Webnovel Author: Spalk - Fanfic Collection

Hello. Why did you continue reading the original Naruto series after encountering Jiraiya, who has a much more problematic personality than Neji? Additionally, Neji is a teenager, and it's worth considering that his current personality may be influenced by his lack of education in certain matters. Also if your problem is about Sasuke and his lack of reaction just wait for the chapter 41.

I have great plans for him ;)

In the next chapter you will find out why Aizen was ok with it ;)

Choji is still in the academy. If you remember Naruto, Sakura, Ino and Shikamaru were promoted by 1 year. The 4 of them are much stronger than canon because of their training.

I disagree completely with your whole post. Kakashi was a chunin at 6 and is one of the most talented characters in the show. The only reason that Naruto and Sasuke won against Kaguya was Kakashi. The only reason Kakashi wasn't broken in the early series was his psychological problems. The guy was literally watching graves and he was grieving instead of training. Now if you have read my previous plot points, Hiruzen had decided to treat Kakashi as it should have happened if people were using their logic in the manga. I am trying to make the characters use their brains here. In the chapter about Rock Lee's flashback there are many parts about Kakashi and his decision to finally accept treatment. The chapter also focuses on Kakashi's recovering and his training with Gai. It does not make sense for Kakashi to lose against Sasuke at this point of the story. Even according to cannon --> Naruto Uzumaki says Kakashi is smarter than Shikamaru Nara, has a better sense of smell than Kiba Inuzuka, is more adept with the Sharingan than Sasuke Uchiha, and has better taijutsu skill than Rock Lee. Kakashi is the definition of a genius. Of course Aizen is also genius but there are limits. In bleach even with kyoka suigetsu's broken ability it took him years to complete his plans. If I make him stronger than Kakashi now the power scale will break and the story will suck.

Don't worry. There will be 1 more chapter before the time skip.

I disagree with your points. Sasuke plays a careful game right now and knows that Hiruzen wants to stop his progress. However he is an unknown world without his previous powers. He does not want to openly antagonize Hiruzen because he want's his support to become Hokage. He has concluded that they consider him a risk already and he does not want to prove them right. If Sasuke starts to use aggresive methods to receive more jutsu , Hiruzen might decide that the risk it too much and he may try to erase his memories or stop his training completely. Sasuke is no out of options to get stronger. I have listed a complete list of areas that he can practice and improve. The list has so many options that Sasuke's main problem is that he does not have enough time and clones. Considering his many options there is no reason for Sasuke to risk going against the Hokage.

I know that but if you think about it both transformation and body replacement are like plot holes in Naruto. They both are E Rank and in reality they are better than most jutsu. Imagine a character with scientific knowledge like Orochimaru abusing these jutsus. It would completely break the story. If I make transformation jutsu changing the properties of an object a character like Aizen by his nature must abuse it to its limit and this will immediately make him OP and destroy the story. The same with body replacement. A lot of fanfictions made this jutsu work like a small scale flying thundergod and It does not make sense.I will try to make the power system and the character a little more realistic. If Aizen comes into this world and immediately takes an E rank and makes it S rank it is like all the other characters are completely morons. I want to respect this world and it's characters and I want to make Aizen OP but through logic and serious scientific experiments.

Hello. You forget that Kakashi had White fang to teach him. Sasuke also learned the fireball jutsu from his family and could also learn the academy 3 from them if they weren't dead. However the academy has to follow a protocol and can't just go around teaching jutsu because most of the kids are not mature enough and a large number of them are from a civilian background.

Don't worry about it w8 next chapter ;)

It was good till now but I dislike this 100%. Sorry but I have to drop it.