/ Fantasy / We Can Trek It
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[Your only goal is to safely escort the three children across the desert. Achieve it however you can. So as to not get lost, follow the compass.]
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This novel is my submission for the writing prompt contest 57. I'm happy to say that I came up with something that can fit all eight keywords! Please enjoy and check out my other novel, Planet Dragunity~
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Many thanks to Alex0224 for making the cover and whoever is the rightful owner of the images used!
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I have since decided to put off working on this novel. There will be no more updates (for a while).
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Love the conflict, can't wait to read what that raging guy is going to do next. Similar to the first chapter of your book, I sometimes had the feeling of you wanting to explain stuff rather than showing it with actions. Maby that's the style that will make you sucessfull, however, I think it feels kinda strange sometimes. Also, I think in the beginning there is a "long" time of storytelling without a mayor conflict - maby no problem for people that read a lot, for generation instagram with an attention span of a few seconds I think it could be a reason to stop reading before even coming to the interesting parts, though. But, definetly keep on writing these nice sayings or whatever you want to call them, like the black hole in the stomach or that thing with the rule of gravity, these little things make the not - so - exciting parts fun to read. Waiting for the next chapter... (:
Although I'v only read one chapter, I believe this story should be more popular! Just by reading this, I can tell the author put a lot of time and effort into their work. And not to mention, I'm really enjoying the story so far. There are many characters introduced in the first chapter, and I got a feel for all of their personalities quite easily! I can't say much about the world background as it's only the first chapter, but I hope you guys will give this story a try. ^_^
Interesting book covers up all the points. Must give it a chance. I like the first chapter, full of all the aspects I like. I rate it 5 Hope the future chapters will be interesting tooooooo
Interesting start for the writing contest! The way the characters interacted made them feel real. I'm looking forward to seeing more and how you will integrate all parts of the prompt! There aren't any errors per se in grammar, but there are tons of awkward sentences and run-ons that could be split to sound better. Make sure to add a cover someday! Keep it up author! >3</
Very nice story so far, I loved of how the characters interacted with each other, and it seems very lighthearted and fun. Great job on the story so far, and I hope for more updates in the future.