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3.12
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I really enjoyed how the book started explaining who she was and why she was this way I also liked how it jumped into her life and how she became the strong independent person that she was or that she will become in the book I really like how its explanatory it explains everything in detail and I really love the wording that was used
Really good start!! It brings you in and does not disappoint. Hope it keeps going, love to see where it goes in the future. It has the start of somthing amazing.
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This only about someone getting raped over and over again. This storyline needs more structure and a better plot in general. Also if you're going to write about someone getting raped you should give the reader's a heads up, because for those of us that have gone through it, gives us flash backs if not warned... I'm sorry if I come off as harsh but as a writer myself, I would want to be told if my story didn't make any sense and if it cause unnecessary anxiety/stress/pain for anyone..
Isnt written well. Was supposed to be about vampires and was just a poorly written sex novel. Needs to be rewritten or taken down. Very misleading
Not worth the resd sorry. You just jumped into a small scene and ended it with much confussion. Didnt know what was even happening. Writting skills lacked heavily
Horrible horrible writing! My ten year old can right better than this and the beginning was so promising! It’s really sad you stooped so Quickly into the nasty **** and with really crappy writing!
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I think the author wanted to write for a P*** company but got confused. Needs way more language and writing skills. Maybe try a different genre while you’re at it...
As a victim of rape you should warn your readers that someone gets raped twice within the first two pages. It's completely inappropriate and poorly written. Im unibstalling the app
I like the idea of the story. If this was just to get it out it’s a great start. But it defiantly needs to be proof read and edited. I hope you continue the story.
You could use a few more English and writing classes. No background of characters or abilities. Great ideas, you just need more description, it’s vague. I don’t know why these men are just going to town on this chick. What’s really going on.
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More details of environment and staging location to broaden the imagination for scenery reasons. Wish there was more to give an understanding of how the story transforms.
Honestly, I don't think it deserves any star what was written didn't have anything to do with vampires and there was really no story. So other than getting getting points for sending a review that's all this was good for. But best of luck anyways!
This book and the rest are so good so far,since I've started reading books off this app my favorite is romance with my boss,but that will change......
You don't post too often, and there isn't much background detail I don't mean to be harsh in all I like the detail provided I hope this ends...well this fat not very appealing and quite short. I haven't decided overall to be 3.2, because I wanted at LEAST a 3.9 and at most a 4
Need more information I think it is some way too dramatic and have less comedy vampire it is fictional and no exist . In my opinion it should not be too long too confusing that people can't understand
This was pretty realistic and I recommend you to read it! Writing quality is 5 stars Stability of updates is 5 stars Story Development is 5 stars Character design is amazing I gave it 5 stars World background is 5 stars
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