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it was really good but when you did more worlds then then it did go stray you should just do how he died which you did and then just edo tensei be awakened with all hokages FIRST,SECOND,THIRD,MCFOURTH,MINATO and with them to the end
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That world jumping came out of nowhere. I would like a continuation of this even if the ending there isn't that bad, but I just would like to see the main character just win considering he should be op. Also I kinda think this probably should've just stayed a Naruto fanfic.
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I love the book but after he died the first time I was a little lost I would rather he been in a coma but even though I was confused I did understand eventually and you made it work in the long run next time don't rush the ending though as much as I love how you made him have a moment with a old friend it seemed rushed
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The story was good but ended up spoiling in the end and the entry into other worlds was meaningless, a great main character but it was poorly developed!!!!
it’s not so good neither bad.if any one had nothing to read than he/she can read. shhsjsjjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjxjdjjdjcj
Good book but also sucked I hated the fact that the book is supposed to be about the anime naruto yet he goes into a different animr halfway into the story, like what?
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Honestly, i have no idea how this novel got such a high score. Story : just follows cannon from the 2nd ninja war, and the only difference is that the mc kills every time he has a chance. grammar : utterly horrible, does not know the difference between He/She/It Mc is both male and female, good attempt tho. Ending most sentences with : "Says he" or "Say She"
Finally a good read, I'm sick of crazy fetish fanfiction in this platform, and there are too f**king many of them. Am I the only one who is normal, or I am the weird one? Anyway, this story really amazing, at least its give me some hope to find some gems like this in the platform, THANK YOU...!
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A story about how the mc bulldoze everything without caring about important details and plot. Its not a story for me but those who like OP mc might want to read it.
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I'm so glad that this is a no harem novel. I've been reading really great novels but they mostly have a harem in it and it's driving me insane so this is a great breather. The stories great as well. No harem For life
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it was really good but when you did more worlds then then it did go stray you should just do how he died which you did and then just edo tensei be awakened with all hokages FIRST,SECOND,THIRD,MCFOURTH,MINATO and with them to the end
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That world jumping came out of nowhere. I would like a continuation of this even if the ending there isn't that bad, but I just would like to see the main character just win considering he should be op. Also I kinda think this probably should've just stayed a Naruto fanfic.
Reveal Spoiler I love the book but after he died the first time I was a little lost I would rather he been in a coma but even though I was confused I did understand eventually and you made it work in the long run next time don't rush the ending though as much as I love how you made him have a moment with a old friend it seemed rushed
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The story was good but ended up spoiling in the end and the entry into other worlds was meaningless, a great main character but it was poorly developed!!!!
it’s not so good neither bad.if any one had nothing to read than he/she can read. shhsjsjjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjxjdjjdjcj
Good book but also sucked I hated the fact that the book is supposed to be about the anime naruto yet he goes into a different animr halfway into the story, like what?
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Honestly, i have no idea how this novel got such a high score. Story : just follows cannon from the 2nd ninja war, and the only difference is that the mc kills every time he has a chance. grammar : utterly horrible, does not know the difference between He/She/It Mc is both male and female, good attempt tho. Ending most sentences with : "Says he" or "Say She"
Finally a good read, I'm sick of crazy fetish fanfiction in this platform, and there are too f**king many of them. Am I the only one who is normal, or I am the weird one? Anyway, this story really amazing, at least its give me some hope to find some gems like this in the platform, THANK YOU...!
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A story about how the mc bulldoze everything without caring about important details and plot. Its not a story for me but those who like OP mc might want to read it.
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I'm so glad that this is a no harem novel. I've been reading really great novels but they mostly have a harem in it and it's driving me insane so this is a great breather. The stories great as well. No harem For life
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