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Cassian Ven Dyke, the bastard son of a powerful ducal family, grew up in the slums of Veldora under the care of his father figure, sword master Russel. When Russel passed away, Cassian was left with only a silver necklace as his inheritance. After putting it on, Cassian was attacked by three psychotic thugs who tortured him in an attempt to steal the necklace. Refusing to give in, Cassian was ultimately stabbed through the heart with the very same necklace. Instead of dying, he mysteriously vanished as the necklace lodged itself in his heart. Just before disappearing, he heard an eerie message echo in his mind:
[True mana detected. Origin: Human...]
[Human detected. Compatibility with system: Confirmed.]
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Score: 8/10 On first look one might think think this is just a shallow lustful fantasy novel. But if you were to look deeper you will notice that the book has very good writing quality and pace. And a very honest approach to the story premise. The mc in the story is a curious child with not much information about the world(very horny as well). And guess what the mc acts exactly as the description. He asks questions when something new comes up exactly like a child. He gets angry when he dosent get what he wants and happy when he gets it. He has a naive approach to life and is easily tricked by adults. He is oblivious to hidden information because he dosent have enough emotional experience. And I love this fact about this novel. So many books loose this aspect. In order to write a great saga they overdramatize the mc’s mindset. But this book really tries to be realistic. I as a reader dosent mind if a mc is stupid, simp, emo, cold hearted, shy, brave, etc. but I really hate conflicting behaviors. And this book does not do that at all. Another good thing is the system is not overbearing. So many system novels just make the mc into a freak of nature, giving them borrowed power in the form of free skills and stats. This system is very fair it’s more like an instructor which supports the natural growth of the mc. Everything the mc achieves is through his hard work with the guidance of the system. The pacing if the story is also good. My dosent just become best warrior in the kingdom in 2 months. He is still a kid learning how to fight, honing his basics by 2 months. One can really see how overtime the mc is getting comfortable with the surrounding cast. And there is a good breaks between big story events in a way to have a realistic picture. Only things that irritates me is that the mc is too smart abt the horny stuff early on. Because I always have to ask the question ‘how?’ In conclusion, don’t just judge this book by this cover, there is much more to this novel than it seems. If you are a fan of slow paced light hearted novels I think this one is a good choice.
Not gonna be too objective in my review here. This novel ticks a lot of personal boxes for me. Good writing, decent development, and good character design. Lots of chaps spent on love scenes but very well written. Makes you think and feel what is intended. Wish the MC could get a real romance though. But he is free spirit. The one girl who could be in real relationship with him is aware of the other women. And she has all but said this means she can be with other men too. That's the one thing I don't like because it feels like what we all hate. But thankfully they have not really gone that far. Barely anything honestly and she does not appear much. Best to keep it that way if she will be others. If author actually depicts that happening, I don't doubt reader will drop this sad to say. When we get plot driving events though, they are exciting. Appreciate those when they happen.
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Warrior training system? More like Massage Training system. World background is good, so far there's little to no grammatical errors, story development? Don't see it, I'm finished with the free 40 chapters but honestly there's no major development on the sword training, on the MC's development, and his personality and chapters are mostly massages, like what? Mc for some reason seems so submissive, and normally 40 chapters on a novel there's something happening, but so far there's only been one and it's not that important maybe a little bit not much It's always message massage and massages like come on the title is so misleading
liked the start but as it went around ch 15+, the story is going nowhere. like i am at chapter 35( while writing this review) but there is no major change in the story or developement. What does the system do, what he practices, or what is his thinking not much is mentioned. and its more like he is a side mob who we see in when only other characters are around.
read omnistore system, great book but to much lemons overshadows the mc..Hope this will have allot less lemons than omnistore and alott more character growth.
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I wanted to write this review because I've been reading this for a while now and give others my opinion on it for the most part the story is good where the problems comes when you realize there's too many r18 chapters I like sex scenes in my novels but this story just overdoes it and it's not like his system is a dual cultivation system where he gets stronger by having sex it's called warrior training system so what's with all the sex scenes it just gets boring and still especially when they're such a good story to the author please don't add so many sex scenes in the future you can just skip over it and say they had sex and go on to the next morning there's no need to write so many sex scenes just add a few here and there the second problem with the novel is called warrior training system but he barely uses his system and the quest system gives him haven't even been completed like the massage quest still hasn't been finished you would think you would complete as many quests as he can to get stronger faster but the MC doesn't do any of that instead of focusing on getting stronger he's more focused on what skirt to get under and that's annoying so I hope you can fix these things and continue your story because it's really good does it only problems I have with it so please keep up the good work and I hope you don't feel offended by my review
75 chaps and mc is just learning the basics of the power system which in he is not even level 1… it’s not bad but it’s too slow, the background world is not fleshed out much in 70 plus chaps he stays in the mansion of the powerful family for most of it while begin a pervert Snice with his master which has condition where she is always uncomfortable and needs to be massaged every couple hours
fan of this author since SONG pls continue it. as for this new work it seems good. it's starting but more story oriented then other. haven't seen any snu snum but knowing the author there will be lot in future. looking forward to future updates.
I like this one then the other till now. Still 12 ch so can't say more. Give it a try. And autjor add more lemons.[img=More pls][img=update]
**Please note I only read as far as chapter 44 I think the story has a lot of promise but simply found it progressing too slowly for my liking. The writing quality was very good and the characters were very well written, I certainly found myself liking the protagonist, his character in particular was well thought out, well written and realistic. In fact, despite the story taking place in a fantasy World it stays quite realistic throughout. However, there are a lot of words per chapter but the progression of the plot was just too slow to keep me genuinely engaged. But again, that might have changed in future chapters and if you like slower stories with detailed characters and World, then this is one for you. Also be prepared for lots of massage content. Not a plus or a minus, just...lots of massaging.
Author pls give Mc some backbone and the story is in a fantasy world, use fantasy Elements. Mc needs to get strong learn magic or swordmanship but instead he is some kind of detective play. It can be really good story but it should atleast represent the Title of it!
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author I hope this novel is 1500+ or atleast 1000+ loyal harem and a good story big and meaningful harem not only physical relationship don't drop it author fantastic book so far just hidden gem underrated pls reply to my questions
it's nice to get a book with somewhat balanced pace, people may like fast pace novel that's alright but those one usually change the character to much without any understanding why his behaviour changed so much so this one is nice
A little bit slow paced and MC lacks greater ambitions but other than that nice world background, good variety of characters and high potential story
I understand people who are mad at the beginning of this book, but you also have to understand bros like 13 was a orphan of course he's going to do everything he can to stay in the good graces of those helping him plus at this point in the story he's not even a little bitch anymore the novel is starting to turn into one of my favorite on this app if he keeps heading in this direction.
I like the authors other works. this novel starting is better then his other. the main character doesnt seem like a psychopath for now and I hope he stays that way.
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