85/5000 fan of survival and apocalyptic novels. High, beauty: average and poor hahaha
2018-04-12 Joined Mexico
the novel is great, a little rushed but it's good, but I'm about to leave it with so many ads you upload, it's annoying to get excited thinking that it's a chapter and it's just an ad.
ch 16 What’s going to happen to the story
Anime & Comics · FaNFiC_Writer_2000
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ch 39 Chapter 38: Duel
Movies · Shadow7Blue
Please author sama I want to see Lyli's reaction to the new Severus.
ch 12 Chapter 11: The Force
Movies · Shadow7Blue
Thanks You for chapter
ch 83 Capítulo 80: Mr. Madman
Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
That the consequence is flexible and that it depends on each person, for example with tonks it can be something funny like a tattoo on the face that has to be removed red or uncontrollable laughter that has to be removed just like red or more simply deprivation of magic.
ch 77 Capítulo 74: Archimago
Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
but no more than 3 because then sometimes they don't even appear in the story and they forget about them, recommendation... support
ch 0 2 2: Team Orochimaru: Anko Mitarashi, Shigenori Sarutobi, and Yuki Hyūga
Anime & Comics · Reinhardt001Z
cool chapter, harem tsunade, tsume and anko
ch 0 2 2: Team Orochimaru: Anko Mitarashi, Shigenori Sarutobi, and Yuki Hyūga
Anime & Comics · Reinhardt001Z
survey 1-B survey 2-B if possible a meeting of tonks and Hermione as twins
ch 43 Capítulo 41: Sentencia
Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
I'm liking it, but why add an oc as a love interest if you send her away later and don't develop the character? It's better if the love interest is one of the girls in the series who already have a personality. greetings and encouragement.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: 1 Fight and 1 Pro Test
Anime & Comics · Raging_Bu11
Don't be discouraged, you have a good story you could refine it to make it more interesting but the comedy moments made me laugh out loud and that's why I keep reading it, remember that even the first harry potter book was rejected until it was accepted, so cheer up .
ch 14 Are you still there?
Movies · marcelll3214
Stiles's character is fine but I don't like that he cares a lot about scot, because as he said he was a good piece as an alpha and everything but if he has to be protecting him, then it doesn't make sense, if he's already going to get away from allison this fine, but not going to be helping scot at all times like in the series, always hated that, anyway great fanfic and interesting concept.
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TV · EternalStud
Necesito otro capítulo ya , me encanta como estás plasmando todo
ch 0 5 Chapter 5
Movies · IAmGOD
Si
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Anime & Comics · HolyOniiSama
Me encanta la dirección del personaje y su desarrollo
ch 43 Banquet?
Danmachi: Captured by Freya at the Beginning!
Anime & Comics · U22