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Vanja
Vanja
21 days ago
Replied to April_Manis_Marta

If you think that is poor then I'm envious of the level of comfort your life must contain :)

Shen Jiayue arrived home. Standing at the entrance to her garage, she hesitated. Should I drive the Ferrari or the Lamborghini tomorrow?

 I'm the Culinary God

I'm the Culinary God

Urban · Greedy kitten

Vanja
Vanja
1 months ago
Commented

and he committed it to memory!

Listening to his explanation, Qin Feng gained a clearer understanding of the high school life that awaited him.

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Eastern · Enchanting Ya

Vanja
Vanja
1 months ago
Replied to AverageJOE

I also forgot that there's like 783627482 different ways you can write the name qin in chinese

Qin Feng thought for a moment, then in the ID field, he entered a single word: [Qin].

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Eastern · Enchanting Ya

Vanja
Vanja
1 months ago
Replied to

Considering china, and this empire being just BIG china, has a low number of "significant" last names, and a considerable percentage of that country is named qin, probably not. I'm much more surprised that the name was available, in reality he should have ended with a name like JustQin757738288592758939587444884

Qin Feng thought for a moment, then in the ID field, he entered a single word: [Qin].

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Grinding to Become the Master of the Universe

Eastern · Enchanting Ya

Vanja
Vanja
2 months ago
Commented

This makes no sense. If intelligent otherworldly summons are common enough that they have a process for it, and summoning higher ranked people is common, as it is made to look like here, there is no way this bozo would be the first to find out about higher ranked monsters...

He paused, the pieces starting to fall into place. "Legendary's been the highest we've seen. There's one more grade above that, Mythic. But that's just theoretical. No one's actually encountered one here."

Floating Islands: SSS Gacha Lord

Floating Islands: SSS Gacha Lord

Fantasy · Galanteo

Vanja
Vanja
10 months ago
Commented

if you let the AI play the editor you need to check the chapter after it's done, or it will hallucinate beds from furniture stores into your chapters while the bed was already there in a previous chapter...

Our bedroom had exactly one king-sized bed, salvaged from a furniture store during our early scavenging days. With three guys sharing the space, we'd developed an elaborate rotation system involving the bed and whoever drew the short straw sleeping on the floor with extra blankets. Christopher and I had turned it into a series of increasingly petty games – rock-paper-scissors tournaments, arm wrestling matches, elaborate debates about who'd had the most physically demanding day and therefore deserved the bed most.

Harem Apocalypse: My Seed is the Cure?!

Harem Apocalypse: My Seed is the Cure?!

Urban · Juan_Tenorio

Vanja
Vanja
10 months ago
Commented

yeah no, i can smell a shity "the evil doppelganger" storyline from miles away. done giving coins to this book, will continue reading with free passes until this is solved.

The short silence before she received an answer felt like an eternity to her. Just as she was about to ask again, her worries on the verge of doubling, a response finally came: {He is fine, and the doppelgänger is captured.}

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

Vanja
Vanja
12 months ago
Replied to Dracoo

Because fighting, action really, in webnovels is boring as hell. I usually skip any premium chapters where there is a hint of fighting. The suspense replaced with ridiculous plot armor fights is not interesting and I'd much rather read the characters interacting with the world.

"Fine," he heard himself say. "I'll consider the Academy."

Idle Tycoon System

Idle Tycoon System

Fantasy · Risaliyah

Vanja
Vanja
1 years ago
Commented

this makes so much sense, you are using chatgpt as an editor, that's why the repetitive language...

Vanja
Vanja
1 years ago
Commented

This constant double-negative phrasing is annoying as hell. I don’t need to be told what something isn’t every other sentence. Occasionally it’s fine—if there’s a genuine chance of confusing it with something else—but here it’s overused to the point of feeling like a cheap way to pad the word count. The constant “it’s not A, it’s not B, it’s C instead” structure quickly stops being storytelling and starts being filler, creating false tension with empty words. I won’t be continuing once the “free reading” period ends