I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)

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Takumoto

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InfinityAndBeyond

So many high ratings when the story is not that good, i wonder if the low ratings are erased. Why the hate? at the start it's good but as the story goes it became boring and the plot is very forced. So forced that it force me to drop this tr*sh. There's no difference from original, why read this when you can read the original?

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ArcSolomon

I really didn't want to do a review for this ff. But I can't help myself. I'll write things that I don't like so no one like me burns out. For me, I didn't see anything that I can call good in this ff. 1- If you can get from the info-dumps to the dialogs, most of the dialogs are stiff. 2- I was able to endure 10 chapters of this torture and during these 10 chapters there was constant time-skip. 3- Chapters are in a continuous loop. Mc arrives somewhere at the end of the previous episode. At the beginning of the new episode there is a 3-5 month time-skip. We listen to mc's monologue about what he went through during this time-skip. A lot of info-dumps are thrown at us. One or two useless dialogues (the dialogues are useless because we came to read mc's diary.) some skill upgrades and then the episode ends. 4- Also, in the previous world of mc, all the anime were available, but it turns out that only Tensura was not available. Yeah, mc doesn't know the plot. How exciting..

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ImpishWolf

Utter garbage. Instead of a Fanfic might as well call it a Tensura side story or spin off with a disappointing protagonist with op ability that he can't properly use. Story follows the canon with miniscule change and instead of anything interesting new, you would only get what rimuru did on the canon in a summary. mc is basically a useless side character. so much potential but poor execution. you can barely feel any emotion from the writing. things feel dull like a history book. honestly, most chinese fics are better than this and if you have read chinese fics you will know how bad they are. anyway, I dropped it at chapter 18. idk if author improves

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Morgan_Sinn_2309

I’m glad to see that this has made its way onto WebNovel. I have read multiple chapters ahead on ff.net and will be stoked to read them from here. Onto the actual story. The premise is fantastic, the world building is great. You had me hooked and always wanting more as I finish a chapter. Looking forward to seeing just how you continue to develop the story.

This story is great, by far the best reincarnated slime fanfic I’ve come across. The main character is cool and I like that there is a mix of him doing his own thing and getting involved in canon. I usually instantly hate any novel where the Mc reveals he is reincarnated, but since he doesn’t know the plot of slime world the author actually pulls it off and makes him seem like a actual character in the world rather than some op self insert mucking around. Not sure that I described that properly, basically it’s great and I’m pumped for more 👍

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Wil_Unterholzner_2400

LOVE IT! really good quality writing has one of my favorite animes as a fanfiction and a strong oc? WHO ALSO DOESNT FOLLOW RIMURU!!!! JUST PERFECTION! CHEFS KISS

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Ep_E_X

It recently became too cumbersome to read.. Translation Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate

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Kakukami

Ahem, First off, I would like to say, peak fiction. Double reincarnation is not something you see everyday and it was a nice touch leading up to the beginning of the main story. If you like: An MC that grows strong rather quickly yet having good development and relationships around him, then this is the fic for you.

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Daniel_Marchan_3773

Me encanta este fanfic hasta ahora no he podido notar nada dañino ni malo , solo hermosura de fanfic 🤓🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄🤓🤓😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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Vitor_Lindo

Lixo qual é a graça de dois reincarnado pó 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

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Asel213

Previously, when you wrote the voice of the sage, it was in parentheses. Give it back. This greatly simplifies the concept of who is speaking. Considering that the sage is a frequent guest in your home, the author.

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rbp

the way it was written was boring. mc was the one explaining everything that is happening in the story, like we are reading his diary. actions, conversation between characters, their characteristics etc. was portrayed or written plainly boring no excitement at all.

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Gratiz_

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say

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M_OB

one of the best tensura fanfic I've read, thought why mc is not wooing the girls ;>....btw keep at the good work nice fanfic author

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mercurystarship

Really enjoying the read so far! While some scenes feel like a rerun of Tensura with the MC swapping in for Rimuru, I can see the story starting to carve its own path. Excited to see where you take it, author! Keep up the awesome work.

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Archmage145

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