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2018-02-28 Joined Philippines

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YES! Haha!

■ Gordon Freeman ««VS»» Julia Chang ■

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

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heyya! currently doing well. I have to change the SSD, buy some RAM for the laptop. buy out some additional stuff like a USB hub cause some of the usb is broken in and a fan cause i messed up the heating which is now overheating. i had to find ways to take some additional work like trying cambly(which is a no since it needs a working laptop) usercrowd, or just asking my boss for some addtional hours. now, i'm trying to finish up a patreon... which really pains me to ask people for some money for this not so good work of mine. all in all, damn laptop is still on hold due to low funds. trying to find some cheap ass second hand gaming laptop in social media though so i can play wasteland 2 for some research.

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Oh! Thank you so much! I've been using Grammarly since i started. So it's a surprise that there's still a typo for that.

"The first one is this bunker complex." She pointed out the first map with a green laser. "Voiders, This is technically your home. It's comprised of a vault level entrance doors, a garage, a mechanical facility, Storage, Med-bay, Science Lab, Water treatment plant, Greenhouse, living quarters, an Airtrap Power Generator, Solar panels, Windmills, and other amenities. Here are the keycard and a manual for everything you need to know about the bunker." She gave an oversized orange colored key and a small book to Houmin.

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

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Thank you for asking! I'm not sure if you're that aware about the lore behind Wasteland. Yes, they do have limited resources. But Ranger Citadel has the capacity to create ample amount of surplus ammo because of raw materials from Ag Center (ag center is friend highpool is shit) and the mines. So they are pretty much re-cooking lead and brass to be used again. Yeah, later on i'll try to dig deeper when it comes to ammo conservation and different weapons.

He trailed his eyes onto the next firearm, a customized 1911 pistol that is chambered in .45 ACP. A double-stack magazine with a flared magazine well, an integrated suppressor, a rail attachment with a pistol size red dot, and an under-barrel flashlight. Additionally, a customized grip with a cut-out on its left side that can fit the combat knife's handle.

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

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Thank you! [img=recommend][img=recommend] *had to translate it by typing in each word* I'm thankful that you voiced out your feelings about this story! hmm... it might be working? cause first you recognize it as Anime haha. I didn't intended it to be anime though. Their personalities are intended. At the start though 🤗🤗 cause of one thing. Their Defense Mechanism. The guy is pretty much teasing her all the times and shows concern cause he's feeling guilty. I'll capitalize on this feeling on the later chapters. the girl on the meantime, I made her in the concept of repressed emotions. Not revealing her true emotions to world but all that goes thrown out cause of Houmin's constant annoyance and her subconscious anger to him. Both of them have worked their personalities already. Both are young adults. Military and Technically training does change your behavior to things, but personality is a hard thing to change especially if your an adult. It might be easier to say that training with someone you idolize will cause you to integrate a part of that characters personality to your own. It does happen but it changes overtime not in a quick succession. it depends on how the individual rationalized the events around him (being in a game world and killing someone.) Meaning, all the personalities both Houmin and Skylar encountered during their training, they have to figure out which are these are more useful and which are not. They only did training... They're not experienced. So to this arc, i'm showcassing Houmin's easily thought of plan and the actual reality they have to face. No amount of training will help them when facing such situation and how it affect them mentally and emotionally. Also i highly appreciated you pointed this out. i'll note about this when i try to rework the training chapter.

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THANK YOU FOR REPLYING SO QUICKLY! Yeah, I might have messed up about the rape part. In my defense, i did studied about behavioral reaction towards high stress events such as abuse and rapes. The human brain cannot process much more information under stress in that kind of situation (unless trained). I figured that it was dark, she saw him naked, she saw herself naked, and so and so forth. Explaining more can make the situation much worse. Since you'll just batter her mind with information and the mind just ignores much of it which makes her agitated. What I did not expect was translating that knowledge to a novel... well, it makes, as you said, feels dragged on for the readers. I'll Keep that in mind. The Time skip at the beginning, Yeah that was a bad call on my part. I was planning to make it like a fireplace rant between the two. Remembering the things what happened and making a sort of flashback filler. Their experiences and what changed. Not making the readers know how overpowered they were at the start. but i think i made a bad call about that and not make the readers feel supportive for the character. We'll there's a reason about it but i wont spoil it and hopefully i don't crap up the execution about it. for now my plan is to try and test the things i wanna do and see what sticks. I really hope you keep on reading this series. and add more things to comment about! The initial chapters... I'll leave it at it is. Reminder for me to work better.

"My name is Joe." Said Ghost Lead. "I will be blunt, I am not delighted to see you two, nor I am happy to be working with you. Frankly, I am not enjoying our situation. A deal has been made, and it's in our mission to do so. Get prep, and we'll leave as soon as you're acclimated. Talk to the Division should you have any questions."

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

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YES! finally someone asked! haha. I'm a bit of a masochist so bear with me as we conduct a informative argument as I cry trying to make you look at it in my perspective haha. firstly, thank you for asking and pointing out so many wrong things about this as i need that to better this series. though it hurts and i teared up a bit.. JK only. i can't find your other comment, so i'll reply to this instead. it's suppose to be like that at first 🤔 if you can look it at that. and then the exposition why this and whats that, will be explained later on some parts. If thats poor writing then I am a poor writer trying to be better. that's my excuse. I wanted this to be a slow story. so i can churn out more. be more creative and gave it more depth later on. for now, the initial parts are just like that. forced and skipped. just the tidbits before it will be explained later on. I just hate the stories from the very start the exposition is there, there's too many info to process and you just want it to progress. while i did the opposite, it's progressing way too fast and not enough exposition. it's like playing dark souls on your initial playthrough. here's a sword, go kill that thing with a scary name. let's see what happen. PLEASE! POINT OUT MORE WRONG THINGS! I MEAN IT! I want this to be more enjoyable! haha! P.S the girl? I hate her too. can't kill her cause God ordered me to progress the story with her.

"My name is Joe." Said Ghost Lead. "I will be blunt, I am not delighted to see you two, nor I am happy to be working with you. Frankly, I am not enjoying our situation. A deal has been made, and it's in our mission to do so. Get prep, and we'll leave as soon as you're acclimated. Talk to the Division should you have any questions."

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

Here we go, Desert Rangers!

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