Badges 5
Moments 24
ohh my day just got better!!! yesss!! hahah if you don't mind, i have a question, when he got to the planet.. the "declared his" right? so that anyone that set foot in it would pay him up.. so why he is so worried about the pirates? hahha i was a long time ago that i read this, so could be kinda wrong.
ch 576 They Are Even More Desperate!
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard
We're glad you are back! know that i will use all my gems to help you, your story was the one that i missed the most and i think that there may be other people like me there, so just relax, write when you can and have a good recovery!!!
ch 575 How Exactly Are We Going To Emerge?
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard
yes and no.. i think this DC universe is from the young justice(i think), so there ... Constantine and all that kind of supernatural are not introduced(but they do have magic.. so ... meh?)
"Yeah, its real and sincere." Ember let out a deep breath. "I like that you stay true to what you say."
(Danny Phantom X DC)The Struggling Warrior Saga
TV · Insane_Nyon
what happened to Sol? after his last "evolution" i'm not seing it anymore
ch 173 Ch. 173 A dream of snakes
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
noice, just sad it maybe take some time to read again haha
ch 24 Chapter-24 : This... is Awesome
Ultimate player
Movies · I_Am_Noice
noice
ch 23 Chapter-23 : GM, I want to report a cheat!!!!!
Ultimate player
Movies · I_Am_Noice
man... overpower fanfics take all the fun of the process, yeah he can beat everyones as*, but than it wouldnt be fun, the most fun in system novels or OP novels is him getting stronger, because later is just faceslaps all the time, gets pretty borring like that
ch 0 6 Time Passes
Marvel's Osmosian
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
him making some friends its nice, just dont be forced, frienship takes at least some time to be fine, or just like him, logan and laura, fight for your life type of situation, and make him if possible, more vocal about his beef with scot, thanks for the novel!
ch 0 5 Negative Reaction
Marvel's Osmosian
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
yeah... i love the story.. but the harem and **** stuff... just isnt for me .. yeah a bit is fine, no problem.. but now is going to take a full week just to have some story progression?... yeah.. not for me.. dropping it, hope that you can create one that isnt full on *** in the future
ch 60 (Volume 2) Chapter 51: Hogwarts Express
Wizard King
Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
i think that absorving the speedforce would be wrong... in the MCU it doesnt exist.. try to adapt it, makes it like the skill can create a barrier that block air resistence and shields him from debris(a bug can kill him if he is fast enough), that way the aint THAT OP, but still OP
ch 12 Attack and Unexpected Turn
Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
the only thing i can see thats wrong... is that you are using portuguese hahaha well.. its fine.. myself as a brazilian its cool... it needs to be spanish
"Certifique-se de que ninguém me perturbe, não atenda a porta." I said.
Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
the world needs a good "PJ" fanfic
4. Greek Gods
Wizard King
Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
harry potter: lost son, harry potter and the rise of the protector.. even the reborn as batman little brother(i think this is the title), just dont fall to the harem trap... hhaha almost all fanfics are like this... the coolest ones are when the author dont force the MC to fuc..k every cute girl possible ahhahaha
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Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
its fine, Odin is afterall a pridefull god, he cant just be so calm
ch 11 Asgard and Learning
Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)
Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie
introduce a little of modern day enterprises... divide the work so he only need to aprove or know high level sh't, its better i think(personal opinion)
ch 38 Chapter 38: Lordship Duties Pt. 1
Wizard King
Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
i didn't this includes it.. thats why the +18 parts and no just this one... its way to fast for both ... i just thought that it wouldnt have another one so fast
ch 36 Chapter 36: Other Properties Pt.1
Wizard King
Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
Thank youu!!! haha it helped me understand it a lot better now!
ch 576 They Are Even More Desperate!
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard