Xternity: Eternal Gladiator

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Augustdsuza

The plot building is out of this world. The emotions of Cas are so well portrayed that I felt as if it was me. Excellent work Author. Looking forward to more chaps from you!!!

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Paul_Okito

Wow, this novel is excellent. I love the way you made the first chapter. Your explanation wasn't much, but yet it gave a clear picture of the characters.This is the second novel I have rated 5 star. Your book is 100% awesome.

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NocturnOwl

My readthrough was very enjoyable. The author has really put their own spin on the new world trope. Going in an unexpected route to most. The transition to this new world was amazing and horrifying, really well described. Letting me fit myself into the mcs shoes during the process. I'll start off with writing quality. Descriptions are very intricate and fluid. Painting the image of the characters very well. Followed by giving the reader a good depiction on the mcs process in this massive change of his existence. Punctuation is very consistent throughout my whole readthrough, making it an easy read in the process. Stability of updates. So far the author has released 4 chapters as their start. I can't comment much on it because of how early it is, Its a strong start but please continue updating author :D Story development is well paced. Giving the reader something to look forward to with each chapter. That and the constant unfolding of the new world and how the MC is dealing with it. The progression from point to point is concise and gives the reader just enough without boring them. The 4th chapter was great at showing the reader the scope of the story going forward for Cas. Character design. Each character focused on has its own background followed by their own set of stats and characteristics. Visualising these characters becomes quite easy considering the amount of attention put into them. World background. Very unique considering how the new world trope is done so often. This novel succeeds at differentiating itself from the typical trope. Going in a very unexpected direction for the transition to his new life. The reader is brought into the same position as Cas as this fantasy-like game world slowly develops more and more beyond the usual. All in all if you're looking for something with a unique direction in the new world genre I would highly recommend this. Lots of attention to detail on character and world delivery. With interesting tropes and directions alongside this. A great starting point, I really enjoyed it keep going strong Fauxflux :D

Am throughly enjoying this read and look forward to seeing where the story goes next, I've got to say the parts where Raeja subtly reacts make me feel warm and fuzzy, I'll take two please haha!

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Slow_Neptune

This is a well-written and intriguing story. The world at first seems a little generic but the author describes the world in such rich detail that I couldn't help but get absorbed in it. It was really fun seeing the MC, Cas, navigate the world of Xternity. I can't wait for future updates and I will follow this story with great interest.

can't get enough! alot of plots are being foreshadowed! I grow more curious with each chapter to see how Cas will react. this tournament is gonna be awesome.

The author does a great job of building tension and creating a sense of unease throughout the story. I'm excited to see what twists and turns are in store for Casimiro in Xternity

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JingLuoTouJi

Wow, what a thrilling start to this story! Casimiro's heroic actions and subsequent journey into an experimental plane of existence had me hooked from the first page

I'm not sure how I feel about the "deranged doctor" trope. It can be a bit overdone and sometimes veers into ableist territory.~~~~~~~..................

I'm a little confused about the transition from Cas saving the child to being in the underground facility. It feels like there might be some missing information or context.