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This world is a perfectly normal, average, run-of-the-mill world. It’s exactly what you would expect: there’s some crime and instability, but otherwise, the human race continues to survive. There’s absolutely nothing special about this world at all.
Except, there is one exception to the averageness.
There lives one man. The one man who keeps this world from becoming anything less than average.
This man is the Strongest Man.
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This is only 4 chapters only, and I do believe it will far be better in the future. So far there is a build up with the scene setting and whatnot. The author can clearly paint the picture via dialogue Unfortunately most of the dialogue felt like it was rushed as well as being the form of a manga without the pictures. The constant "screaming" of characters a.k.a caps locked sentences made it seem like the author's keyboard was smashed. No offense, but it unbearable to read another character screaming their guts out and it was hard to take it seriously if it was done often. World building will take place further one but amp up details on the surroundings. I mean with the GTA and One Punch Man reference does convince me this is Earth but we are going through the world with the protagonist as we read on, so just put more details on the world, maybe twist it on your own. Are there say, other beings that exist but the Strongest Man doesn't know yet? While I appreciate that the author isn't doing an info dump like some other novels I've read on this site, but further insight before the screaming dialogues would be better. Protagonist is thankfully NOT another tragic bullied otaku gamer orphan who gets "the system", so thanks author for that, but I do encourage you use the super elements to make him stand out. Go all out if you have to. Surprise your readers further. I'm not a comedy reader so excuse me if this is meant to be a comedy with the first and second chapters, or not. I couldn't really tell based on the fast paced atmosphere of the characters jumping into dialogue exchange. There's a lot of time and room to improve and sharpen this book further author. You can do better. Good luck.
Well... this is an early review and I'm happy to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the heck out of this novel🤣 our Mc is Bella funny, Oro right? the strongest man... the dynamic of his double sided life is hilarious....whether as a delivery guy or a 'hero'... I enjoyed it... the novel keeps escalating and the story is progressing really well.... Author is you were looking to kill someone with your comedy... then you definitely succeeding.. Fantastic book...Great Work author..
In a lot of ways, this reads more like an anime script than a novel. At the same time, I actually kind of like that. It has a faster pace, and it doesn't feel like there are more than one or two lines without some kind of action or humour taking place. If you're looking for a genuinely funny and easy to read story with some fairly good characters, then you should probably read this novel!
The MC is absurd and I love it. The story starts out with the MC being the most powerful being on the planet, so I'm curious to see how this plays out. 11/10!
Based on my early review, it's a bit paced, but I can catch up with it. Your writing is good but there are some grammar issues. I'm not that professional at reviewing someone's book but that's my opinion. Overall, your story is pretty well done and I hope you, as the author will make some improvement, just a bit.
Once again, I'm diving into a contest. Who knows, maybe this'll become the next big thing? In the meantime, I'm just gonna go grab some food. Anyone want my fries?