Webnovel Author: ExiledImmortal - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Exactly.

You should apply a bit of technicality when using weapons, whether they are spears, swords or others. This way the variety of the combats will end up being greater, as well as its realism; in some parts, you end up being somewhat redundant due to the lack of this variability. Although this is just my opinion.

Are there going to be more archetypes of protagonists?

Are you writing for fun and giving yourself the possibility of the fanfic ending abruptly or do you plan to be consistent despite the mishaps? of course I don't say at the cost of everything hahaha.

sorry for the grammar.

author don't overexert yourself given the possibility that the quality of your work may diminish, otherwise, if you are comfortable with it, keep up the good work. Keep up the steady and consistent development of the story you are forming; I have high hopes for what you will build.

sorry for the grammar.

This is probably one of my favorite chapters, not because of what happens but rather because of the way you constructed the chapter. Showing in evidence the problems of the protagonist and his solutions while creating a more vivid world. Although previously there were cases in which this was achieved, not in such a significant and natural way.

Thanks for the chapter!