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KnightShade420

KnightShade420

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I am a reading addict. I love to read fanfictions especially with Op male main character.

2017-07-08 Joined Canada

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I don’t know this power but when I googled it I saw the summoner was summoning wolves. So why rabbits? Or am I missing something?

According to the scroll, he can give mental commands to the rabbit, so he does. And the rabbit moved just like he wanted to, it's not exactly how he wanted to but it worked nonetheless.

Naruto The Shadow King

Naruto The Shadow King

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

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As he has all of shikimarus memories he should know the teachers name.

He remembers that Naruto didn't pass, and then he was tricked into stealing the scroll of sealing by one of the teachers whose name he doesn't remember. 

Naruto The Shadow King

Naruto The Shadow King

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

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Wow the ship had enough food for a whole year?

To complicate matters, Logan found himself on an unfamiliar ship without any navigation skills. Fortunately, the ship carried enough food to prevent him from becoming the first traverser in history to starve despite possessing a cheat.

Mangaka in the StrawHats

Mangaka in the StrawHats

Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation

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I am not telling you to change your wishes or anything but I am just saying writing a self insert who is technically an oc sounds really complicated and you might get tired of writing this fic pretty easily. If all you want is for the character to integrate into the storyline and not treat everyone as a character then you could have his memories sealed till the start of the first season.
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This sounds like so much work. I would have wished to have technopathy. The power to control all technology and interface with it. With this power he could do everything he wants without having to work hard.
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Ok the author was just using the word wish but he meant my choice of the world is modern family as Haley’s twin. Not counted as one of his 3 wishes.
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I mean the god said world of your choosing and 3 wishes. So I guess his first wish is to be Haley’s twin because the world choice is already given.
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I am starting to hate this mc. He is a Virgin Mary allways trying to sacrifice himself. Doesnt he understand his life doesn’t belong to himself anymore. His lover gave up half her soul to make him a demigod. Too much drama is headache inducing. I am reading this for the multiverses massages and 20 chapters in I am not even seeing the start.

Damn, am I sure? potentially sacrifice my life for a busty blonde furry nine-tailed-fox heartbroken and depressed mama? There are so many appealing adjectives. Oh, I have made dumber decisions in my life with worse payouts. Why the fuck no? My instincts are kicking in... busty mothers must be protected and massaged, no matter what.

DxD: Multiversal Therapist

DxD: Multiversal Therapist

Anime & Comics · Photosphere

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I mean even if you don’t have an insurance if you got run over then the person driving would have had to pay right. Unless it was a hit and run.

My life was a mess, which culminated with me having an accident; I was run over by a car. I had no insurance; my parents had to pay the fees, and they were very disappointed in me, understandably so. I got a fracture in my thigh bone that, according to the practitioner, 'would never recover.'

DxD: Multiversal Therapist

DxD: Multiversal Therapist

Anime & Comics · Photosphere

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Why not was used too many times in succession. Last chapter last paragraph also had why not so it felt weird and forced.

"Well, she's lonely and doesn't have a partner, so why not? And to tell you the truth, she's beautiful and hot, and you two will look good together," she said.

Primogenitor In Twilight

Primogenitor In Twilight

Movies · God_Of_Magic0

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This is why you need a backstory. Amnesia is so lame and overused. This makes my want to give up on this story.
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"Well, I don't remember anything. I only know that I woke up in my bed without any memories," Raizel says, smiling inside his mind.

Primogenitor In Twilight

Primogenitor In Twilight

Movies · God_Of_Magic0

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I hate no limits in money because I am a fan of investing arcs. I get it if the author is not interested in making money and investing money arcs but personally no matter how many times I read it I enjoy it. Having a trust fund of a 100 million and a house in forks. Maybe u could use ot for a back story. I mean unless you don’t want to touch on the backstory of the character, the fillers will eventually ask why he moved to Forks and what happened to his parents.

God: "Dear Alex, or now Raizel, welcome to your new life. I write this letter to tell you that I have only given you three familiar powers because having all twelve familiars in that world is a waste of power. So, I decided to give you three familiars and, in place of the other nine familiars, I have given you immeasurable strength, true martial art mastery, and there is one more gift, but it's a surprise. Now goodbye, and there is a bank card with no limit in money."

Primogenitor In Twilight

Primogenitor In Twilight

Movies · God_Of_Magic0

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Personally I am more of a fan of cadis etrama di raizel. But I would be more then happy as Alucard aswell.

"Yeah, good for you; now let's decide your powers, but only vampire type," God said. He snapped his fingers again, changing the roulette from world to anime characters like Cadis Etrama Di Raizel, Alucard, Dracula, etc.

Primogenitor In Twilight

Primogenitor In Twilight

Movies · God_Of_Magic0

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They don’t have to recognize him to tell their boss when they tried to kidnap the detectives kids they got attacked by a power user. The detective also still doesn’t know his kids are in danger. This was a stupid discussion. The best plan was to tell the detectives about the would be kidnap pets and let them handle it. Maybe help the secretly by making them slip on water. Nothing so blatant that he did.

One of them spoke with utter discomfort "G-Get away from h-here…let's g-get to the c-car." They were having trouble breathing and even maintaining their balance. I was sure that their eyesight was also clouded due to the pain so they wouldn't be able to recognize me even if I came in front of them a few days later. 

In Marvel as Peter Parker's elder brother

In Marvel as Peter Parker's elder brother

Movies · lazarus898

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