7chn4b

7chn4b

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7chn4b
7chn4b
2 years ago
Replied to Campino_41

If they clear the nightmare Cassy could probably edit his memories as a saint.

Because there, at the heart of the great pyramid, lay the key to his shackles. His chance to gain freedom.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

7chn4b
7chn4b
2 years ago
Commented

It seems that the whole city was fleeing into the future, only the youngest surviving.

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Commented

So, if the minds of the creatures were not erased, there is a chance that we get to see Verne again?

The Terror… Sybil of the Fallen Grace… was dead and drifting lifelessly into the lightless depths. However, its thralls had not perished with their master. They seemed directionless and sapped of power, but there were still almost a hundred of them left.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Posted

The story is interesting and I even like the Characters. Grammar is good as well. Unfortunately the plot development feels inconsistent with the world as it is painted. Recruits are killed during an exam against bots, when there is absolutely no need for them to die. A military base on Mars is attacked for hours on end without Reinforcement from anywhere while the whole planet is supposedly a major military hub. During the attack Recruits lead the defence instead of their Instructors etc.. Physics in space also makes no sense with a maximum speed dependent on the engine (below light speed). There could be reasons for all those things, but if there are, they are never explained. Essentially thinks happen for the story, but make no sense.

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Commented

So mind reading works again on her?

Max was abruptly pulled from a deep sleep when the Thunder Guns started firing, showing the entire chassis. He quickly checked Nico's memory and found that a large Klem Contingent, including the first Behemoths they had seen, had emerged from the mountains and were facing the fury of the Command group. 

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Commented

Sorry but I can not believe that he would not even try to request a VIP extraction or something like that. Sure plot makes it obvious that she will heal on her own and save them later, but still.

[Fine, I'll take you home. We are assigned to grid TA24, if you can, meet us there later.] Max sent the message to her wrist device, still attached to her single arm, but got only a beep from his own device in reply. She must not have been able to form another sentence.

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Commented

Will he leave it with somebody in the trial (past) to accomplish some mission and retrieve it outside in the current time?

Ability Description: [The master of the Soul Serpent can grace another with the trust and companionship of their Shadow Guide. One should be careful whom they bestow with their grace; entrusting others with the loyalty of Shadows is the same as sharing one's soul, and thus should not be offered lightly.]

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Replied to King_Gluttony

The notation is just a bit weird. His base stat increased by 0.01 and additionally the 1% Buff is active, which is however not changing the base stat.

[Soul Strength: 101>101.1 points(+1% from Elsisn Temple's blessing]

Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom

Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom

Fantasy · Arkinslize

7chn4b
7chn4b
3 years ago
Replied to AccordPouewe

I believe the +54% do not denote the attribute increase, but are instead an additional passive multiplier.

7chn4b
7chn4b
4 years ago
Commented

That reminds me of the game/riddle that he played. Well done, I did not see it coming. Scary that Cassie was the one that answered correctly. Maybe she just solved the riddle. Or maybe she saw it in the future.

Enchantment Description: [Reverses the effect of one's Flaw.]

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree