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brush up your geography, india is in the south, in the west of china is Central Asia.
According to her description, why did this Su Country seem so much like a magically modified ancient China?
A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees
Games · The Key In 10 Years
well. you need to make mc super strong super quick so some plot holes are needed.
ch 0 5 I'll start with you guys!
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
well,ants do go after there food and they get food very easily those dumb dogs just looks at them.
The other alternative was to rob a military convoy, and as impressive as it was, the Red Dragon gang was merely that, a junkyard gang. There was no way it could go against a military convoy with a white mecha in it. It would be like an ant trying to rob a labrador.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
nop, just a greedy idiot who will need super thick plot armour to stay alive.
Okay fine, a greedy boy.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
mc isn't smart like he think he is, he is not street smart just a dumdum, a kid who thinks he is the smartest in the room but a joker.
I stared dumbly at her for a moment. I could feel my world crumbling around me. So my home wasn't as hidden as I thought? People actually knew that I lived here? AMELIA DRAGONOS knew I lived here??
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
this story is really full of plot holes so big that you can fit an elephant inside it lol. he is like a super smart 10 year old who now looks like a 12 year old 5feet dwarf He-Man ( but sometimes he looks old enough that he can be father of a 10 year old kid) i will try to read few more chapters so i am now locking up my common sense.
"Well, well. What do we have here?" She demurred at me coyly as she noticed my handsome features. She ignored me for a moment as she began to study the area. After a few short moments, she looked at me in confusion and asked, "Where's the helicopter wreckage? And where's Justin? Are you his… elder brother? Father?"
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
is he really 10 year old or just a old man inside a 10 year old body.
First time you tried the roller coaster, first time you went to school, first time you had chocolate, first time you skipped school, first time you kissed, first time you had… well. All those first times, add them up together and multiply it by ten.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
this is geting out of hand
Within seconds, I was fully encased with metal armor, from my head to my toe. And a four-bladed helicopter rotor grew out of my back.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
don't expect any. whenever read this kind of story with super thick plot armour, just lock your common sense inside a box and throw it away
My dad was a military man, and all he had at home were military books. There were no fairy tales or feven adult fiction. Literally every single book was military in nature. Tactics, strategies, analysis of hardware and software, history, political science, technology etc.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
*ding* * you are now host of super mecha core system*
To my utmost shock, the helicopter wreckage which had protected me from the snow, rain, wind and sun for the past two years, suddenly just… poofed? Burst into grey particles and surged into my body.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
i don't know where the author get that idea but a 60kg 10 year old is not healthy. and you can't just make a 10 year old a jacked up He-Man. it's weird !
I was definitely at least a hundred and sixty centimeters tall. And judging by the muscles on my arms that seemed to be chiseled out of marble, I was probably around sixty kilograms.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
true masochist, it's hard core( mecha core)
Truly the greatest pleasure can only be enjoyed in light of the greatest pain.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
sifi dantian
It was still in my tummy area, where it had made its entrance earlier.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
teach me how to sense energy too. i want to check if there is corona inside me .
I sat down quietly, trying to sense the energy within my body.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
for intergalactic travel power isn't the only thing it need. and as usaa develop this technology then there have to be war.
The second ranked power of the world, The European Empire, soon followed suit. Within a decade, the other powers of the world had developed their own oversized robots powered by similar applications of the technology.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
if it's robot then it should be japan that will do it first, they love big robots lol.
The second ranked power of the world, The European Empire, soon followed suit. Within a decade, the other powers of the world had developed their own oversized robots powered by similar applications of the technology.
The Undying Mecha Emperor
Fantasy · mrant12
the story is a mess. it's full of plot hole . there is no consistency, no logic . a writer should at least read what he/she is writing. if the apocalypse just happened how the hell people know about monster and dungeon before when it just happened .
Surviving the Apocalypse With My Three SSS Rank Wives
Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel