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this book writing style is excellent, but its separate story chapter and information chapter for some reader its unique,as for me its make my brain to read it carefully less then miss the plot i call those information chapter cliffhanger chapter, personally prefer blend those chapter. if author keep changing pov its sure thing story development can be rich, i just hope author makes the story unpredictable, deception to the reader not just in the story. well i take a guess since i just read till chapter 25, that will be more character show up since author keep changing pov am afraid author brain will blow up, this novel isn't suitable to be webnovel if he want to make masterpiece as for world background well i need a map lol

its actually good novel, whats wrong with lvl up fast? there is a lot of overpowered mc novel thats more popular than this and yet these mobs complaining and judge this novel trash its just plain stupid. its just because ur taste is changing not because the novel is trash

its actually good novel, whats wrong with lvl up fast? there is a lot of overpowered mc novel thats more popular than this and yet these mobs complaining and judge this novel trash its just plain stupid.

sigh its actually have a great idea hint system, but the story isnt to my liking just like the other comments, face slapin character, harem drama, fast paced, didn't describe the world background, if ur new reader perhaps its good read novel, but if u already read many face slapin novel this one is too bland

for me this one of the best plot story i read so far

i see the title, i add it, the title already describe this novel. restaurant, shop, winemaker, bookstore, the concept its to my liking. cause am already tired of those colleting girl, face slapping, young master, top of the world godly shit novel, will it be the one let's see

this novel will be one of my favorites, no both of ur novel will be perhaps all of it. i love the story setting, changing pov, the pace, i didn't find any hateful character or some act that I don't like, its easy to read despite the grammar problem. i just hope the author didn't drop it, or push himself too much, what i want is ur good chapter not rushed one. take ur time and finish ur problem first. i will wait in September for ur great chapter.

i dont like the mc too ignoble, especially when he throw away the woman, just live like a monk would you, plot armor is too heavy, if someone found his secret he become demon if not he become a coward

bro this just some suggestions perhaps if u want to write another novel slow pace like this, try changing pov, and improve conversation between character. or if u want to improve ur skill at that try rewrite some funny conversation u had. cheer's [img=recommend]

read 40s chap , i like this kind of novel, in some area its become repetitive story thats whats the slow paced novel problem is, i like the mc act like a normal people , easy to read, im bored of those arogant novel, so this one is fresh novel for me , i will read some more-