Thanks. Was a bit tired when I wrote this one.
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Nobody had made the connection yet. After all how would they now? Thanks for reading. :)
ch 54 Debrief
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sup
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Velkor.[I'm just replying to all comments so I can see them.]
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bro your comments don't show up on the chapters so I don't know where to make the corrections. :(
All this dress up for a group of people that I was sure I would dislike, but it was necessary. The rules might not be fair but playing against them hinders me more than it helps me.
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Yo, what exactly is this correction? :)
My muscles ached, and my bones were heavy. My hands were coated in blood. My heart beat rapidly in my chest as my senses strained, looking for the next opponent.
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I should probably mention the pretending in that part. Thanks
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Thanks for reading. :)
ch 38 Where are you?
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Have a cookie :)
"Leonardo DaVinci at your service. I will be your supervisor for the rest of your provisional trial."
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This is the Mc. He's the one with jin and the redhead Isabella
ch 37 Transportation
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He's "Pretending" to have his head. His true body is still headless.
ch 37 Transportation
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Looks like I'll have to sign an exclusivity contract.Is that must?
I think close works just as well.:)
No, I couldn't let this connection close.
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The adaptation fragment worked with what it had.
My headless nature was yet another wedge in my life that I would have to overcome.
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Not until a 100 at least.
ch 33 Dullahan
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Were would the his go?
It wouldn't be farfetched to imagine that the man had powers that would allow for hit survive. He had, after all, been able to grab our souls and send them to that space. I doubted that he was all that powerful given how much weaker powers seemed to be here, but I could totally be wrong. I would just have to trust that modern technology was up to the job.
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Don't you...
Into the void [ITV]
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