Unlimited Gacha Spins

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Copier

Hope you like the story. If not then don't comment some pretty harsh comments as it made my mood in writing bad.

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Fraannxy

mc stupidಠ_ಠ...........................................................................................................................................................

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TyrantTron335

I hope that author doesn't drop the novel.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

😑 not cool.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Tobi_or_Not_to_be

Tobi dose understands that author is new to the writing community and Tobi is judging too quickly since the fanfic dosen't even have 15 chapters. Tobi feels the the idea of an OPMC with unlimited gacha is indeed an unique idea to many but execution of the fanfic is very wrong .While unlimited gacha dose sounds something never done before but stories with reality bending , unlimited shop points and unlimited wishes are the same . The characters and the world chosen is something tobi has not read before it dosen't provides that excitement for a new world overall the development of MC ,the Character design the writing quality all can be improved hope you take some of tobi's advice good luck for future novels/updates

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Buns1423

Plz Dont drop I need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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ScottyTheD

Get a native English speaker to edit for you, then rewrite the story. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs it was that bad. ........

LV 4

Lucifer515

Good novel . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Space_Time

შენი ამბავი ზედმეტად უხეშია. mc მოითხოვს უფრო საფუძვლიან აზრებს, ნაკლებ კონტიგენტურ აზროვნებას. პატიოსნად, მე ვთავაზობდი სხვა ავტორებს გადაამოწმონ პრემიუმ ანგარიშით (ცარიელზე) და მოხარული ვიქნები, თუ მეტი გაჩას ისტორიები არსებობდეს.

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Yukisoonn

I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️!!! I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️!!! I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️!!! I love it so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️!!!

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ThoTslayer_10l

Drop or continue ?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Afrendi_Eka

Bagus sekali ceritanya sangat interesting interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and interesting and 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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Sidik_Speed_3703

so far still good............. ,...................................................................so far still good............. ,...................................................................so far still good............. ,...................................................................so far still good............. ,...................................................................

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Da_G0AT

pl pls pls pls pls pls pls pls dont drop this iv seen too many ff getting dropped🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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nathan_nektor1369

I Like!