Overlord_Venus
Lv 5- Joined Dec 2017
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I'm Master Chef Antarctica, expect some super cool delicacies from me
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Empty Brain, Devil's Workshop
"Clarice, why are you sitting there with a blank look on your face?" The homeroom teacher shouted at Clarice. Clarice slowly gazed at her teacher with disdain, "I hope a goblin eats her....or.... should I just send a love letter to her with the principal's name attached on it?" -Overlord_Venus (Master Chef Antarctica) ___________________________________________ Under drafting stages. It would take a long while before I begin here.
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I Hate Systems
4.5
11th November 2018 On a rainy day in the city of Hong Kong, Li Qiu dejectedly walked in a local park ignoring the mocking cry of the rain as he kept thinking about his day's work as an international translator. Suddenly, golden radiance spread out from the skies followed by a series of conch sounds that roared with a battle cry out for every measurable creation to realize the beginning of something auspicious, which was immediately followed by the bursting of various electronic devices, vehicles, animals, insects and……even humans. Li Qiu, in a fit of panic, instinctively reached for his phone when a blinding light shone from within the phone which seeped into him. <...ding?...> "Damn you....'ding' my ass, get out from my body" ________________________________________________ Currently rewriting the first 14 chapters of volume 1 to make to the plot better. Current rewrite progress: Chapter 12 ________________________________________________ Release rate: 1 chappie/day Runner-up in the #32 writing contest: Systems Join our discord server: https://discord.gg/CrqpNVw
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IMakeFallenWorlds: Not bad can't say I like how or that you name so many of his moves but you keep doing your thing. Lets hate those damned systems together
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Graveyard: If she doesn't die soon I'm boycotting this novel
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N0ES: How nice of him to explain everything to the readers. There are also 4 races of toilet paper, but none can wipe the **** that this last 2 chapters became. I hope its just these two the story was fun to read before.
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Zhen_Xin: Sigh. 282K views and 18 reviews? C’mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won’t ya? I didn’t even read the book but I took it upon myself to review it in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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GreasyBeer: Sigh. 55k views and no reviews? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won't ya? I didn't even read the book but I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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nothinsnew: Sigh. 117k views and 3 review? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won't ya? I didn't even read the book but I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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Zhen_Xin: Sigh. 282K views and 18 reviews? C’mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won’t ya? I didn’t even read the book but I took it upon myself to review it in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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Rwgey: Sigh. 125k views and 5 reviews? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won't ya? I didn't even read the book but I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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Galass: Sigh. 91k views and 1 review? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won't ya? I didn't even read the book but I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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Arqemi: Sigh. 164k views and 12 reviews? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help him out won't ya? I didn't even read the book but I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Mr./Ms. author!
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N0ES: I don't really care for his reason to hate systems, maybe he hates that there are too many system novels, it doesn't matter. What bothers me is how cringe-worthy this became in the last 3 chapters.
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Overlord_Venus: Umm, if you have read other system novels then you must know the fact that any user of a system will become pretty powerful. And the following are the difference between my novel and other novels with a system in it:
1) My MC doesn't possess a system, neither does his companions
2) I would gradually reveal about the uses of a system, it's inception, creation, etc, further into the novel ( I would only introduce them in the last couple of chapters in volume 1- chapter 30,31...)
3) Nothing feels broken
4) all of my plot is based on the fact that if my fiction becomes reality then my plot is within it's scope of common knowledge and range of operations
5) in my novel, the systems are just another species ( not some convenient tool which exists inside a person )
There are other factors too, but I won't mention them at present because I don't want to spoil the plot. So, in my story, the system is kind of like an organism just like a human, it may be strong, it may be weak, it may be smart, etc ( just like how even in our mass produced gadgets, some have circuit problems, or there may be differences in the metal purity in the wires, chips, transistors, capacitors, etc leading to a difference in performance, life, etc)
In conclusion: I don't want to lose a valuable reader, so if you could please be patient, I would gradually reveal everything. Thanks for your comment 😊I Hate Systems
Kokuryuu: i'm sorry i must review this because i need the exp. the truth is i don't know anything about this novel and i'm trying to be modest with 4 star. so, if you don't like what i do then blame qidian for giving such a 'mission'.
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newt: Enbi os Very boring and i don't like the speed the mc give her his trust
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LittleLuo: This is a great work!
Thanks for the chapter, one of favorite originals.😊😊I Hate Systems · C10
SileNeshoba: Although Enbi Arin's monologue is nice, breaking it into separate paragraphs makes for an easier read.
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There needs to be improvement done wrt grammar, the tenses used and most of all, appropriate word usuage. I have come across plenty of places where the word used didn't make much sense.
Stability of updates: 5 ⭐
Story development: 3 ⭐
There are some confusing parts and loose ends that disrupts my reading experience. I have only read the first 5 chapters, so I can't comment about how it is further into the story
Character design: 5 ⭐
The characters that I have come across till now have shown some depth to them, while the mc has consistent growth.
World background: 5 ⭐
Nothing much to say here at the start of the story. I see quite the promise in this segment.
Overall: 4.2 ⭐
The story is quite interesting with some really unique elements that are not found in WN. It's quite fun actually 👍 View More
Mystical Academy: Clashes of Insideworld, Outsideworld, Aboveworld and Underworld
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Mystical Academy: Clashes of Insideworld, Outsideworld, Aboveworld and Underworld · C1
keda: I think it's better to continue as you were doing with the auxiliary volume
publish it in excel will be a ticket for you and for us to read it
I'm sorry if there is any fault, English is not my native language
keep up the good job ;3I Hate Systems · C0
