Ohh, I see. I got inspired by Dobby when writing Malon and besides him talking in third person when referring to himself I wanted him to be as loyal, bias and weird. Thank you though, if you ever find yourself confused or see something that could be improved don't hesitate to write me up.
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Book&Literature · Enneas
I don't know why but I cannot see your paragraph comment so I have no idea to which sentence you are referring to. I would appreciate if you quote it so I can fix it up. Thank you!
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Book&Literature · Enneas
I just remembered that MC used to be an old man that loved his grandson.
Julian 'what an ungrateful and annoying kid, he won't leave until I teach him something' as Julian is walking on the street of the city to take a stroll he is followed by this kid and after having enough he turned back and looked at this kid who was still looking at him with determined eyes
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
Honestly who thinks like this?
Jenny 'what he wants to take me on a date, wow this is great he is super hot and if lucky I can finally have sex I have not had sex since a year since I break up with my last boyfriend well he couldn't even satisfy me, I hope he can'
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
His parents were hipsters if they named their son "Admiral".
"Well, since that is over and done with, let me introduce myself" Sengoku said as he smiled at Percy. "My name is Admiral Sengoku and I noticed that you ate an unique devil fruit, can you tell me where you got it from."
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
At the very least we now got confirmation what kind of ass MC was. Nothing about being too smart though.
Something which would have happened if she hadn't complained about it hurting every single time we tried and I got tired of hearing her complaining about it. I created my own brand of lube just to fix the problem but the bitch just had a shallow one. I can't fix that. I can't just make a pussy longer.'
Anime & Comics · Alexander_the_grey
I understand, and yes, I plan to make Harry deal with hardships because, in my opinion, that's what makes the best characters. I find it boring when everything goes according to the plan when it never ends up like that. Gary Stu's are too one dimensional for me to be interested, sorry and thank you for at least giving it a try.
ch 0 2 A redundant test
Book&Literature · Enneas
Definitely, as a law student myself I cannot fathom a lawyer seeing marriage as a liability from a pragmatic perspective like the author seems to do. It has a lot of pros in most countries.
Marriages, to men on Earth, are riskier than gambling with the system on his life. You can lose your half wealth, and then spend most of your life working on someone else.
Anime & Comics · blazuki
Says the guy that goes around with a car lol
Julian "Just a little more, we will be there in no time and walking is good for your health, it will improve your health and stamina"
Journey Towards Greatness
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH