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  • Shinobi system in elemental nation

    Shinobi system in elemental nation

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    3.6

    Our protagonist who is a regular otaku dies in his world and obtains the body of a new child who is only one year old during the third great ninja war.

  • God Of Jutsu

    God Of Jutsu

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    Drake, the most ruthless killer has abandoned his job and lives his life watching anime. One day while going on shopping one of his enemy kills him and his soul is sent to one piece by god. Watch how Drake dominates the anime worlds. [Note : The timeline has been changed so bear with it.]

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certe: No Way! JIANG CHEN!

Gura Gura no mi : Cultivator · C55
1 year ago

anotherfan: Well I write as well as you do and I'm just going to advise you a little bit so that you could write your story better. I don't mean to offend you or anything like that all I want is for you to improve on it since we are writing the same genre fan-fiction.
1. it is true the time line is pretty bad since in the third ninja war the only present power house of hidden leaf was minato, and the other jonins of konoha like the head of family clans or jonins from their clans. orochimaru was defending against the village hidden in the mist later on was caught to be performing illegal experiments just right after the war. Jiraiya was training the orphan kids remember yahiko, nagato, and konan... the guy with the rinnegan those were jiraiya's disciple. tsunade was having a bad time since her little brother and lover died giving her phobia to blood so she was out I think this happened in the second shinobi war I'm not sure remember that the sannin when they first appeared in naruto time line was already in their fifties. Minato actually won the third war single handedly almost since he made everyone retreat because everywhere he went in that war means victory for hidden leaf his body flicker was so fast he could people in a matter of secs plus with the flying thunder god he was just the fast ninja ever even raikage can't catch him. So naruto can't be born in that era since minato wasn't hokage yet at that time minato was presumably in his teenage years as well base on the anime. you have to research brother since people who reads fanfic loves accuracy you'd have trouble with your readers I did as well.
2. I think you have consider the characters and their personality plus you'd have to think through how they are going to react since they are supposed to be people with emotion and reacting base on that or their personality for example like I said hiruzen is very calculative person since he is a hokage he has to consider every decision he makes for the good of the village if he encounters a young genius asking to go out of the village for adventure he probably wouldn't allow that person to go alone or worst not go at all since he has to develop first before letting him go or else all that talent would go to waste if he dies prematurely.
3. the system is really cool and all brother I get it but I think what you have to show are just the main stat of mc and his ninjutsu... the buying part you don't have to show the other stuff just gave us some vague idea like a few techniques or what not list everything you can and just show how much the mc spend on it.

The idea is great brother but you have to work on a few things then everything would be ok. I hope I helped you in anyway and good luck I'll work on mine as well :)

Shinobi system in elemental nation
1 year ago

Fugaku: He is not revealing his full strength.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C71
1 year ago

Fugaku: No, he will return to the naruto world.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C49
1 year ago
He will learn latter. View More

SoaringEagle12: Author when are you going to have the mc learn haki?

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C77
1 year ago

Fugaku: I meant living dragon,not a dragon associated with a jutsu.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C57
1 year ago

Fugaku: Due to the mutation between obito's and shisui's sharingan.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C52
1 year ago

Fugaku: Actually, even six path could be insta-killed in fairy tail with the lullaby. Only one tune with it and everyone who listen dies.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C49
1 year ago

Fugaku: He is not revealing his full strength.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C71
1 year ago

Fugaku: He is not revealing his full strength.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C71
1 year ago
He is not revealing his full strength. View More

Dominion_FR: Fuhaku has only Vice-Admiral strenght ?

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C71
1 year ago

Fugaku: Thanks for the advice.

Shinobi system in elemental nation
1 year ago

Fugaku: Read the next chapter you will know why sarutobi allowed him to leave.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C10
1 year ago

Fugaku: Thanks for the advice.

Shinobi system in elemental nation
1 year ago
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>>>>>>> · C0
1 year ago
There is no fixed schedule as I immediately release a chapter after I have written. There would be mkre release if I have more time or there will be less chapters due to lack of time. View More

TrueImmortal: I wanted to ask what is the release schedule? Also wanted to praise you, your writing is becoming better and better. Just keep describing the situation and the emotions and thoughts of different characters. Thanks

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C62
1 year ago
When I published the chapter yesterday it was not shown in the app or the web page thats why. So after publishing two more times, it finally showed in the app and web page. View More

Kirora: Why you publish same chap 3 times?

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C62
1 year ago
I will start writing the next chapters after a few week. View More

SoaringEagle12: Can I ask you when you're going to release chapters for God of jutsu.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C62
1 year ago
How can I get the novel cover? View More
Shinobi system in elemental nation · C62
1 year ago
Gildarts Clive or Zeref Dragneel. View More
>>>>>>> · C0
1 year ago
Atlast, I published the same chapter three times. View More
Shinobi system in elemental nation · C61
1 year ago
I jave already published a chapter but it's not shown in the app or web page. View More

HellDragon: ??

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C60
1 year ago
Guys, I have published a new chapter but it's not showing. View More
Shinobi system in elemental nation · C60
1 year ago
Yup, they have the time to become stronger which they had lost in the anime. View More

divyamkaptiyal: Now the guild can train for the seven years they lost in the anime, interesting.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C56
1 year ago
The MC fought with Acknologia easily as he was using chakra not magic. View More
Shinobi system in elemental nation · C57
1 year ago

Fugaku: I haven't written more chapters yet, so sorry.

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C57
1 year ago
I haven't written more chapters yet, so sorry. View More

DarkMaster0386: Are you releasing any more chspters today?

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C57
1 year ago
I meant living dragon,not a dragon associated with a jutsu. View More

AcnoIogia: Hey what do you mean there was no dragon mention in naruto there was,wood dragon justu and water dragon justu

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C57
1 year ago
Actually, Jellal, Gerard and Siegrain are all same. View More

AcnoIogia: By the way I love the way the manga is going thanks for the chapter

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C53
1 year ago
Please watch fairy tail episode 34. View More

AcnoIogia: Author you got the name wrong isn’t the guy name jellal

Shinobi system in elemental nation · C53
1 year ago
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