confused. is the story told from first person view or third?
ch 0 3 Where are my Beauties
Urban · REaper
What???? How voice can be Tiny???
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Fantasy · TimVic
stupid name for an mc
-Name: Gustav Oslov
Fantasy · TimVic
well the items in the shop maybe immaterial things or even services. we dont know for now
[Host Attributes] [Skills and Abilities] [Bloodlines] [Quests] [Shop]
Fantasy · TimVic
nope. it is called lore breaking!
ch 0 2 Unknown Man
Fantasy · TimVic
disrespect for seppuku ritual....
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Fantasy · TimVic
What? I thought this was the end. Isn't every novel end in a first chapter? How come? This is just too much. it is soo wrong!
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Fantasy · TimVic
is he a ranger or mage? why would he need casting spells. would be logical to level up strength and stamina to use bows
He spent his free attribute point on dexterity without hesitation. A Ranger's main attributes were dexterity and intelligence. Dexterity made them more agile and skillful while intelligence let them cast spells. Dexterity was more important than intelligence in Marvin's advancement path.
Games · Dark Blue Coconut Milk
level 1 and 96 skill points? isnt it too much?
When he successfully became a Ranger, his HP increased by 11 points, he received a free attribute point, and he started with 96 skill points. His character window also changed:
Games · Dark Blue Coconut Milk
no need to be "knowledgeable" to choose this one. even complete idiot would choose it.
The three badges each increased a skill effect, and between these three skills, the knowledgeable Marvin made his choice very quickly.
Games · Dark Blue Coconut Milk
too obvious advantage of this option. who would choose 3 or 5 instead of 9???
[Sika Deer]: Hide +9
Games · Dark Blue Coconut Milk
why not use 1 gold for 100 silvers or something like that?
He hid the pouch well. This world’s silvers were in fact the size of a pinkie fingernail. Even though 150 sounded like a lot, it could fit in a small pouch.
Games · Dark Blue Coconut Milk
Interesting concept. Captivating story, with a nice pacing and flow. The writing is so good, that you want to continue reading more and more! Good job! Just don’t stop and keep writing better and better!
The Isle of Guardians
Fantasy · d_nmalory