Ruen

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  • Primordial Remanents

    Primordial Remanents

    Fantasy

    Look up Soul of the Primordial Remanent. https://www.webnovel.com/book/14458094405415205/Soul-of-the-Primordial-Remanent

  • Dleated

    Dleated

    Eastern Fantasy

  • Bone Collector of The Cosmic Rivers

    Bone Collector of The Cosmic Rivers

    Fantasy

    At the most isolated part of the void, there existed an expensive land. None of the old gods' record had any information about this hidden land. The Rulers of Twelve Novel Celestials Races stepped on this hidden continent. They discovered people with incredible bloodlines strong enough to compete with theirs. As a potential threat, they decided to destroy them, but they discovered a God Spirit that protected the land. He said, the people of this land had lost their realms, so the old gods had given them land to stay. Still unconvinced by the Gods Spirit the celestials decided to destroy the hidden continent. Only a newly appointed Celestial named Lunos disagreed and suggested to let the people live. His solution was to completely isolate the continent from the main realms. If they were permanently separated, there was no need for destroying them. The Celestial disagreed and decided to destroy him with the continent. Before his death, with the help of the God spirit, he broke the world into pieces and hid them within his hidden dimensions connected by a river of spiritual energy. Before his death, an ancient voice entered his head thanking him for keeping his promise. He told him one day he will remember his name, and he will have a chance to walk again in this land. To that, Lunos only smiled.

  • Second Ascension of Firvian

    Second Ascension of Firvian

    Fantasy

    Firvian accepted a mission from an old guardian for having a chance to be reborn, but after he was reborn, he realized he was already too late. The world has already fallen, and he had no mission left to complete! Puzzled by the drastic change, he starts his journey to reach the center of the fragmented realme as he discovers the hidden secrets of millenniums. Might reboot on my other account. For now try reading (Soul of the Primordial Remnent.)

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Soul of the Primordial Remanent
1 month ago

21034: I chapter equals to almost three chapters.

Soul of the Primordial Remanent · C6
1 month ago
Reading Status: C1
Writing 3/5

My writing is ****, and I am lazy. I always hated writing, but I still want to share my plethora of ideas.

Stability of Updates 1/5

Pray for me for my imperfection.

Story Development 2/3

Unlike my other two stories, I didn't plan anything for this. I wanted to try experimenting with my ability to come up with bull ****. For example, I wrote the synopsis after I finished writing the first chapter and at that moment, I had no idea what the story was going to be about.

Character Design 3/5
I don't know what a good character is but my characters are decent compared to the rainstorm of **** I read in this site.

World Background 5/5

I like the settings I create, maybe because I don't have to read my work to picture my own world. View More
Bone Collector of The Cosmic Rivers
5 months ago

Ruen: EXPppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Dleated
5 months ago
Reading Status: C0
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Dleated
5 months ago
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Exp Sect · C79
5 months ago
Reading Status: C6
The amount of details makes it easy to follow the story. The world background seems interesting, and it is well set up for an epic journey. The main character is interesting, and I am looking forward to the introduction of new characters.

I say keep going with the natural flow and write something that you enjoy, and people will start to like it as well when they see the work put behind it. The slow build up might turn people away at first, but it will pay off when the chapters pile up.

The grammar is not bad for a first-time writer, but you need to work on complex sentence punctuations. View More
Within The Soul: Supremacy
5 months ago
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Within The Soul: Supremacy
5 months ago

DriftingCloud123: Good story, a constructive critique would be to make a schedule of releases and to stick to it.

As for the story itself, it has great potential, I love the mix of western and eastern factors that appeal to a big audience. The strong suit of this story is definitely the world building which feels big and full of life. If you like to read fantasy, give this story a shot.

Primordial Remanents
5 months ago
stoped -> stopped |
this travels -> these travels |
all earth should be capitalized as Earth(planet) is a proper noun. | The first chapter is very good and there are very few mistakes but the commas need some work. View More
Within The Soul: Supremacy · C1
5 months ago
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Within The Soul: Supremacy · C1
5 months ago
he felt it was necessary -> unnecessary? View More
To the End · C1
6 months ago

tiansheng: I think you do a good job in mixing western and eastern fantasy (I'm a sucker for fantasy). The story and world building also seem to progress at a steady pace. However, you have some glaring grammatical issues which appear odd because you possess a rich vocabulary (you can try using Grammarly to fix some of those). As long as you can fix those issues, I believe your writing will become outstanding.

Lastly, stretching the prologue across several chapters is, in my humble opinion, something you should try to avoid as it can frustrate the readers and feel like you're dragging the story.

As for the story itself, for now, I can't say much about it since I'm only in the sixth chapter, but if the prologue is any indication, it should be quite interesting. Best of luck to you!

Primordial Remanents
6 months ago
Reading Status: C1
I have no idea about the future of the story and how it will branch out. The first chapter made the whole thing even more confusing. It gave me fleeing that Tian Mo will somehow restart the universe or why would he abandon the Phoenix Fang girl like trash or brutally kill his empathic brother. I read nine chapters and it kept me interested throughout. The main character is interesting but I am still not rooting for him. I need more description of the world and environment to really get into the story.

I like the story so far so I will keep reading until I am no longer interested. I think your story blow up unless the whole site is full of just horny bulls like I think it is. Some of the stories with just one chapter have more views because there is *** on the title. It takes more time to get recognized for good writing so don't give up because I think you will get contracted within two months.

The quality of writing is excellent considering you put out so many chapters in less than three weeks. I am jealous of your writing ability.


I started reading the first(0) chapter without looking at the synopsis. So I thought Long Wei was the protagonist. I started rooting for him. On the second chapter, I was waiting for him to somehow reincarnate but imagine my surprise. View More
One Heart Three Tribulations
6 months ago
work so hide? Hard? View More
One Heart Three Tribulations · C4
6 months ago
A reincarnation with an explanation. Very nice start. View More
Genius magician · C1
6 months ago
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Primordial Remanents · C0
6 months ago

Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been assessed by Virtual Bookshelf.
To see your assessment results, please navigate to https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/06/webnovel-assessments-14/
Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

Primordial Remanents · C0
7 months ago
That a lot of novels you are reviewing. I wish I had your patience. View More
Primordial Remanents · C0
7 months ago
Next chapter tomorrow. View More
Primordial Remanents · C0
7 months ago

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Dual Cultivation
7 months ago
Next chapter will be this Friday. View More
Primordial Remanents · C0
7 months ago
There will be a harem if you are looking for that but it will not be the main focus. View More

faijay98: Is there a romance genre?

Primordial Remanents
11 months ago
Thank you for the encouraging comments and about the cover I just wanted to put something that I drew. View More
Primordial Remanents · C0
11 months ago
Reading Status: C5
This should be way more popular. The description of the world and objects are amazing. The characters have been set up for a good drama and action.
The ability of the main character has a lot of potentials. The buildup has a very steady pace and nothing random is happening out of nowhere. I think since the main character was forced to join the school you should make him enjoy his fights.

I don't know how you write such a big chapter every day. I think if you try you can get contracted. I will definitely be keeping up with this and good luck in the future. View More
Steampunk Apocalypse!
1 year ago
Will he be able to turn one sloid to a different solid or perfectly copy things with available material. View More
Steampunk Apocalypse! · C4
1 year ago
It feels like I just had a full course meal. View More
Steampunk Apocalypse! · C1
1 year ago
Reading Status: C2
Definitely recommended if you don't mind BL. The slow build up is amazing and feels so natural. The description of the world around is also so visual. The main character acts like the set characteristic he observed his surroundings and made intelligent direction and decision. View More
The Black Out
1 year ago
Reading Status: C1
-I think you are very new to writing so try to create very Sim*le dialogue.
-The story wasn't engaging at all I had a hard time finish the chapters.
-Too much lazy and unnecessary explanation and why put the age in a bracket. Somehow incorporate this information within the dialogue without info dumping.
-Don't tell us what a character personality is before they even start talking.
-Try to use 3rd person point of view.
-Keep trying and plan things out. View More
What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
1 year ago
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What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.
1 year ago
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