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5 star from me .... hope u continue .. from what i read . i feel like i am reading a script .. u should add some life to the scene dont leave it to our imagination

i dont know how to write a review for this one .. all i see till now is we have a really long prologue .. also u need to put some life in the story.. interaction between ppl and mc .. also shorten other character pov .. that is my opinion thou

hello ... first of all the idea is good , update is good and character is good BUT .. why should i read it ? u r sticking to the original story .so what is there for me ?.. u should make ur own story in the world of 1 piece dont follow the original

its been a while since i enjoyed reading a ff .. i really like it a lot 5 from me in every thing and all i can say to the author is thank you really for writing and sharing it with us

first i love this one . i enjoy reading it need faster update but that is my wishful thinking its ur right to update whenever u can or want just one request plz keep making it interesting by doing some changes to the main naruto story