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LeechesOfSoul
male LV 6just mere leeches
2017-08-09 Joined IndonesiaBadges 9
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2yr
Replied to SOMMO_ARCANO she is translator of this book back then in 'gravity tales', long before Webnovel born and translate their own book.
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3yr
Commented when merchan use translator he can understand mc talking without tranlator.
and mc can understand the tranlated language from merchant without him using translator device.
and now what about the bear???
its big plot hole.
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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented he ride the bear at the back in the day.
and ride the bear at the front in the night.
shota echi. :3
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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented he kill his fellow monster and fellow goblin kin for exp.
its fine he has goal. (even tought its stupid decision)
what i hate is if this 'shota echi' become generic mc in the end when he come to human country.
where he is become some simp for random girl or he Become hypocrite when come to killing human.
if it come like this i will drop this right away.
but if it ruthless MC then its still worth reading.
now, wait and see.
ch 13 Leaving the Sanctuary
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented Riverfood sound weird.
Seafood sound better. :v
"Hmm... Although I've just arrived here yesterday, it feels like I haven't eaten seafood for a long time."
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented diferent between 10 s sprint amd 9s sprint is world apart. :3
The speed of the Skeleton was slow compared to him who's using a skill to increase his speed.
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented :v
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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
3yr
Commented great cho.
thanks for the hardwork.
ch 93 Chapter 92: Ranged weapon...?
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
3yr
Replied to Daoist_Xuyi lol. i mean its my version of fan fiction from your original novel. :v
ch 52 Chapter 51: I agree but
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
3yr
Commented I dont care about simon weiss. Kill him.
This bag of exp will help MC to lvl up fast.
Thanks for the hard work. Cheers.
ch 72 Chapter 71: Oath Breaker...Dead
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
3yr
Commented From objective view your chess piece move like story is great and greatly executed.
But from personal view, I dont like this conspiracy and intrigue cuz this will eat your (author) brain capacity so the advanture story with MC point of view will be reduced its portion.
ch 62 Chapter 61: Tests & Glorious Sun
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
3yr
Commented Critic and sugestion :
i myself as reader more liked if the background of the story is hazy and make us guess the back ground our self.
This will make us have sense of achivment and make us being tied to the story more.
And personaly i dont liked other POV than MC. And dont liked the intrigue/hiden plot being explained (except if it has surfaced and affect the MC directly or MC make realization of the plot himself)
Hope my feed back can be some sort of help to you.
Creation is hard. Cheers up!
And thanks you for your hard work.
ch 53 Chapter 52: Greta Ballantyne
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
3yr
Commented Plot explained: The system is actualy the ramnant soul of the inate sun god.
After being robed his divinity in his last breath he make the system as last life line
. But his consciousness is shatered already so the system just operate by instinc and chose MC as host.
All because he know the acquired sun god regol working with godess of fate so he chose someone outside of fate, which is MC who from another world.
(Just my opinion and fan fiction.)
ch 52 Chapter 51: I agree but
EVOLUTION: CONQUEROR
Fantasy · Daoist_Xuyi
LeechesOfSoul
"He looks like a good person. At least he doesn't look like a playboy."
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