Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)

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Lazy_writer

I liked your story, I hope you continue to publish, Very good idea about being an Osmocian, Kevin's potential in 10 is very great For a reason Kevin. He was one of the most powerful villains on Ben 10,000.

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Mud_Man

good book so far and yeah FIRST REVIEW oh yeah I'm the greatest :-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O:-O

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Hammad_Amir

OK good but don't stop in the middle complete it. And try giving him magic and sorcery immunity ..................................................................

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Hammad_Amir

Just don't send him to kamar taj. Otherwise ancient one will ask why she can't see him. At least first let him get as least protection from ancient one astral punch 👊 .

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moh999

I haven't found any good fics in a long time but when I saw ur Mc I liked the idea of it and when i read it i was greatly impressed keep up dude

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Saka_Super

I don’t know who reads this and gives him stones. this novel is one of the most unrealistic novels. Bitch as if Ms the center of the world is all reaching for him. but this is very strange. and the story itself is very bad. and Ms's train of thought is very strange. at this moment he says it is bad but in the next moment he says it is cool.

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Loot_Ranger

It's interesting. But nothing new. The dialogue is cookie cutter, with quick and non-detailed interactions. It's just too bland for me. A good start, but overall the interactions leave much to be desired as it doesn't give us much insight into the MC other than a Mary Stu like character. Besides the plots already been given away with how the first chapter handles meeting people. I hope you continue to write for your own joy. But it's too vanilla and rushed for me.

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The4thWAH

Love it already.. Idk, but i dont have any problem with this novel. I just like it. As it will be harem ,i got no prob at all more.. So this is some filler to reach the word requirements..

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Daoist721221

Rewrite is Up...............................................................................................................................................

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Wulfie_Dharmac

It's surprisingly good. When I saw the title, I really thought that it is subpar. I thought that just like Kevin, the MC will only have a tenth of the powers and will not be upgrading. But this proved me wrong! I recommend that people read this piece of work. You will like this.

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black_lordd

. . . . . . . . . . . . . .awesome fanfiction

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Renji

Gimme more more pls more Don't stop updating I love this.... .. .. ... .,. .. ... .. .. .... .... .. .. .. gjjjuguiuyeidfbddjekxndjkdksjzgreuije

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Daniel_Silva_5759

Gostei da sua história, espero que continue a publicar, Muito boa ideia sobre ser um Osmociano, O potencial de Kevin em 10 é muito grande Por uma razão, Kevin. Ele era um dos vilões mais poderosos do Ben 10.000.

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yoge

Great idea definitely gonna be famous do upload more chapters fastly.

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Chaos_Swan_king

i didn't have high hopes for this because it seemed like one of those novels that the author drops quickly and i was right....almost. recently new chapters have been updated and i am very much looking forward to more updates. the fact that the concept intrigues me is also a deciding factor. i just hope he doesn't mess up....no pressure though.

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shirou_yuki

incredible story I can't believe I haven't seen it before, I hope for the pairing it's harem with jean and kitty, maybe lorna too, I can't wait for you to put out the next chapter

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emiya_naruto25

good story, for matchmaking, I can't wait for the next chapter, when you start making the car don't forget to put a tank mode like the one in Ben 10, as well as the ability to fly, hope it's harem with jean and kitty.

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HR_07

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Clamas837

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