranium and Uru as well as draw runes in the nanites with pym particiles by becoming smaller. Also where is the Fantastic 4,Dr Doom,Spiderman,Black Cat,Ghost Spider,Ava or Ghost,IronFist,Ghost Rider,Daredevil,Collen Wing,Jessika Drew,Luke Cage,Defenders,Guardians of the Galaxy etc.
A very good story isekai. Without a harem, probably this is the most important thing, purely for the sake of putting 5 I am writing this review.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
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Good story. But donno why author overcomplicate things. Keep things simple. It's either avengers or x-men. No need for both. And try to keep other dimensional beings limited to certain extent. Too many of them just takes the fun out of it. Had such great potential. Such a shame it fell short...
Not that good not that bad either....................................... .................................................................. .... ....
Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei.......................................................
I'm sorry I called you a plagiarist. It was an accident.. ..................................................................................................................................
Righto, good story... is Altered Mind on Hiatus? ................................. ......................................... __________
MC is supposed to be smart and have future knowledge considering he has read Marvel comics and knows the movies. Initially it was good but the later chapters, MC is nerfed and becomes dumb. Which is disappointing really.
story is good but getting convoluted for me. I know that's my problem. Never read many comics so I feel like I am getting lost. Still good.............................
Reveal SpoilerThe story is well written with a fairly stable upload schedule. The only area in which I find issue with the work is the main character and his interactions with others. This fanfiction is very straightforward and that can be a good thing, but due to this the story misses it on a lot of the detailed areas of the highly complex world that he has chosen as his setting. This leads to many of the characters feeling far too simple and the interactions stale.
Thank you Mr Author for a wonderful journey and please continue showering us with your brilliance. I don't get why I can't post what I have written and must continue typing until it reaches 140 words..
This story is perfect and in this sea of ββboring history, it is welcome. Guess what finds him boring was that the MC saw the domestic view with the avengers and become Bff with Tony Stark loll. And above all a harem. Do not listen to them and continue this beauty.
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Hmm interesting arc. Need more. Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.
Reveal SpoilerI love how you actually thought doug was powerful. He can barely fight thor and hulk could kill him 10x over without a sweat let alone anybody else in the marvel universe. Just vecause he can take down some humans and baseline superhumans does not mean he is powerful enough to even touch hulk at his best.
Does anyone know of a fanfic with a quality as good as this one? Its my first time reading a fanfic but now I want to try reading a few more
everythings good but I'm new here I'm already halfway through so wondering if one chapter week is normal because this is gold and if you make more you can make serious money and truly entertain people right when I started reading I voted with my power stones hope there will be more chapters weekly
Well, i overall is good, the writing quality is 4/5. In the story my only problem is the dialogs and the rush, men they are cringe, but the narrations is good. The story progresses really fast and the MC gets OP reaaally fast, i hate how rushed it is. The story progresses in a decent pace, you can see that the goal of the MC is get stronger but the main focus is recruit people and build up his things. There is a pleasant number of chapters aswell.
hope wanda doesn't get powers from mind stone like in mcu. She was a criminal in age of ultron but that was forgetten in mcu. ................
another nice chapter. Excited for this plot. Well the mc should destroy hydra. He is capable. another nice chapter. Excited for this plot. Well the mc should destroy hydra. He is capable.
Reveal SpoilerGood story man, but needs some depth. It's like watching a PowerPoint rather than a movie if you know what I mean.
well the story is quite good, the development goes up and down. The mc is sometimes quite smart sometimes marvel accurate dumb and sometimes just insufferable
MC had potential but he wasted it. the plot could have been much better but it couldn't.,..... . .....,........... . ...................
Itβs good story and I love It but MC seems to be distracted or ignorent now as even with all his planning and equipment he kind of forgets to double check for main villains such as Trask,Shadow Lord,Magneto and Apokalypse.Also he needs to upgrade his suit with with Adamantium,Proto Adamantium,Vibranium and Uru as well as draw runes in the nanites with pym particiles by becoming smaller. Also where is the Fantastic 4,Dr Doom,Spiderman,Black Cat,Ghost Spider,Ava or Ghost,IronFist,Ghost Rider,Daredevil,Collen Wing,Jessika Drew,Luke Cage,Defenders,Guardians of the Galaxy etc.
A very good story isekai. Without a harem, probably this is the most important thing, purely for the sake of putting 5 I am writing this review.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
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Good story. But donno why author overcomplicate things. Keep things simple. It's either avengers or x-men. No need for both. And try to keep other dimensional beings limited to certain extent. Too many of them just takes the fun out of it. Had such great potential. Such a shame it fell short...
Not that good not that bad either....................................... .................................................................. .... ....
Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei....................................................... Gostei.......................................................
I'm sorry I called you a plagiarist. It was an accident.. ..................................................................................................................................
Righto, good story... is Altered Mind on Hiatus? ................................. ......................................... __________
MC is supposed to be smart and have future knowledge considering he has read Marvel comics and knows the movies. Initially it was good but the later chapters, MC is nerfed and becomes dumb. Which is disappointing really.
story is good but getting convoluted for me. I know that's my problem. Never read many comics so I feel like I am getting lost. Still good.............................
Reveal SpoilerThe story is well written with a fairly stable upload schedule. The only area in which I find issue with the work is the main character and his interactions with others. This fanfiction is very straightforward and that can be a good thing, but due to this the story misses it on a lot of the detailed areas of the highly complex world that he has chosen as his setting. This leads to many of the characters feeling far too simple and the interactions stale.
Thank you Mr Author for a wonderful journey and please continue showering us with your brilliance. I don't get why I can't post what I have written and must continue typing until it reaches 140 words..
This story is perfect and in this sea of ββboring history, it is welcome. Guess what finds him boring was that the MC saw the domestic view with the avengers and become Bff with Tony Stark loll. And above all a harem. Do not listen to them and continue this beauty.
[img=recommend][img=recommend]tttrh Johann it to kumkum of ek TM us ek it ek hmm out to uff out ek uff sunn tej t enti ky thinking ek hmmgggjdjxja Usha de finish Usha ra du inn ya esa hi gyi jimm ga esa asa hu hii garde by jhilmil ye RDS hu inn Texas go kk ya
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Hmm interesting arc. Need more. Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.Hmm interesting arc. Need more.
Reveal SpoilerI love how you actually thought doug was powerful. He can barely fight thor and hulk could kill him 10x over without a sweat let alone anybody else in the marvel universe. Just vecause he can take down some humans and baseline superhumans does not mean he is powerful enough to even touch hulk at his best.
Does anyone know of a fanfic with a quality as good as this one? Its my first time reading a fanfic but now I want to try reading a few more
everythings good but I'm new here I'm already halfway through so wondering if one chapter week is normal because this is gold and if you make more you can make serious money and truly entertain people right when I started reading I voted with my power stones hope there will be more chapters weekly
Well, i overall is good, the writing quality is 4/5. In the story my only problem is the dialogs and the rush, men they are cringe, but the narrations is good. The story progresses really fast and the MC gets OP reaaally fast, i hate how rushed it is. The story progresses in a decent pace, you can see that the goal of the MC is get stronger but the main focus is recruit people and build up his things. There is a pleasant number of chapters aswell.
hope wanda doesn't get powers from mind stone like in mcu. She was a criminal in age of ultron but that was forgetten in mcu. ................
another nice chapter. Excited for this plot. Well the mc should destroy hydra. He is capable. another nice chapter. Excited for this plot. Well the mc should destroy hydra. He is capable.
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Good story man, but needs some depth. It's like watching a PowerPoint rather than a movie if you know what I mean.