Leoff

Leoff

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Чёткий, дерзкий - как пуля резкий. Admiral-General Haffaz Aladeen

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Leoff
Leoff
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks a lot to the translator. But the whole chapter is just a squeeze of stupid misunderstandings. Waste of time, an attempt by the author to increase the volume. Remove all these surprises and explanations a thousand times and a normal novel will become, in 500 chapters...

Leoff
Leoff
3 years ago
Replied to EyeOfSilver

True, if you take the absolute majority. The problem is that some people take everything literally.

Everything had been settled when it came to Harry and the day passed. Everyone was gathered for the end of year feast, with the Great Hall decorated in Blue to celebrate Ravenclaws winning of the House cup again, and Slytherin being a close second. My housemates we're celebrating in a lively manner, but here came Dumbledore to rain on their parades. And yup, just enough points for Gryffindor to swoop in from third place and win it all. This caused my house to become half depressed and half angry at Harry and his friends, Slytherin became even more unhappy since they not only lost, but now the cup went to their rival house, and Hufflepuff was just siting looking a bit out of it, but nothing had changed for them so they didn't really care. With only one house really celebrating the end of the year, the feast ended and students went to the Hogwarts Express once again.

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

Leoff
Leoff
3 years ago
Posted

The author is not aware that 6 billion players can drown any quest and any boss with saliva, and he is trying to tell us that they hung out there in one location. Also with the type of game, army recruitment. Damn, it just doesn’t fit in my head, how you can write such guano and not even blush. 10,000 active players, you can’t breathe, you can’t fart, so that no one is around. And this is even without NPC The world of 6 billion should be updated every minute, locations should be endless and edgeless, and also updated once a minute. You went to a concert or a football match, in each location there are 100 times more people, I don’t even want to imagine that. And the cities? It's only the players, but also the NPC and the army of players, well, fuck. Such writers cannot be without gigantism where it is not fucking needed, or come up with a plausible reason and possibility. There is also a problem with mathematics, in each chapter someone cannot multiply a number by 10,000. Always different answers are obtained. We are told in each chapter 90% of the time how cool and unattainable this whole, x10000 system is, and in the next chapter someone is already catching up. It seems to you that it cannot be worse, and you are at the very bottom, but then someone knocks from below. This idiocy hardly falls into the category of "wet dream of a schoolboy" and approaches the category of "I'm 30 autistic and I dream of feeding you shit, mimicking a writer." To all the defenders of this garbage, I want to say that it's very nice that you can find a plot where even the author did not foresee it. They save on your brain, you get dumber while reading this. I warned you.

Leoff
Leoff
3 years ago
Commented

Why doesn't he multiply his ego by 10,000 and win the game in half a day? For 10 chapters, he has already told his entire story. The rest of the chapters are needed so that he walks around and boasts to others, and also solves his petty insults from the last time? Pitiful little man.

Leoff
Leoff
3 years ago
Commented

I hope the author is aware that in order for a billion players to use 1 location, like this foggy forest, this forest must be dimensionless? And in general, the author or translator can use a calculator, the numbers are always different ... At the very beginning there were 500,000 points for the lord's task, now 300,000. Greedy little man.

Leoff
Leoff
4 years ago
Posted

A tale about an asshole who basically makes trouble wherever he goes. Good that he received from other people, remembers selectively. His serious behavior looks like a mentally retarded. It's even funnier that the author makes him look like a good guy when he solves problems. And the fact that he created 95% of these problems himself, the author tactfully (no) is silent.

Leoff
Leoff
4 years ago
Commented

First, where is his guard, who was appointed by his master for 100 years? Second, why is he so dumb? Joanna must know the names of those who were in charge of the academy and generally strong people when the kingdom was still intact. Does it bother anyone that the names will be the same as those that are there during their training? It annoys me alone how the author simply ignores common sense? And his stupid questions - "Hmm, it's strange why this or that one seems familiar to me?" And how did he behave in the world of illusion? And this is the best genius that has been chosen in the entire existence of their universe? Then if they are destroyed, the loss will be small)

Leoff
Leoff
4 years ago
Replied to Leoff

I read a little further, to paraphrase, he's just a nerd who rides on luck. The author forgets that his plot armor is simply present in every word. No skills, only pittance from the author. Cretin and idiot, ashamed to read ...

Leoff
Leoff
4 years ago
Posted

I admit - the story is interesting, easy to read. But here is chapter 1018, and there the author subtly (no) hints that Su Ping is "the most prominent chosen one of all" universes "". Oh my god, he's an idiot, complete and total, what kind of universe is there if this is the best thing for its entire existence?)

Leoff
Leoff
4 years ago
Replied to Forrest_Forbush

Before google translate, it was funny.

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Hogwarts Castle was a large, seven-story lofty building supported by magic. It had a hundred and forty-two (142) staircases throughout its many towers and turrets and deep dungeons. The castle was built in the late Early Middle Ages (c. 993) by a wizard architect and the four most celebrated wizards of the age: Godric Gryffindor, Helga Hufflepuff, Rowena Ravenclaw, and Salazar Slytherin.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader