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Arkinslize

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I hate plotholes. https://discord.gg/d8udP7Q

2017-05-19 Joined France

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Replied to atome_4_000
instead of which word?

When it came down to which Intent was most useful for defeating an enemy, True Will of Killing remained by far the most versatile: it not only increased the lethality of attacks but also allowed the aura itself to intimidate, paralyze with fear, and even inflict death independently of the fighter's spiritual pressure.

The Oracle Paths

The Oracle Paths

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Replied to DBOMB_YO
It's "stand" and not "withstand" on my side so it's webnovel trying to catch pirate accounts once again.

However, the vast difference in their Oracle Ranks was no laughing matter. As soon as Lysandra directed her palm towards Zerei and her hand shimmered with a pale radiance, the Aerelian's broken bones started to knit together rapidly. Seconds later, he was able to stand once again.

The Oracle Paths

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Replied to Harem_Hater
fixed thanks. I've rewrited the sentence a bit instead.
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Replied to yuhmyuhm
As said above, the mistake is not from me. The sentence appears as "come back to life" on my side.

It goes without saying that if his soul was completely annihilated due to a failed baptism, he would not come back to life as could be the case with his body. If his physical body remained whole, it might survive but would enter a vegetative coma until the eventual emergence of a new consciousness that would have nothing to do with the current him.

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In the blink of an eye, Jake towered over twenty-five meters tall, his mass exceeding thousands of tons. His impeccably sculpted muscular body was riddled with lesions, his face ghastly pale from the backlash of Twyluxia after drawing so much biomass from his Inner Space.

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Replied to Chinaistrashccpbad
?

ch 1080 What's Your Play?

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Replied to Hunter8k
Fair enough.
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Replied to OzandjoOrowa
Jake didn't move, but many things happened.

"I think we have a duty to help our allies bathe in peace." Jake chuckled, cracking his neck. "Let's get rid of these pests, shall we?"

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Replied to OzandjoOrowa
brown-ocher because of his current bloodline.

It's worth noting that Kang Jun didn't really fit the Underworld Barbarian mold even though he had the build. His slicked-back sandy hair and deep brown skin contrasted starkly with the mostly black or gray hair of these royal guards, not to mention their pale complexions.

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Replied to Mr_Babbles
Jake is actually very handsome since he got his new bloodline. Fairy kind of beauty. He has never been ugly either by the way. Just that Myrtharian Jake was somewhat "bulky", looking more like a Chad than a handsome male model.

What made it more amusing was that the Soulmancer King was likely hiding among these five and was renowned for being exceptionally beautiful. Except now, it was clear that the beauty of these five clowns was at best mediocre, with only the blue-blooded recruit qualifying as passable.

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Replied to atome_4_000
Jake also arrived almost three days ago. The baptism lasted two days.

"Oh? Already negotiating, Cho Min Ho?" She sneered, her laughter failing to reach her eyes. "I've killed some of my playthings for less than that. But let's say I give you a chance. What do you want in return?"

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Replied to Irappu
Thank you for your review. I admit I'm struggling to grasp exactly what you're getting at and what you're criticizing about my novel, especially after over 1,000 chapters. No character growth? Maybe I'm biased as the author, but seriously? Are we even reading the same story? Most reviews and discussions on Discord suggest his transformation is quite drastic on every level. Traits you might not like, such as his cynicism or pettiness, are part of his character. They're not going away. If you're referring to his romantic relationship/s, they develop slowly, but romance was never the main focus. There are plenty of other web novels out there that might better cater to that interest. You also mentioned that it often feels like the antagonists are smarter than the hero, as if he's always one step behind, merely reacting. But that's intentional. The four lost years you mentioned couldn't have been anticipated unless he became completely paranoid and refused to leave his home. I'm always amazed by how some readers dislike any situation where the main character faces challenges, whether it's betrayal, unexpected twists, or even legitimate defeats. I recently read "Shadow Slave" (the site's top pick, right?) and it receives similar criticisms, yet I loved it. As for your comparison to "Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse", that comparison speaks volumes about your preferences. They're vastly different stories with differing metrics. I can tell you're not a webnovel writer, because if you were, you'd understand that many factors beyond quality influence views and profitability. First and foremost: release rate. I have a full-time job in the real world. Writing is just a hobby. Yes, it's paid, but it's supplementary income. I live in an expensive country, and the income from TOP would barely sustain me above the minimum wage, which is a no-go. So, as it doesn't earn enough to live on, I can't leave my actual job. Once readers (many of whom use pirate sites) understand this, fewer authors will abandon their stories. We're neither slaves nor volunteers. Regarding "Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse", in terms of regular privilege readers (those truly committed to supporting us financially), we're similar, with 300-500 privilege readers monthly. But with my lower release rate (6-7 chapters per week vs. 14+), I make fewer daily subscriptions. So, I earn less (around 30-50% less due to this factor alone), which drops my rankings in Trending, Power, and Golden Ticket (since a reader has to spend 500 coins to earn a golden ticket). This results in lower visibility and credibility, but also, I rarely participate in the Win Win Event (since I don't always publish 1,500 words a day, I'm disqualified). This is the only guaranteed way to get featured spots like banners. That's significant visibility I'm missing. Lastly, the first few chapters are crucial in grabbing reader attention, and I admit the first volume needs work for various reasons.
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