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  • The Hitting Zone

    The Hitting Zone

    Competitive Sports baseball

    4.7

    Jake has it rough: a missing dad, an abusive mother and a hidden talent for baseball which sends his mother off the deep end. Sent to live with a foster family, his love for baseball is revived, and with their help, will Jake start to shine like the future superstar he is? Please consider donating gifts with paid stones. If you can’t, I understand so no worries. *Thanks for letting me turn your review into my new summary, Tashady! **Names, faces, and places aren’t real. Total work of fiction. Nonetheless, it is my work of fiction so please don’t post it without permission. **Also, I bought the royalty-free license for my cover. Which means I can use it without having to pay royalties. If you have any questions, comment on my latest chapter or reach me on discord. Venmo: @alwaysbroke (my profile pic is a baseball field)

  • Something More Than Ordinary

    Something More Than Ordinary

    Romance

    Riley decided relationships just weren’t for her after being burned twice...by the same guy. She rather be unattached in order to protect her fragile heart. Josh is a loner type, focused on football, graduation, and making the NFL. He’s never had any kind of intimate relationship before and it’s not even in the forefront of his mind. The two meet under unlucky circumstance when Riley needs a ride from a friend and now they’re living under the same roof. Can they find something more within one another? Or is it just another heartbreak waiting to happen? With exes popping up and trouble hiding in the dark, can they even make it if they want to? This will only be around 70k words since I want to be able to publish it as a novel on amazon. Update on Friday’s. The Hitting Zone is my main work and will be receiving most of my attention and free time, so you can support me there if you want. (If you can, great. If not, that’s okay. I know all about the broke life.)

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BearHawk: Another Racist Webnovel, the least you can do is put in the racist tag since so many other novels of the same type has done it.
Also MC seems like someone who looks down on everyone and thinks the worlds revolve around them.

if there was a negative 5 star I would use that to rate this novel.

Strike Back, Proud Goddess!
10 hours ago

Diseye: I can see you are pretty staunch in your beliefs, that enables you to defend racism expressed in a book you haven’t read. Talking to you is useless, hopefully you gain more life experiences that can affect your thinking pattern.

P.s. Having sexual preferences is different from holding a stereotypical opinion on a group of people in general.

Strike Back, Proud Goddess!
10 hours ago

Diseye: You haven’t even read the novel and you actually accuse someone of playing the victim card, i read Chinese novels where the mc becomes whiter and thus prettier but i have no problem with that as i understand that it is embedded in their culture, but in this book the they directly tied the aspect of being black and ugly to Africans which I cannot accept. You claim that someone thinking all dark skinned people are ugly is preference, but no that is just plain ignorance, and yes the fact that you could spout all that confidently says a lot about your background of ignorance.

Strike Back, Proud Goddess!
10 hours ago

Bhy85: That you can actually say this confidently says a lot about you and your background. In terms of the “sexual” preference you mentioned, it’s either you like men, women or both. The fact that you feel you’re justified to “dislike” dark skin as opposed to just not attracted is quite... 🤦🏽‍♀️ keep justifying your ignorance and continue disliking people based on their colour. It’s not your fault

Strike Back, Proud Goddess!
10 hours ago

Bhy85: I found the book full of racism. The girl was discriminated against for being from a poor background with no education and her physical features. She in turn discriminates against others. Apparently, “black” skin is ugly. Now why would I eventually waste my money reading a book written by someone who thinks having a darker skin means you’re ugly?

Strike Back, Proud Goddess!
10 hours ago

bbwolf: See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

The Hitting Zone · C384
13 hours ago

ikka: Aww our poor jakey.. 🥺🥺🥺😣😣😣

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13 hours ago

WhyTee: Looks like Jake's brother also got the baseball talents

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13 hours ago

WhyTee: Yeah, those things stick with parents the most. Fear and pain of your young ones

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13 hours ago

MonkeyMikey: Poor Mrs Atkins. I hope in the future we get some nice moments between Jake and her. In fact, I think that relationship could easily become the closest Jake has out of all the Atkins once he starts to heal.

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13 hours ago

sergioGM: And poor Mrs. Atkins 😞

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13 hours ago

sergioGM: Thanks for the chapters! We're back to the feelings 😳

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13 hours ago

vhad: Poor Jake 😣

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13 hours ago

m1sa: I select my own fonts xD more chapterrrr

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13 hours ago

bluesbarr: We have all been there, brother...

The Hitting Zone · C384
13 hours ago
It was a Friday 😂😭 I bowl! I do all kinds of errands and go out for lunch. These next few chapters might all feel like cliffhangers....until there’s a resolution or you know...when I end the book. View More

Mannymangos: Though I'm still debating whether or not to "this is Sparta" kick a certain author from a cliff.

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13 hours ago

Mannymangos: See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

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13 hours ago

Mannymangos: Though I'm still debating whether or not to "this is Sparta" kick a certain author from a cliff.

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13 hours ago

Swayzs: See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

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13 hours ago

Mannymangos: Thanks for the chapter

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13 hours ago

ikka: I gotta have to ask.. I was thinking and thinking.. So now i am asking.. In what year is this happening? Because i could easyly see it happen in the early 2000 or Even today.. But thats around 20 years in diffends.. And it could Even happen 10 years from now or more.. And I wasent really sure how the time table was.. So now i am asking.. Had too 😂😂

The Hitting Zone · C379
1 day ago
This year...lol. Nothing special. I’m not good at complicating dates or anything. View More

ikka: I gotta have to ask.. I was thinking and thinking.. So now i am asking.. In what year is this happening? Because i could easyly see it happen in the early 2000 or Even today.. But thats around 20 years in diffends.. And it could Even happen 10 years from now or more.. And I wasent really sure how the time table was.. So now i am asking.. Had too 😂😂

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1 day ago

KajiKouXaito: So far as the story goes, I had a constant problem with the pacing. It was that the pace of the story is too fast that the progression of their romance was cut too short to the point that I didn't have any attachment to their romance. There wasn't any lingering special memories about their love story which is a detrimental issue because this story is romance.

Also, the transition from scene to scene is very confusing. Using dividers weren't enough because the jumps from scenes are just too big. Words like, meanwhile, 2 years later and such would be such a great help to locate the setting off the story.

As for the characters, Ren and Shinobu`s character design are kind of established but still lacks on some parts. It would probably be better if chapters are designated to elaborate their past rather than them merely as a conversation. I bet you would be more attached to the MC's if you get to know them more.

As for some of the side characters, I find it dreadful to say but their existence was very weak, it's like they only appear so that the MC's wouldn't seem like they are the only people in the world. I didn't feel any attachement to these characters that their relevance to the story was merely "just because". It wouldn't hurt to add some spice between their friendship so that the MC's character design would also be more established. Specially these are the people who got involved and are involved with the MC's.


As for the plot and setting. I told it in one of my comments, the beginning was too much of a cliche, but it was okay if as the story progresses, this cliche scenery would be converted to something extravagant, but with as the chapters add up, nothing special really happens and still runs on the cliche pathway.

But let me make myself clear. I am not saying that the writer wasn't good nor the story itself was bad. In fact, the writer writes in a manner that is not tiring to read which would complement the issues of the novel. Which is why I still expect more development and progression in the story.

I want to read more of it which is a positive thing because somehow, I wanna see more from this writer. I believe their talent.

That sums up my review, and as far as today, my rating is 3.2 and I'm hoping I'd rate it higher next time.

Thank you.

Devotion [BL]
2 days ago

Jeffere: Just so anyone's wondering, this is definitely one of those novels that WILL contain some type of rape. Don't understand why QI keeps promoting such novels; I've read some of these types of novels before- they make me creeped out more than anything. I read wuxia and rom-coms alike, whenever rape or a harem trope approaches, it makes me question 'why am I reading such trash.'

This novel also has 3k+ chaps... This novel will surely turn premium and you can imagine the prices QI will charge per chap (200 words per spirit stone and 1k words per chap). With that many chapters, I can imagine lots of repetitive plots.

When I look for a rom-com novel, I want a short and snappy story, maybe 500-600 chaps with no repetitive plots (e.g NTR, rape and new love protags), not one with 3k+ chaps full of crap that I've read again and again.

There are so many reasons I would recommend not to read this novel, but if you're one of those that do enjoy them- remember to think deeply about the stuff that happens in them and compare them to real life.

Endless Pampering Only For You
2 days ago

sergioGM: Thanks for the chapter :)

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2 days ago

Clown_Of_God: Tks

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2 days ago

kulmai: See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

The Hitting Zone · C381
2 days ago

Mannymangos: Funny. I too hurt my knee playing ball this week. Read these two chapters while holding ice to my knee. Smh.

Tbh i never saw the point to family tree projects.

The Hitting Zone · C381
2 days ago
Ouch! Feel better soon!

And yessss. I hated it. I even had to do one in college. My dads side is big and complicated cuz it seems like everyone had to be married twice. And then my mom’s side is all dead so it’s hard to even come up with the names. View More

Mannymangos: Funny. I too hurt my knee playing ball this week. Read these two chapters while holding ice to my knee. Smh.

Tbh i never saw the point to family tree projects.

The Hitting Zone · C381
2 days ago

vhad: Mrs. Atkins 😭👍

The Hitting Zone · C381
2 days ago
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