Novel ini menceritakan bagaimana seorang anak setengah malaikat yang berjuang untuk menyelamatkan umat manusia dan mencari tahu kebenaran akan dirinya, siapa, dan apa potensi terbesar dalam dirinya. Anak yang membawa kehidupannya kedalam dunia fantasi dari sisi-sisi kehidupan manusia.

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Apakah umat manusia bisa terselamatkan??? ikuti cerita Elaiaz menyelamatkan umat manusia dalam Fall Angel : cried over fear
Fa :Cor
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UNDER CONSTRUCTION. RELEASED TOO EARLY. COME BACK LATER.

(Warning: the story may contain grammatical errors, and will be revised shortly.)

A girl who wants to be nothing but ordinary, ventures out to the Shen Residence to live under a new identity. 

When she comes across Xanju (a strange town built on water), she uncovers a world full of mystery and intrigue. 

What lies ahead of her is a grueling path full of obstacles, unlikely friendships, and a challenge only she can take. Will she be able to conquer her lingering fear of attention?

To find out, click on chapter 1 and begin reading!

Spoilers for volumes 01 to 05!!
Hello readers, author of the novel here. Volume 06 is almost finished and will begin to be uploaded daily probably later today. I know it seems weird considering that I said I would take a break after volume 05 considering the last chapter was something like five days ago, but the thing is, I actually wrote the last chapter of vol. 05 a loooong time ago.
It's just that instead of updating two chapters a day I decided to slow down and updated one chapter per day. Thus I managed to have a lot more space to breathe. God bless the automatic uploading system!
So anyway, before going into the next volume I would like to take a look back just like last time, but instead of talking about how much I love working on this book, I would this time try and point out all of the things that pissed me off about it.
For a while now I have been doing something called "Review swap" with other writers, where we read a bit of each others's novels and try to make a review from our experiences.
I decided that it could be cool to try and review my own novel and see what problems I could find with it, so let's do this then.
Here are my top 10 things I hate about my novel:
1 - I'm an absolute disaster when it comes to detailing things. What I mean by that is that many times a scene will just say "There was a young girl, there was a city, there was a creature", and that would be it. What was the girl's hair color? What was she wearing? How tall was she? Was she thin or fat? What did the city looked like? Stuff like that I always forget to detail properly and it always makes me fear that it will be to vague for the reader to picture in it's head.
The worst offender is probably the character of Ashley. I think it took me something like five chapters for me to actually say what she looked like because I legit forgot to give he a design.
2 - Speaking of forgetting, I keep forgetting my own lore!! There were so many times where I would write a development and then I would read early chapter and find out "Shoot!! These things don't match!". Like, I wrote that Evlin was the only Expert magician in the world below the age of twenty, but then she imidietly fights the prince who is about her age and is also using expert magic.
To fix that I had to explain in later chapters that the prince was actually using white crystals during Ashley's conversation with Xadi.
Probably the biggest wasted opportunity however was Daren's fear of heights. Until someone pointed out in the comments, I had totally forgotten that Daren was also afraid of falling just like Evlin. This really pisses me off because during the Evlin x Daren fight, her strategy consists of making Daren fall and this could have been a great opportunity for me to explore his character development since he did overcome his fear in the chapter "Silver hair" (Which was also one of my favorite chapters btw and I completely forgot to put on my favorite chapters list!!! See how easy it is for me to forget things??).
I try to address this up in volume 06, but man... What a huge, huge wasted opportunity for Daren and Evlin to talk about their shared fear...
03 - I keep focusing on Evlin too much. Yeah, this is just straight-up favoritism, no excuses about it... During the fight against Boris it honestly would have been a great chance to put the spotlight on Lilith, but I imidietly knock her out and make Evlin fight instead. Same thing with the fight with Marcus. Everyone gets knocked out in seconds and only Evlin remains left to fight. I need to stop putting so much focus and Evlin and let more characters shine.
Don't worry thought, I feel like I handled this really well in volume 06!
04 - Speaking of fights... I suck at doing fights! Yeah, I think I mentioned in volume 03 but I never know when it's the right time to end a fight. The battle with Marcus honestly made me feel like I could have done much more... I feel like in the hands of a better writer that fight could have been much more epic... But that brings another problem... Which is...
05 - I'm too soft on my cast. I mean... Ok, no I'm not... "Fragile Heart" is living proof that I have no problems giving characters a hard time. But when it comes to physical damage I always get really nervous and get cold feet. Sure they will get hurt or stabbed or whatever... But I always hesitate when it comes to causing some real damage.
Going back to the Marcus fight, I feel like I could have made him much scarier if one of the characters had lost a hand or a leg or something... But I just didn't have the guts to do that.
In fact, originally, the reason Evlin couldn't fly with sphinx was because the hunters were supposed to have cut off his wings. But again... I just found it too cruel and made it so Sphinx would inherit Evlin's fear instead.
06 - Every single Evlin fight ends the same way. She makes a gauntlet and punches someone in the face or stomach. I kinda joke that this is her signature move, but yeah, I need to work on that.
07 - My bizarre obsession with ten chapters for volume. For some reason I keep trying to finish the volumes all in ten chapters as if I was handling a season on a netflix show. Because of that, things will sometimes wrap up a little too rushed. I mean, the first three volumes came out fine since there wasn't so much plot yet... But volumes 04 and 05 I feel like I should have added more stuff. Starting from volume 06, volumes will probably go on for twelve or fifteen chapters so that I can have more space to build up the premise, explore the premise, and finish things up in a proper climax.
08 - My other bizarre obsession with changing the status quo. This is more of a volume 01 problem, is not that big of a deal right now... But during volume one I just could not stop changing the status quo.
I just imagine the reader going, "Oh, guess we will follow Daren's adventures with Marceus then! Switch!! Oh... Guess we will be following Marceus time serving the Goddess then! Switch!! Ok... Guess we will be following Marcus serving the goddess then Switch!! ... Will... Will we follow Daren and his team waking up from their sleep? Switch!! Evlin...? Who the heck is Evlin???"
09 - The bad grammar. I am not native English speaker so for the longest time I had no idea that you were supposed to use "I" in caps in sentences instead of "i". I installed the "Grammarly" plug-in to help me with that, but I still keep finding so many mistakes whenever I return to old chapters...
10 - And the last thing that I hate about my novel, which is kinda also part of number 05 and 07's problem, my bad guys lose too easily... Because I keep trying not to hurt Evlin and the gang too much and I keep trying to keep volumes condensed, it sometimes feels like my villains will suddenly run out of hp just so we can move on.

I think that's enough bashing my own novel for now... Let's hope I can learn from my mistakes and can do better next time... Enjoy volume 06 Coming tonight, something around 18:00 pm Gmt+1.
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Never mind! The timer for the chapter release came out wrong and I can't hide it again... Huh... Enjoy the early chapter release I guess...
If possible, please leave a comment with some feedback. It helps me more than you can imagine!

The living weapon has vanished from the public eye.

After centuries of non-stop fighting against evil and realizing his battle would never end, he decided to abandon humanity in the hopes of finally finding some peace in his life.

Thus, he decided to erase his own memories and rejuvenate his body into that of a small child in an attempt to get a second chance at living.

But after making his announcement, the whole world decided to embark on a giant search to see who could get their hands on the blessed sword of the gods first, and obtain its power to themselves.

The only clue as to where his location might be rests on a young girl who fights using a wooden crossbow as her weapon of choice.

Can this girl find the old warrior and restore his faith in humanity while trying to survive the dangers of this magical world?

Pride: With that we have this take care of now. That monster must not return.

Inside Koyama' mind.

Spencer: Could it be? 

Spencer felt something strange behind him turning to look he found all of his companions in fear. All of them couldn't move from the fear.

Albion: What is that, why am i feeling fear?
Spencer: I think i know what that creature is but it shouldn't cause fear to the two of you guys, Albion and Ddraig. 
Spencer: "Wait the Oozaru doesn't contain chains and i feel that it looks different, maybe it's the mutation on his bloodline, but there existed cases when other similarly had the sayajin bloodline and other powers, what could be different in his situation."

Turning his head towards Koyama. He found in location of Koyama there was a dark with purple veins cocoon and behind it was a huge faint shadow of a 1000 meters tall black creature looking Oozaru. It had chains on it's limbs restraining it. A crown on the top of it's head. An ancient armour covering it's body. Beneath it's armour it seem as dragon scales instead of fur. Purple marks like veins along it's scales.

Outside in the space.

Grand Priest: It's the Primordial Oozaru, but there exists changes since last time.
Zen'Oh: It's a mutation. He was a already difficult opponent to face now this.
Whis: Father could you explain to us what is this 'Primordial Oozaru'.
Grand Priest: It's an ancient creature born since the beginning of the world. The sayajins are descendants from it, but this one looks different as you can see it has scales, those marks, yet the most weird is the crown on top of it's head.
Beerus: Grand Priest could you tell us the reason me and Whis feel fear towards it and why it's so terrifying.
Grand Priest: I was getting to that. As it is common knowledge the sayajins are warrior race, which can get more powerful by recovering from their injuries and struggling in their fights. Now my question why didn't this race had a higher position in chain of powers of the world. Whis you may know about Yamoshi story right?
Whis: Yes he one of the few pure heart sayajin that existed. He was the first to achieve the Super Sayan Form and then the Super Sayan God. He attempted to wipe the evil in the sayajin race, but it wasn't enough and he die along with his five companions. If i am not wrong their origin planet was planet Sadala.
Grand Priest: Yes it's all true except the fact that he was the first Super Sayan. The sayajin race isn't truly evil. There is a saying that 'you can't gain something, without losing something first' the sayan race is one of the example they possess unlimited potential, their Zenkai, S-Cells and the Oozaru form, but their self-control to begin is extremely hard, not mentioning their control over their abilities. Planet Vegeta till some years ago didn't have such problem as they were garbage compared to Yamoshi which belongs to the ancient sayan. Then there is the tale of the Legendary Super Sayan where every 1000 years appears one sayajin who can use the Sayan Race Powers to the max. That is true and false at the same time. 
Whis: What do you mean father?
Grand Priest: The Legendary Super Sayan is a requirement.
Beerus: Requirement?
Grand Priest: It's a requirement to awaken the Primordial Sayan.
Beerus: So basically that kid is awakening is bloodline. Isn't it taking to long to do it?
Grand Priest: The problem is that the Primordial is a lot tougher to control than the Legendary Super Sayan. Me and Lord Zen'Oh had to unite against one that existed in the beginning. We almost die that time. I also don't know why it's taking to so long.

BA-DUMP
BA-DUMP
BA-DUMP

Looking at the previously cocoon it started to glow in a golden light.

The same was happening in Koyama' mind.

BA-DUMP
BA-DUMP

*Ding* [Congratulations host for achieving hidden requirements and completing 'Supreme Bloodline' of Dragon Ball World.]

Supreme Bloodline(Dragon Ball World) - It's a bloodline only achieved when host completes hidden requirements. Supreme bloodline is the most powerful bloodline, it got fused with Blood Assimilation Ability. It can absorb any bloodline, strength it's powers and negate it's weakness. 

Bloodlines: Legendary Super Sayan, Demon(Demon, Frost Demon), Namekian, Majin, Dragon, Core, others.

Hidden requirements: Legendary Super Sayan, Soul of Fury.

Legendary Super Sayan - The user needs to be the Legendary Super Sayan. Considered the god of the race Sayajin. 

Soul of Fury - It's the soul of the Primordial Sayajin. 

Spencer: We are screwed.
Albion: What do you mean?
Spencer: We is invincible from this point onward.

BOOM

The cocoon explode at the same time the shadow of the Primordial Oozaru released form it's chains.

ROAR.

In the place of the cocoon there standed Koyama, but this time he was emitting a dark energy from his body at all times and his eyes were pure black. 

*Ding* [Congratulations host for obtaining Demonic Draconic' Heart.]

Demonic Draconic' Heart - Host extreme hate, rage mutated along with the process of combining host bloodlines formed a new heart. 

Effects: Negates any kind of status effects(Illusions, Berserk, Poison, Curses). It possess none weakness because of Supreme Bloodline.

Looking at the four in front of him, Koyama raised his hand towards them. A dark energy ball appeared in his hand. Firing it at them the ball expanded a size that occupied all of the room where they were. The actions were so fast that Albion, Ddraig, Tyrant and Spencer didn't had time to react.

BOOM

*Ding* [Congratulations to host by killing Tyrant, Albion, Ddraig, host as gained full power of theirs equipment.]
*Ding* [Congratulations to host for killing extremely important character for host history. As Spencer stole Soul Points from host to strength his soul, now all those points belong to host, along with the points from his death. 1 000 000 000 000 000 Soul Points]

Koyama: Buy me Thresh' Lantern, Cut&Paste System, Lin Huang' System from Monster Paradise, King of the Worlds System and all eye powers. The System don't forget to adapt to you.

*Ding* [Yes host.]

Thresh' Lantern(League of Legends) - An item where it collects the souls of the fallen near by. For each soul the user gains 1 of Magical Power and 1 of Physical Defense.

Cut&Paste System(Cut & Paste) - From the Novel Cut & Paste, the main abilities of the MC where the he can see his enemies, allies, objects and his own abilities, then he can take them(Cut) and put them on his own abilities, his allies, his enemies and objects(Paste), for example host can steal the regeneration from the namekians without stealing their bloodline like this by seeing a namekian then seeing his abilities cutting the regeneration, the namekain loses the regeneration and user gains the regeneration. It also contains supposedly spells, divine beasts to buy from, but as the system already possess those function it is no longer needed.

Monster Paradise System(Monster Paradise) - From the novel Monster Paradise, the system from the main character, Lin Huang. When the user kills an beast/monster it gains points or it as a chance to gain the beast/monster, when the user kills of the same species then the user will gain the abilities of it. 

King of the Worlds System(The King of the Worlds) - From the novel The King of the Worlds, basically the special world from the novel and host will be the king. It can world travel between worlds.

Supreme Eye - The fusion of all eye powers know to host. Sharigan(Naruto), Rinnegan(Naruto), Byakugan(Naruto), Millennium Eye(Yu-Gi-Oh), Emperor Eye(Kuroko no Basket), Evil Eye(The Backers), Stone Eyes(Fairy Tail), The Ultimate Eye(Fullmetal Alchemist), Jagan Eye(Yuu Yuu Hakusho),(...).

Abilities: The user can manipulate everything since elements to matter at will, including the mind and souls of other people. It provides other abilities, but host  needs to train in using them, as the host is not used to it. 

Koyama: Show me my status.

*Ding* [Updating System with new system......Showing status.]

What would you do if when you die and you have 5 wishs.

Would you wish for wealth, immortality, power or adventure.

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It's my first time writing a novel.
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English is not my main language so sorry for spelling mistakes.

Hi, dear readers!
*Waves cutely at you* (￣▽￣)/
I got a few responses and tips from some of you, so I decided to write a small introduction to this novel.
This novel is full of baits.
I warned you. *Smiles devily.*
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I put a mysterious tag for ARC 1, because it has a mysterious feeling to it.
We know nothing about our protagonist and her boyfriend.
She seems to be laughing a lot, but is the laughter genuine or is she trying to cope up with her stress?
It's a very short, face-paced ARC.
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I put a psychological tag for ARC 2.
















An arc that would possibly make you drop the story. (I noticed from the rapid plunge in views and votes, which conveys that this book is not for everybody.) •́  ‿ ,•́












To understand the character's actions and decisions, we have to dive deep into their past. It's about our protagonist's previous life. How she met her boyfriend, and how she died. ARC TWO is like a separate story. There's no transmigration, no reincarnation and mainly, no second chances.
Don't get discouraged by the length of ARC TWO and give this novel a chance.
It'll be toxic, and if you feel it's too much, stop reading. NOBODY should force you to do anything!
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❱ I love interacting with my readers. Your votes and comments are my fuel, they give me the energy to write more. ❤
















❱ If you spot any spelling mistakes, please remind me. I'll correct them as soon as I get your notification. Suggestions and improvement tips are highly appreciated. I like to listen to my reader's opinion or criticism, no matter how bad it is. ಠ‿ಠ
❱ This is a very mediocre novel. Don't put your expectations too high, or you'll get disappointed.
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Thank You. ❤
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💙 Bing Shi - Main character. (MC)
冰 ( bing / bīng ) - Ice
诗 - ( shī ) - poetry, poem, verse
Spiritual animal: Snake. They are symbols of rebirth, transformation, immortality, and healing.
Personality color:  Blue. (I found the description of the color on the internet.) The color of trust. Blue the shade of the sea and the sky is thought to induce calm and convey serenity and peace. It instils confidence and inspires feelings of loyalty, integrity and responsibility. Cool blue is conservative and can also be perceived as aloof. Emotion: Trust, Responsibility, Honesty, Loyalty, Inner security, Harmony. Used to: reduce stress, create calmness, relax, secure, create order. (I found the description of the color on the internet.)
Her style: High class and sophisticated. But in the comfort of her home, she likes to wear animal pajamas.
🖤 Mr. Jelly - Bing Shi's boyfriend.
Real name: 玄慕
玄- black , mysterious
慕 - to admire
Spiritual animal: Shark. It stands for fierceness, authority, determination, remorselessness, efficiency, perception, mystery, preparedness, superiority, competitiveness, innovation, grace, and style. Its ability to continually move symbolizes adaptability, activity, fluidity, and control over emotions.
Personality color: Black. (I found the description of the color on the internet.) The color of mystery. Black is actually the lack of color. It covers, hides, and implies that there is a barrier. A strong and powerful color, black is formal and sophisticated, sexy, and secretive. It connotes fear and evil and conveys pessimism and a lack of hope. Emotion: Power, Control, Authority, Discipline, Elegance. Used to: Hide feelings, Intimidate, Radiate Authority, Create Fear, Associate with mystery. (I found the description of the color on the internet.)
His style: Black pants and black shirts. Simple as that. Different from his girlfriend, he doesn't want to waste his great mind thinking about what to wear the next day.
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❰Aren't you a fan of such novels?❱

Bing Shi: "I'm a big fan of transmigration novels, but if I could have a choice, I would never participate in them."

❰Why? You might find your soulmate.❱

Bing Shi: "No, thank you. I'm more than satisfied with my current boyfriend."

Unfortunately, a tragedy occured, separating a young couple from each other. In order to reunite, Bing Shi would need to travel through different worlds and successfully finish all the main missions given out by the System Headquarters.

 
❱ Author's note:

- 1v1 (No harem)
- bxg, mxf (boyxgirl, malexfemale)
- High EQ MC

*WARNING* Mature content only in some chapters. 
*Pictures used in this novel belong to their rightful owners.

Illustrator: WLOP 
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Hello! Author here! As the year ends with the novel reaching 3 months old, I'm going to be sharing with you the future plans for this novel. I just got home from an incident, I'll tell you what it is later.
First of all, you won't be seeing the current version of Volume 2 after a while. It will be taken down and replaced by the rewrite, which is already planned out for the most part. I know I said that Volume 3 will release in January 6, but I was wrong. I'll take it down when the rewrite starts getting posted.
I'm not even close to touching that yet. Heck, I'm not even done fleshing out the parts of the rewrite. The reason for that is that Volume 2 is about to get much more content than I initially thought it would.
It seems that Volume 2 will reach a level where it is nearly double the amount of content that it orginally has. I've only written an outline of what is basically a superior version of the Volume in the past week.
And that's only with the set up for the whole Volume, just as the first arc of Volume 1 was set up for Zel to find someone he wants to spend the rest of his life with, Volume 2's first arc is to set up the life Zel had when he was little, when he has little.
Secondly, sorry if I made you guys wait two weeks, so I'll be posting a mass release of five chapters of the rewrite on Monday next week, January 6, 2020. Remember, that's going to be the rewrite for Volume 2, with each chapter at least 1,500 words. With five more chapters being posted in the same week, without any specific post times.
My family had an accident that took a lot of the time, time I was going to spend rewriting. A family member had suffered a second degree burn that happened right on Christmas eve. A gas from an oven was lit up, exploding with a very quick bang as the whole building trembled. I was sitting right in front of the table, waiting for the food we were going to eat as it was cooking in that kitchen.
But it wasn't happy faces that carried food that came out, it was a quickly fleeing family member who quickly snuck a look at the mirror as he looked on in horror. Calling out to his wife as he tried to put out a fire on his shirt.
I saw the burned skin on his arm right in front of me, the pure shock and disbelief on his face and the fear in his eyes as the dread kicked in. He tried to touch his molten skin, feeling only heat from it as he tried to figure out what was happening. His mind processing so many things at once, delaying the onset shock and excruciating pain that will come from his wounds.
I remember him calling out for help as he looked at the red flesh that was exposed due to the skin peeling away, giving everyone who looked his way the worst thing you can get on Christmas eve, fear. Fear at what is happening right in front of you, fear of something that you would never expect to happen right before Christmas eve.
I remember the adreline rush as I kicked into high gear and immediately shouted "Hospital, quickly!" and ran to get the door open while he groaned in pain as the skin on his arm had visibly melted. The epidermis crumpling black as the red flesh underneath revealed itself.
Patches of red flesh that still makes me quiver as I write this, but what really got to me was the smell. The nauscious smell of burnt flesh that took everything I had in me to push away mentally. But it wasn't much when I had the misfortune of experiencing the dread that is watching as his wife, my eight months pregnant sister, almost slip due to her anxiety. My heart felt like it was beating out of my chest as I sweated bullets trying to keep a calm mind.
I did all I can to help alleviate his pain, fanning him with paper as he said he felt hot. Hoping that it would make him feel better in some form. Opening every door on the way to the emergency room, running at the fastest pace I can to get the medicine from the pharmacy across the street and having to run to another pharmacy when they said they don't have the thing my family member needed. I did all I can to try and be helpful. But his pain wasn't lessening, the wound isn't getting better, at least, not because of me.
It was only then that I remembered how feeble and helpless I can be. How a mere burn can take away the strength I thought I had, and shook me to the core like how I thought a giant bunny monster falling from the sky made Zel feel fear. Made me realize how there's more things to fear in life than just murderous, giant bunny monsters. Accidents that had nothing to do with 'mana'.
Anyway, we ended up staying over for a week instead of the intended four days to help them. That means that I've only got about 6 days from the 14 that I initally wanted. I said January 6 because I have exams on the week after that, because classes will begin at that time. I'm pressed for time again, this sucks.
 I'm sure a lot of you want to see Volume 3 already, but it's hard to write both at the same time as rewriting. But I promise that it's for the best, as it will be a different story, with familiar events and characters, but in a different sequence and even interactions.
New characters, new events, and most importantly, a more exciting development. As a writer, I want to show you guys my best work. I can't settle for less than that.
After that, it will be released at a rate of five weekly, which will equate to reaching the same amount of content as the initial iteration of Volume 2 in four weeks. For those who are curious, Volume 2 as of now has around 60,000 words. That's a lot of words. But that's only to reach the amount of words, there will certainly be more chapters for Volume 2 after those four weeks.
It won't be Volume 3, as chapters for that are only written with a few sentences each as of today. Sentences of what will happen, without a single piece of dialogue or anything like that. I only have plot points that I want to achieve and the ending for it which is already cemented in stone, just like how Volume 2 already has its ending.
Thirdly, I'll be doing mass releases when I reach a threshold in writing. As I've had the time to flesh things out, with the whole Volume 2 right now being something of a first draft, I'll have some things already written that I can use as material. 
Mass releases will be announced, so watch out for that in the comments.
Lastly, each chapter release for the forseeable future will be at least 1,500 words. 
Why?
Because that would make it worth a fast pass when it goes premium. That's right, I'll be going premium after this volume, though I'm not sure when I will finish writing it. Consider it as the deciding factor if you want to finish this novel or not, because I don't think you'll be happy with the development of the story if you don't even like the free Volumes.
So, to make it clear. That will be five chapters a week with no certain schedule. It's going to be in my own time, because I'll be too tired if I just churn them out without a care. I don't like rewriting when it can be done in one take.
I'm an aspiring author guys, and only with premium can that be a viable future. Right now, I get nothing from writing this, nothing at all. I've spent a lot of time and willpower to move this forward, I think I deserve to get something for it. Premium, for those who are not as involved with Webnovel terms, means that future chapter will need coins/fast passes to unlock. Chapter 101 onwards will be premium, that's not going to change. Intially, it was supposed to be after the current Chapter 90, but I decided against it. 
Since Volume 2 was just 90 chapters, I felt it was too little. I then thought about making it after 100, but then it would be strange to just go premium at the start of Volume 3. So I decided to make Volume 2 reach at least 100 chapters and rewrite it to be better. As I stated before, I feel that it could be better.
Coins aren't free, though you can earn some by inviting friends to Webnovel, so it's hard to get those. The only 'free' way to read premium is with fast passes, which I know you guys are all aware of already. But since I don't want to make it hard for those who like the novel but can't afford to buy spirit coins, I'll make it worth your free fast passes instead. 


(Author's note:

Story will be updated on August 3, 2020. I'm having my last semester in college so I'll focus on that for a while. Also, a remake will be done so reading this version would still be worth it. 

For those who were looking forward to more content, sorry but you'll have to wait longer. But my personal life has to come first, and this hobby can wait. If you're willing to wait, I'll give you your due reward, but not for a while. Thank you, and hope you like what you'll see.)

The world as we know it is about to end. Billions of lives will be lost, countries devastated and society left in ruins. But if you have the power to save it, would you?

Zel Huertazuela has had a life that's full of let downs. His mother was a debt-ridden mess, his father was an abusive angry bull while he gets nothing but insults when trying to fix them. He doesn't even know how to move forward with his life.

“Never mind, I don’t really know what I want, why not just do what people tell me to? Money is needed you say? I’ll be an engineer then, those pay well right?”

“Get a work that you would do even if you don’t get paid for it? What the hell kind of fantasy is that?”

But that would have been it if it weren't for his sudden ability to live a lifetime in the span of a dream that lasts a night.

"Wait, this isn't the hospital?!"

"Where's my wife!"

"Now that I'm back, I'll be rich!"

"I'll fix the mistakes I made, there won't be any more regrets for this guy!"

"Monsters?! No problem!"

"We won in the dream, why can't we win in reality?"

"What do you mean it changed?"

"Help! How do I fix this?!"

If you were given a second chance, would you take it? Even if you have to lose everything you built up today?

Find out how a man finds himself saving the world by being the man who rules it!

(The first volume is basically a very long prologue. The 'Battle of the Beginning' chapters will be more representative of what to expect from future volumes. 

This story is something I had in mind for a long time now so many of the ideas and scenarios can be seen in my other works but they are only similar, not literal copies. Enjoy!)

Just a warning for those who do end up reading this.

This world is dark and extremely cruel!!! While there won't be any NTR, there will be moments that get you completely pissed off because of the brutality and the evilness ofnthe characters and world. Hell you may even hate the MC because he's so weak in the beginning compared to the other people in the novel, but thats okay. (He does get hella stronger so have no fear)

In my personal opinion, a good novel is one that draws genuine emotion out of you. Whether it be anger, joy, sadness, or pleasure, what matters is that you felt something from it. 

People will die, even Main Characters, and thats okay as this is mostly about one guy with a optimistic and joking personality and his incredible journey through an unknown world. Just remember to sit back and enjoy the ride.

I hope you guys like the novel.

First chapter coming soon!!!

Mako D. Carson, an ordinary teen with a jokster personality was confused. He woke up in a place completely different from his own, in a whole different world for that matter.

In this world thats 3 times larger then Earth, battles are constantly being fought between 52 different races that exist. Corruption, conspiracies, war, and murder!! However, perhaps the most sickening of it all is the Slave Trade, an orginization thats known worldwide and is accepted by all.

In this messed up world that requires strength and money, Mako will have to smarten up and gain power in order to survive. Though he came in this world weak, he would make sure to come out on top.

Alright so don't kill me but....Im sick 😷 and its pretty bad so I literally CAN'T write even if I tried. Hell, yesterday was literally a miracle that I managed to squeeze out a chapter. The novel will continue though as O habe plans for it however you'll have to wait until I'm better.

However there IS good news.....Ive actually been keeping something to the side in case something like this happened. Its a novel called "The Unlucky Hero" and I got like 20 chapters stocked up for it for such an occasion. I know its know consolation but I hope you'll read it and let me know whatcha think.

Anyways, I should be better in a few days so have no fear. 

The Unlucky Hero

Make sure to read it and let me know if its as good, better, or worse then this novel. I'll see you guys when I'm better

Juda Aburriah is a typical magician in training, or at least thats what he wants to be anyways.

Born at the bottom of the barrel in the world of Esteten, Juda is looked down upon everywhere he goes. Living in the slums, poor clothes, no money, everyone seems to have something to say about him.

However one day, Judas family happens to run into a bit of money, enough to live the rest of their lives without worrying or suffering. However, instead of keeping it, Judas parents instead paid for him to go to the prestigious Mastik Academy, the place where only the rich kids go to study and learn how to become proper magicians

Now, with only the clothes on his back and a dirt poor reputation, Juda will have to make his way up from the bottom. His parents had given him this chance and he wasn't going to waste it.

Looking at the boy in front of him who trembled like a Chihuahua, a small trace of disgust rose in the Minotaur's eyes as he watched. Seeing that man acting so pathetically even in his soul form, made the Minotaur wonder how long he it would have lasted had he not encountered the adventurer, probably he would have lasted no more than a few hours before being killed as a stray dog.

With a sigh the Minotaur approached a few steps of that young blond, but before he could take more than three steps, the blond began to scream and move for back, as if the simple act of the minotaur to approaching was enough do it he to piss in fear

"Wow, you're even more pathetic than I imagined." Feeling that his contempt for the young man in front of him rising even more, the minotaur's gaze moved to a black and white sphere in the center of the room and let another sigh escape his lips . The sphere was the same size as a basketball and had a black and white color that was circulating inside the sphere without mixing as if it were water and oil.

If one were paying attention, would be able to see that within the sphere the shape of a minotaur and the form of a human appear respectively in the colors black and white. And from each of these colors, a thread stretched to the feet of the minotaur and the blind boy who tremble in a corner.

Looking away from that sphere to look back at the young blonde, the minotaur seemed to think for a moment before he began to speak.

"Have you ever wondered why in the novels you read, the dungeon monsters always had a smarter globin or, contrary to what the adventurer killed the last time, was smarter, stronger and not fall into the same trick? "


Looking at the young man's lack of reaction, the minotaur simply shrugged nonchalantly before continuing to speak, not caring whether he was being listened to or not.

"In nature nothing is created, nothing is lost, everything is transformed ... This phrase is valid in the matter of souls too." Using one of the phrases that was popular in the world of the young man in front of him, the minotaur continued its explanation to its public , even if the one in question was just a young man trembling with fear and some faithful readers.

"In this world it is the same, even when souls are destroyed in pieces, they can be recycled together to create new souls, just as Rodcorte did with the souls of heroes in that novel you love so much." Remembering that interesting story that the young man loved to read, a trace of longing shone in the eyes of the minotaur while he remembered the adventures that a certain Dhampir will pass and how the end of the novel had been surprising.

Leaving aside his longing for the novel he had inherited from the young blonde, the minotaur continued his explanation as if he did not care for the reference he had made in his explanation.

"These stronger monsters." The minotaur continued in a soft, unhurried voice. "And what you call variants, they are reincarnated souls of the monsters, who in spite of not keeping their old personalities, have inherited the knowledge and experiences of their past life, of course, there are not many who have this advantage "

Seeing that the young had stopped trembling with fear to look at him with an expression that seemed to say "You're joking" the minotaur could not help laughing loudly as he watched him with a dangerous gleam in his eyes.

"Yes, sorry, but your dream of reincarnating with the experiences from your past life is something common among monsters, You're not special because of this., but ..."

The minotaur's laughter stopped the next moment before looking at the young again with a serious expression.

"Flee from one cycle of reincarnation to another and before being destroyed, occupy a body of another soul with force .... That yes makes you special"


The fact was that when the soul of the minotaur was about to reincarnate again in its world, a hurried soul that was being pursued by the sentinels of the reincarnation system, interrupted the process and merged in the same body that should belong to the minotaur and for  cause having been strong enough to invade other systems of reincarnation, the soul of the young blonde was indeed stronger than that of the minotaur, thus assuming the role of the main soul while awakening and if were it not for the physical and psychological torture he suffered when he was stabbed by the spear of the adventurer and witnessing the horrors made to a human "companion," he would probably never have been able to take over the body, even though it should belong to him in the beginning.


"Ah, besides that, just so you know. If the person in the queue of reincarnation was a baby of some other race, he would have died on the spot because he could not bear our souls, it was fortunate that you were a monster, one more with one of the strongest physicists possible "

Finally finishing his monologue that seemed to have lasted long enough to fill an entire chapter of a novel, the minotaur returned a brief glance at the black and white sphere in the corner before speaking.

"Now, we're going to be transformed into fragments of souls in a few hours, if we do not figure it out ... It's a pretty awful end to both of us " As the minotaur finished speaking, a loud crack sounded in that space while a crack appeared in the sphere, causing both the minotaur and the young blond to scream because of pain.

"If any of us want to live or not become fragments of soul ... We need ..." Before the Minotaur could finish speaking, the young blond stood up as an expression of pure horror as he stepped away step by step , it seemed that he had understood what the minotaur was planning and was not willing to merge with the soul of the minotaur and be reborn as a new being

Unfortunately for the young man, he had not noticed that as the minotaur made his monologue, he approached him step by step, and the moment he finally got ready away to escape, it was too late.

Before he could even try to run away from the minotaur's soul, a large, thick arm held the young blonde's head

"Just so you know, your soul  just was only stronger in the cycle of reincarnation ..." Without further ado, the minotaur squeezed the young blonde's head, transforming it into fragments of white lights that rushed toward him, merging into the your body.

At the same time, the sphere that was in the center of that space glowed intensely, as if undergoing a great change and for a brief moment all that space, including the minotaur, was illuminated by a white light.

Have you read novels of reincarnated people? Invoked to save the world, fight the demon king or even to build a harem?

This is not one of those stories.

My name is Astherios, the king of the minotaurs and this is a story unlike anything to begin with .... I am not the hero.




Author's Note: Due to some comments and ratings, I would like to emphasize that although it is not the focus of the novel, there will be sex scenes in some chapters that will now be notified with NSFW both in the chapter title and before the beginning of the scene. The focus of this novel is not rape, but there will be occassions where the character may have to deal with rape situations (he himself will never do it). So, thank you all for reading and for your support.

The night sky outside the window was quiet.
Looking out from the room covered by lights, the darkness felt kind of cold that when one stared long enough, it would become a bottomless black hole. The black hole was as though able to draw out one's soul as fear crept up Xiang Wan's spine.
"Bai Muchuan—"
Xiang Wan suddenly thought of the mysterious ID at her book review and comments page.
"Do your best, I'll make sure that you'll be popular! Famous and celebrated! Release your inner demons completely…"
"For example, I'm your crazy fan. In order to chase you for updates, I start to lose my mind. I'll kill a person when you stop writing for one day and so on?"
Is it really a coincidence?
Hope so! Xiang Wan gasped, seemingly gripped by a certain fear that clasped her heart tightly.
At this moment, she realized that the words the mysterious ID had said were not only written on the book reviews and comments page but it had also been written inside her heart. Every word, even the punctuation, she remembered them all clearly…
"What's the matter, Little Xiang Wan?" Bai Muchuan saw her sudden change of expression and she looked ashen. He reached out his hand and stroked her cheek.
"I'm alright." Xiang Wan hesitated for a moment and looked at him again; she told Bai Muchuan about the comment left by the mysterious ID as well as her worries.
After Bai Muchuan heard that, his eyebrows creased together and stayed quiet for a long time.
"I'm overthinking on this, right?"
At this moment, Xiang Wan actually hoped that he would say that.
She wished that he would tell her that, that was just mischief by a chuunibyou teenager.
That there was no "manipulator" behind all of these.
And none of the things she feared would happen.
"Xiang Wan." Under the lights, Bai Muchuan's eyes seemed like a cold, deep vortex. She was unable to decipher what he was thinking.
He revealed a piece of information after pausing for a moment. "Actually, I've looked into that ID. The biggest problem with the ID is, there's nothing wrong with it."
"What do you mean?" Xiang Wan could not understand.
"We couldn't trace the ID."
The police couldn't trace the ID? Xiang Wan's heart was stifled for a moment—she was stunned.
"For the ordinary people, there's no such thing as privacy on the internet." Bai Muchuan's brows were furrowed as he explained. "But for those criminals who are very skillful in technology, although it is very difficult, they can still mask their internet footprints by using proxy servers and like. Moreover…"
Bai Muchuan paused for a moment before puffing a sigh. "The technological capability of some crimes are beyond your imagination," he continued, "this world is too big, besides our country, there are so many countries abroad that they can also do what they want…"
He had worked in ICPO before after all.
These forms of crime were totally different from what Xiang Wan knew of.
"Well," her face blushed a little. "Indeed, I do not know about that… Ahem, I feel like a frog in a well, for not knowing many things."
"Don't say that, your question is valid too," smiled Bai Muchuan. "Besides, that ID did leave behind some traces."
Traces?
Xiang Wan's heart missed a beat and looked at him with hope.
"The first time when you told me about that ID. Our investigation results showed that he had used the free internet provided by a seafood restaurant… there are no surveillance cameras inside the restaurant and their business are always booming. It's impossible to verify who had posted those comments using the free network…"
"…"
Does that mean that the person was reading her novel and eating seafood at the same time, which he subsequently left a comment?
Xiang Wan was silent for a moment before she thought of something important. "Which city is it?"
Bai Muchuan paused for a while, then he uttered two words: "Jin City."
Xiang Wan felt as though she had been struck by lightning.
There were simply too many coincidences that they couldn't be coincidences anymore.
"That's why I'm worried that someone might be targeting your deliberately and wanted you to reduce the instances of going out alone by yourself. If you really need to go out by yourself, you must tell me your whereabouts."
Xiang Wan looked at his brooding face and felt a little perturbed. "Is it him? Is it because of him that Zhou Dequan died?"
Her pupils shrunk, her face ashen; her expression was that of fear and anxiety that persisted. She did not even realize that she was holding on to Bai Muchuan's arm tightly…
Bai Muchuan held her hands to give her support. "Don't be afraid. I'll be with you."
"It's not about being afraid…" said Xiang Wan, "but this person makes me feel terrified. I don't know who he is, but I have a feeling that I'm constantly within his area of monitoring, as if not wearing anything… Bai Muchuan, do you know how it feels like?"
Yes, he knew.
How could he not know?
It was the same for him too.
Bai Muchuan puffed a sigh inside his heart and pulled her in front of him. Their fingers were entwined together, and with a little strength, he held her in his arms.
"I'm sorry."
"Eh?" Xiang Wan's heart skipped a beat and gazed at him with a clueless look.
"I did not do a good job in protecting you that you are suffering from anxiety and fear." Bai Muchuan's eyes were filled with determination. "Be rest assured. Even if he is hiding at the ends of the world, I will find him one day."
"Of course." Xiang Wan tried to suppress her feelings of apprehension and squeezed out a smile, looking at him with her sparkling eyes. "Bai Muchuan, I've never doubted you on this."
"Haha!" Bai Muchuan couldn't help letting out a laugh. "Good!"
His finger scratched her palm gently as though he had just received a compliment.
Xiang Wan felt like laughing; she grabbed his hands and swayed them gently. "Well, maybe things are not as bad as what I thought? Maybe I've met a lunatic? As my novel gets popular, I'll get all kinds of readers. It's inevitable there might be a few weirdos, agree?"
When she mentioned "all kinds of readers", she looked up at him where her gaze had a tinge of joy. She had persisted with writing her novel "Murder The Dream Guy" and finally made some achievements—as well as the regrets when she could not continue writing anymore.
"You're the weirdo!" Bai Muchuan looked at her with a faint smile before puffing a sigh. "Weirdo, are you really not going to continue anymore?"
She couldn't bear to discontinue it, either. It was a difficult decision.
She really couldn't bear to discontinue her novel. She had not been able to sleep well.
However…
Xiang Wan avoided his gaze and touched her hair. "I'm preparing for my new book, just that I have not decided on the story… I feel that it's difficult to come up with a totally new storyline for web novels now. No matter what kind of plot you come up with, it's very likely that someone else has already written about it… I want to come up with new stories, I want to earn money and take care of my interests at the same time, is it very contradictory?"
Hah! Xiang Wan's pitiful look made Bai Muchuan laugh. He lifted his hand and pinched the tip of her nose gently. 
"You're a little lazy pig. You want to stop writing. You're procrastinating and are looking for excuses."
"I didn't!" Xiang Wan immediately tried to defend herself, "I swear, I didn't want to stop writing.
"I want to write a story that will become super popular and earn a lot of money to support my family," she muttered softly, "marry a toy boy and arrive at the peak of my life."
"What?" Bai Muchuan tilted his head. "What did you say? I didn't hear it clearly."
"Ahem!" Xiang Wan looked serious. "I said I want to write a book to support my family and contribute to the society."
Hmph! Bai Muchuan glanced at her lazily. "I've said that I have good ears…"
"!" Xiang Wan smiled and gave him a thumbs up. "My Lord, you're really good. I admire you for that!"
"So…" Bai Muchuan raised an eyebrow. "What are you going to do to make up for my broken and fragile heart…"
Urgh! He's such a man of steel and he dared to say he had a fragile heart?
"Don't be like this." Xiang Wan facepalmed and then showed an ashamed look. "You're going to lose me this way."
"Hmph!" Bai Muchuan rolled his eyes. "Your acting is horrible."
"Of course I can't be compared to your good buddy, Xie Wanwan!"
"…" Bai Muchuan gave her a glance from the corner of his eye, his lips formed a smile as his hands rested behind his neck. He closed his eyes lazily, and his voice was suddenly gentle. "My head hurts. Little Xiang Wan, help me massage my head?"
…


Aspiring author Xiang Wan was deemed hopeless by her family and better off married when her fourth novel still did not do well. 
Just as she started to doubt herself and wonder if she should continue to pursue her dream as an author, things take an unexpected turn when a dazzling guy appears before her and she was taken away by the police as a prime suspect of a murder case.
A murder had taken place and the details were eerily similar to her mystery novel. 
From then on, her life turned topsy-turvy.
...........
Translator Review:
This is a novel encompassed with mystery, ethics, family ties, and romance. Of course, the highlights of this book are the murder cases. 
Although it’s a modern setup where none of the characters have a system or any other cheats, the Author managed to delight me with her writing, creative plots and a good pace without dragging her story. 
I marvel at the way the Author links up the clues and plot to explain the individual cases as well as paving the way to unravel the huge conspiracy behind the individual murders. Romantic plots are light-hearted so readers could take a breather from the plots of gruesome murders.
Frequency of release:  1 chapter/daily

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