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The reason for the long drawn out chapter is to set the story and the characters. The Main Character at this point in time was simply playing around with ‘friends’. He had no real intention of playing at first but didn’t want to lose so he tried his hardest. So, he played along with them and selected blitz crank.

Also, these first ten chapters set the mood for the story. We can expect ‘hilarious’ shout casting for the matches in the future with ‘vivid’ descriptions of in game character interactions/ personalities mixed with the in story character interactions behind the game.

It’s a bit overwhelming, indeed, but it’s good writing none the less. View More

Fullmetal: Kind of weird that one random game with noobs is like 10 chapters.

I would understand if it was a professional game but is there a need for such a drawn out game with 9 noobs with below level 30, playing Brand/Vel Koz/Lux as support to destroy them would take like what 10 minutes?

Also weird he picked blitzcrank, its fine to play him and possible to carry but much easier with any mage when you surpass the other players by so much.

League of Legends: League of Unknowns · C16
1 month ago
🙇🏽‍♂️ respect ✊🏽 hopefully they will continue their story internationally View More

Aspirer: I'm Really a Superstar. It got discontinued (banned i heard) at chapter 1696, but it had a lot of comedy and slice of life. The nickname of the MC is "Facesmacking Zhang" ... I had a lot of the story i didnt like, bug i read it all and now i miss it :'( haha

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C53
1 month ago
If you read the next chapter, remember what I said. Look at his sword move names. There’s your evidence that I’m not too misguided. View More

My_path: Hmmm ok

Nine Yang Sword Saint · C102
1 month ago
What’s IRAS stand for? View More

Aspirer: Kinda reminds me of IRaS ... Is he gonna go knock on Bi Family's door? Lol. (Those that know the reference <3 ) .... Development in the chapter was kind of slow and cliche though :'( ... *Wishing for some originality*

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C53
1 month ago
These criticisms have nothing to do with the translation at this point- only the authors writing. View More

WonderDuckie: Really reaching for straws there arent you? Criticizing helps translators learn the nuances of the language their supposed to be translating too. Pointing out their mistakes help them edit their work to make it easier to read for future people. Also sense when did I EVER harass someone? Criticizing is not harassing and I suggest if you think otherwise to very slowly read the definitions of the two words then.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago
Clearly the criticisms I’m talking about aren’t the constructive types. I’m sure you’ve understood that. You simply want to argue and for that I’m not interested. View More

WonderDuckie: Really reaching for straws there arent you? Criticizing helps translators learn the nuances of the language their supposed to be translating too. Pointing out their mistakes help them edit their work to make it easier to read for future people. Also sense when did I EVER harass someone? Criticizing is not harassing and I suggest if you think otherwise to very slowly read the definitions of the two words then.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago
I have no questions for an oaf who simply wants to troll. You are the very definition of sad. I hope your lifestyle and habits improve. Aside from that, people like you are far beneath me. Peace View More

LaoTze: what's sad is that you think the fact that people read this 💩means they love it, or the fact that people love this 💩means it's not 💩. Here's the truth: even without the filler, this novel is 💩; many people have bad taste in who and what they love; and many other people are desperate for anything to fill time, so will read 💩 novels. I will continue to read this novel while spending few spirit stones, and I will continue to 💩on it until and unless it miraculously improves. Because I want to kill time, and this novel deserves to be 💩on, because it is 💩. Any questions?

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago

irlsgirl: Just to inform you: this is a finished novel. The only improvement we can hope for is the quality of the translation. Regarding the original work's unbelievable dragging of chapters, the asian light novel genre pqys by the length and number of chapters, so the longer they can stretch the story, the more they earn. In that context, this is actually well-written (but editing of this book's translation here on Webnovel is sorely subpar), just not in accordance with Western writing standards. If you want to read the story fast, you can try a machine translation site.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago
This is a completed or 2000 ch plus series. Your commenting on writing from years prior. And more specifically face slap centered novels are a niche that are extremely popularized in China at the time this was written. Your criticism is ignominious as it does nothing for the story.

The only thing that people like you will do for this story is get Qidian to drop it from your hate mail.

Quite frankly, I don’t want to see that happen.

If you don’t like a translation- don’t read it. Don’t harass individuals that share a work to you about the works nature when they can’t edit it. Even if that’s for money. You are not the only reader. View More

WonderDuckie: Every reader has the right to criticize what they read. It's how authors improve. By only praising blindly the author will never improve their work. Same thing for translators by only every praising blindly they never get to notice their mistakes and thus never improve. A true author/translator would encourage readers to point out problems to improve them selves. Something people on this site seem to not understand. Blind loyalty helps no one. Specially not Authors or Translators.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago
Nope.

Just something I recalled from my history of reading.

Take it or leave it if you’d like. View More

My_path: Can u share the source, cant find anything related on Google about the information that u shared??

Nine Yang Sword Saint · C102
1 month ago
For those tired of the face slapping in this novel. . .

For those tired of the drawn out description of so and so disdaining whose who causing such and such reaction from insert name here. . .

For those who don’t want to simply enjoy the story for the story being told. . .

We understand your issue. The issue is not with the writer or the writing. The issue is within yourself. Leave one comment. If it really irks you. Leave the story behind. Bashing a story written across thousands of words and chapters, loved by many, when you have no accreditation or accolades is sad. Seek help if you’re sad. View More
Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C139
1 month ago
The nine void calamity is Hindu-Buddhism’s Ragnarok.

It’s basically when all nine realms (the heaven, the earth, hell, the spirit realm, the realm of gods, the realm of reincarnation, the realm of fate, and the realm of men) are severed and destroyed leaving only the original void/ true nothingness.

In reality, the sword are could also be named:

“Return to Origin Sword-style” as it’s been described. Even “Sword of Absolution” in English. But those two names remove the eastern flare. So yeah View More

kevoh: What does "void nine calamity" even mean?

Nine Yang Sword Saint · C102
1 month ago

Dallas_Kramer: He had a little over 2100 at first then he got 1900 from his 30 classmates. He bought 3000 in fruits and was left with only 100ish? Did I miss something?

Spare Me, Great Lord! · C14
1 month ago
Yup View More

AnonAMouse: im guessing its the influence of being a dragon now, you know steal from me and I will destroy you, step on me and I'll trample you, and finally touch my reverse scale and you must die

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C31
1 month ago
If you read carefully amongst the first few chapters the author gave themselves a way out for this question. It stated that the MC was uncharacteristically persistent on having the rich kids on the Harley return him his investment on some fish he could simply make more of due to him being influenced by a dragon’s pride. View More

DeQuindrick: If you really think about it, he didnt really deserves to be in a 20 million yen( don't remember what the currency was) debt just for being arrogant.

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C31
1 month ago
This is the truth. My Chinese teachers Ling laoshi, and Chen laoshi, were wonderfully kind people. And I currently have a friend from Beijing named Li Ming Ke. He always makes sure I’m well. Very kind. View More

enzimiro: I can't judge a race based on things i've read or were written as fiction smh

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C85
2 months ago
If people aren’t this mean in school, why do people randomly shoot up schools?

They and there are obviously disturbed people in this world. If you’ve been sheltered enough to not interact with them yet, be grateful.

Sometimes the world is ugly. View More

OnePun: I am abandoning this novel. Not that i don't like but too much cliche scenes and faceslapping is getting on my nerves.

Mc is an 500 year old immortal. Why is he even going to school, shouldn't his knowledge be enough. Just f*cking apply for graduation. I don't know but in reality people are never this mean and has young master syndrome.

Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator · C26
2 months ago
We can just write it off as him being affected by the stone monkey genes genetic memories. It makes him more unrestrained. View More

Heretoc: MC was a normal human from Earth. So how can he be so insensitive to death? So ease with it?



I don't have problem with MC killing them. But how can a common man just kill anyone without any regrets or hesitation. It's not been long since he transmigrated, so he should till have morals from earth. Unless... He was an apathetic psychopath even on earth. Like Dexter?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C113
5 months ago
That’s just the quick math on how far the dude would have been falling in this story, calculated from meters to feet. Falling from 14 feet, off balance, can be pretty lethal if you land incorrectly. View More

ritanora: You lost me somewhere

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C90
5 months ago
Because it’s a Wizards pagoda not a Witches Broom View More

PaintMan: I would have been more interested if the MC for this was the period chick and chapter 1 is just her getting sucked into a different world on the bus ride because she accidentally got pierced by a stranger's jade pagoda(all the innuendos intended).

Lord of the Magical Beasts · C1
5 months ago
That’s because most overly rational individuals exhibit psychopathic behaviors. Psychologically, the more rational/intelligent you are, the more calm and detached you are to others. View More

Dao_Ancestor: Wonder how far from rank 3 he is, the police seems to hate his coolness though, it's like every rational and composed human must be a criminal

The Great Worm Lich · C51
6 months ago
Post Statement:

He just made a comment about his commoner status, having starved and they hadn’t, freshly reminding them of his social standing and struggles. View More

TaoistForbearance: Tbh, it does. It was observed that in commoner families, like Lith’s farming family, that the women would do more house chores and the men would fill the land.

So, due to Lith being a commoner, it is reasonable for the noble women to expect him to have ‘miseducation’ or a general lack of awareness of their ‘noble’ status/decorum.

Supreme Magus · C81
7 months ago
Tbh, it does. It was observed that in commoner families, like Lith’s farming family, that the women would do more house chores and the men would fill the land.

So, due to Lith being a commoner, it is reasonable for the noble women to expect him to have ‘miseducation’ or a general lack of awareness of their ‘noble’ status/decorum. View More

pixelelf21: The “Are you asking because we’re girls?!” And getting annoyed. First off, No. He asked everyone both the butchering and cooking questions. Never directed it at girls. 2nd, as nobles and mages they wouldn’t have been exposed to that kind of Bias. That’s what they have maids for. 3rdly, after him cooking really good food and explaining, why is the girl still angry? Doesn’t make sense. If Author is trying to set up something, I understand why he did that, but it is still very clumsy and doesn’t make much sense. (I like this book oh. Just giving some valid criticism, no bashing)

Supreme Magus · C81
7 months ago
The assumption is that the contracted beasts level was not Commander tier. View More

Pythius: guys i've been thinking... remember that asian guy who called a monster "mom". they kept talking about how the monsters child died so it adopted the human child and warmed up to him enough to make a contract. BUT PROBLEM! remember how Gao Peng couldnt make a contract with Dumby because his soul wasnt strong enough even though Dumby seemed more than willing to make a contract with him. and Gao Peng already had Da Zi so his soul was stronger than that of a normal human without contract... so how the heck did some kid make a contract with perfect grade commander monster just like that?!

Monster Pet Evolution · C255
8 months ago

Pythius: guys i've been thinking... remember that asian guy who called a monster "mom". they kept talking about how the monsters child died so it adopted the human child and warmed up to him enough to make a contract. BUT PROBLEM! remember how Gao Peng couldnt make a contract with Dumby because his soul wasnt strong enough even though Dumby seemed more than willing to make a contract with him. and Gao Peng already had Da Zi so his soul was stronger than that of a normal human without contract... so how the heck did some kid make a contract with perfect grade commander monster just like that?!

Monster Pet Evolution · C255
8 months ago

Koolpin: My guess is there’s a 100% chance he’ll screw something up trying to take the flower and he won’t wear a mask while doing it because “Durr me Mo Wen, me know medicine and martial arts but thinking is too hard durrrrrrrrrrrr”

Invincible Kungfu Healer · C174
8 months ago
An American Rapper, Waka Flaka Flame, had a friend who was purportedly killed over denying another ‘friend’ a bite of a candy bar he was eating.

The reality is, people without inhibition will do terrible things to people- let alone wish terrible things on others. View More

Shabba: Wtf is up with the these murderous bastards in LN 😂 I know it's a trope but isnt it but much to be delighted at the thought of someone you got to school with dying just because ONE time you'd caught him looking at the girl you liked?????

Divine Beast Adventures · C16
8 months ago
Let’s say each point of luck gives you a two times multiplier on the percent chance rate. Utilizing this formula: percent chance times double lucky to the power of luck value = .01(2^luckvalue), the MC would achieve a rate of 10.64% premium crafting. His results average a bit higher than that. So the MC is extra lucky. View More

NegaDaoHeart: Can someone explain to me how tf did he get 20 green in 140 tries when its basically 1% chance even if he has +10 luck, its absurd how from 1-2 green to 20. F2P btw

The Almighty Ring · C14
9 months ago

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The Dead Await Outside
11 months ago
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A Way of Self Actualisation · C1
11 months ago
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