Nice reference. I still don't understand why he's using Alexis' ability instead of his own for this. .still on cool down? Can he change his mind later? It wouldn't matter except his is obviously stronger in evolution potential. I think.
Pretty good honestly. I think there were a few uncorrected grammatical errors, but nothing particularly notable. It's the type of story I enjoy, and it's well written.
Priest.
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Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
Ehhh .. Really they should have invested a few silver in better wheel barrows designed not to tip. Maybe with two wheels. Because this was inevitable.
"LOOK WHAT YOUR GROUP MEMBER HAS DONE, A WHOLE WHEELBARROW'S WORTH OF SPIRIT APPLES ARE NOW USELESS, THIS IS MORE THAN A 1000 GOLD COINS WORTH OF LOSS. WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THIS, HOW WILL THIS LOSS BE COMPENSATED?"
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
Have you never heard of the question mark?
"Will papa teach me," I asked with excitement.
Fantasy · Lord_Damocles
Decimate is a great word. It sounds very cool. But it means to reduce by one tenth, and is thus not appropriate for many situations.
Lucius did not want any unnecessary problems and rumors to be created with the presence of John. Thus, choosing to leave him in the city seemed to be the better choice for now. Besides, he had Kiana by his side… who herself was more than enough to decimate each and every person here.
Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
Servant
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Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
Gazed. .
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Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
Never .
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Fantasy · Grand_Void_Daoist
? I remember the last time it was brought up you said about 150 days left. Not sure how long it's been since then, is all.
Imposter System
Sci-fi · Pill_Guy