See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Yep even though i had some criticism before, i still tried to push through. But this is not worth it. Dropped. 👎
Another slave mc gimmick…. fckn hell!!
Damn! The loyalty side effect again?! Finn cursed in his mind. He needed to find a way to leave Micah's presence really quickly, or else, it would only be a matter of time before the man would notice something.
Magical Soul Parade
Fantasy · Astrl
The novel is good but why is it so exhausting to read? It feels like you are carrying a heavy load mentally. Every thing is described with more vocabulary than needed. Is it to increase the word count? I dont know but this could be so much more enjoyable if the writing was more efficient. Its a good novel dont get me wrong just unnecessarily mouthful.
And right then, Kael Heard it. It wasn't a howl, nor was it a roar; it was the skidding of scales on stone and steel. A sound that didn't belong to humans. A scraping glide, too heavy to be a snake, too smooth to be anything with legs. The noise carried with it a faint vibration through the rails, like something massive shifting in the dark.
Runebound Reverse Tower of The Dead
Games · Biako
A real noob asking noob questions. Classic.
"I have a good nose," he said. "He smelled different."
Runebound Reverse Tower of The Dead
Games · Biako
Welp, thats it then. I am out. 👋
She smirked at him. "You think you're smart, huh? You already accepted, you just asked that to piss me off and see my reaction, and to also probe for more information".
Reborn as a Mechanist with a God-Tier System
Fantasy · GREAT
If this is harem, i am out. 🤝
+1
What do you take me for? Someone who gets reincarnated into another world, knows the future, then decides not to interfere, choosing to live peacefully in the shadows—only to accidentally build a harem and later go on adventures with his women to fix the protagonist's mistakes after he somehow turns into a failure?
Reincarnated as the Final Villain’s Vessel
Fantasy · Nameless94
Thats a basic ass theory and a little bit of common sense would get anyone upto that conclusion, instead of making it sound like some sort of revelation the teacher could have just said that was already brought up or, was debunked or, were still in studying phase or, whatever….Characters seem intelligent but some actions and thought process seem too simplistic. Just my two cents.
"Interesting theory," Professor Sirius Quinn said with a smile on his face, "but for now, let's stick to what the geezers have written down for us, we'll discuss your theory in detail...."
Solar Ascension
Fantasy · Nova_Lister
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Cyberpunk: Ultimate Cyborg System
Sci-fi · Nomanalive