/ Fantasy / Will of chaos
概要
The Mc reincarnates in a world of magic and adventure as a Leech, follow his adventure in this mysterious and exciting world as he goes from the weakest creature to the shadow being that everyone is afraid of. Will he pursue the path of strength alone? Or without realizing it he will become the king of the greatest empire that ever lived.
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This is my first story and English is not my native language, I am using Google translator to translate the story for me, I accept opinions and questions in the comments for this week's chapter.-------‐--------‐-----------------------------------------------------------------
I intend to make this a long story so all the development of the Mc and the world will be slow for a proper construction, be warned.
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I know the first few chapters have some errors, but I've improved my writing as I progressed through the story, after 10 chapters there won't be that many errors.
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Male protagonist, non-human protagonist, evolution, adventure, action, harém, fantasy.
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I don't like the herem part it's too common and honestly it's just a waste of time I think it slows down the MC's progress by 80% because of so many factors that come with having so many girls around him constantly distracting him thus making progress shower[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] but otherwise from that everything is okay
Really a good concept with reincarnating as a leech, pretty good ideas, and world creation, this work can turn out to be something great. Way to go author.
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not bad, but neither is it good. the book follows the reincarnation of the MC in a fantasy world. This book has the same premise as epic of caterpillar and goblin evolution. While the character is logical he is also only pseudo ethical. Basically his morals are pretty loose and his bottom line of what he will do is pretty low. Much like the books above the MC gains power by assimilation of his enemies. The MC also gains followers by saving them or forcing them to submit, he never actually wins anyone over the any other way. Based on what I've read so far, writing quality will probably start to suffer as more characters are added, as current cast already lacks depth. Writer does attempt to build side characters through doing pov chapters for them, but it all just seems like feeler material and doesn't really connect you with the character. Lastly there are alot of they that should I or him that should be I or her. Grammar errors kind of take away from the story. Over all this is a decent story that is replica of novels already on the site.
dont read this, mc super beta, he collects a lot of girls but doesn't do anything, even when he sleeps and is hugged by some girls he still refuses to do it lol....
Superb and thrilling story line that's enough to make anyone's day when he's getting bored. Looking forward to get more and more....Best of luck
The novel goes well at first. Later on MC is nonsense, his brain does not work, his behavior becomes an anime hero, he becomes a hypocrite, he plays the good person. My goals are as follows, he says what they do is different nonsense. I have never seen a smart, sensible MC who has such a trick. None of them use the potentials of the cheat. In the hands of someone like aizen or orachimaru we can see a really sensible trick.
Good novel but i will not be reading it anymore the story is great everything is great but sadly i will not be reading for the simple reason that I DESPISE HAREMS in my opinion they ruin novels, at the beginning there was red flags but i had hope it was nothing, but next i will list the red flags i noticed ibuku talking about getting women for mc, enslaving the Erica and Diana and finally the one that made the authors intention clear Erica lying on mc’s chest with her arms and legs wrapped around him, and him not waking her up because she was ‘Cute and Innocent’ not Also author please if your hoing to make a harem novel put it in the tags. YOU HAD MY HOPES UP
ahhh... this wouldve become so good if after his vampire evolution he wouldve gained a normal height. But this author decided to keep him as tall as a child, destroying the possible hint of romance that coulve accentuated the story and bond between the characters. Such a bad choice even though the story itself was good in spite of the bad translation (?) or just the bad use of pronouns.
Great story although i would reccommend the author that a better cover and name can do wonders for this story...............................................
Idea of the story is great. The MC got reincarnated in a whole new world. Character and background of the story is well described. The only problem is writing. There a little bit grammatical mistakes but they can be ignored easily as the story has a smooth pace. All and all though the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
This novel has a good concept but is extremely boring. Instead of progressing with a story the author spends time going through a different side characters POV almost every chapter. It becomes annoying very quickly. The skills and levels are also translated wrong. One chapter he will unlock a skill, then 40 chapters later he unlocks the same skill again even though he has it. The same can be said about levels. If the author focuses on the story rather then the POV of the harem it would be 4-5 star quality. But due to the above reasons and translations it’s barely 2.5 star quality.
I love this story and the many new things the author has such as the way mc reincarnated and his new body and the concept of levels and stats and I also like the fact that mc smart as well and calculates things good since he used to create games in his past life. (Btw for some reasons this gave me the urge to go search how to get rid of a leech from your body)
this novel is Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat!
The story is great and just only a few grammatical flaws along the way but it can practice. Also some usage of words and terms such as for example, the word "drug", instead of using that, you can used the term "medicine" so it would not look negatively. I know these two words are the same but the usage of these terms are different if you applied it into sentence 😊 Overall, I love it and keep up the work, author! 😊
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great book sometimes there is a pronoun swap in conversations but still story is intresting , right pacing and good development of chas and the world .sad that its so underrated .AND for the author .......
In my opinion this is great. The only thing I do not like about the story is that sometimes it seems like the MC has plot armor. (when he was a leech)
This is not a genre that I would usually read, but it intrigued me a lot! I absolutely enjoyed the world building and the characters! I have absolutely nothing to complain about here. Keep it up, author 👏🏼👏🏼
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its trash and boring , i can not go past 40 chapter. what a waste of time.it started good but it went down. he is just collecting girls no world building nothing