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Vivian lived her whole life protecting her tribe from vampires, but she knew that even though she was able to fight neck and neck with Brown Vampires, she would never be able to stand her ground against higher class vampires from the lands of the Yins and Yangs.
One fated day, vampires attacked her village in search of Hunter. This woman would never have imagined setting foot on the land full of creatures who have wronged her species until the wicked vampires kidnapped someone who was important to her. With no one else to call family, she sets off a journey to save Hunter from the hands of the group of vampires who call themselves, Scar.
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Nothing much I could really critique. It is beautifully written. Text is devoid of errors—prose, as well as dialogue, flows naturally. All I could say is good job, and keep on writing. Recommended to those who like the genre. A must-read, I must say.
I really enjoy the take on vampires and the setting of the world so far. I also like the lack of grammatical errors , and well written work. I highly recommend this to anyone.
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Wow, it's zero comeback oofff!!! About Yang Nation, an Eastern Fantasy...(?), why Eastern Empire has a vampire oh Jiang Shi? Just kidding! Writing Quality Good..oh yeah...about Vivian went to Yang Empire? Your writing skill is good! Grammar is good! I can read it and understand it well! Stability of Updates It such a waste for good story is slow to update, Oh may...you are quite, *ehem* (note: this is not rude or something bad word)...anyway, it's good to make a hanging ending, so the readers will "seek more". Story Development I like it, but I think the phase is too fast? You need to explain Vivian in more specific detail as well as the Empire. Character Design Hmm...I can't say much because I still don't grasp Vivian's true characters. World Background I can say the world concept is interesting. I just need to wait for more chapters then.
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