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  • Magic of Ages

    Magic of Ages

    Fantasy

    3.9

    When Izzy returned home, she realised that she was not alone. In her own home, Izzy is transported to another world, where science does not exist and magic rules the world. To survive Izzy must learn to use her earthly knowledge to her advantage. Or be destroyed by the forces of this new world. On Hiatus

  • I am a Mafia Boss

    I am a Mafia Boss

    Romance

    After years of running from her family, the estranged Mio, returns home. She returns determined to break a marriage agreement between her and another gang. However, she is shocked when she finds out, that it is more complicated than she thought. On Hiatus

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F_Riley: Kind of reminds me of Myrtle the girl ghost in the Harry Potter books :)

Magic of Ages · C45
6 months ago

F_Riley: Kind of sad that Theonymphi has no parents, you'd think with Nymph as part of his name he would. So if they are created beings, do they actually have gender?

Magic of Ages · C43
6 months ago
Yes certain type of Fae are genderless in Theo's case he is. But later on you will find out more about the Fae kind as a whole. View More

F_Riley: Kind of sad that Theonymphi has no parents, you'd think with Nymph as part of his name he would. So if they are created beings, do they actually have gender?

Magic of Ages · C43
6 months ago

F_Riley: I don't think it's fair they have to win 5 battles. They should trade ranks with whoever the defeat. And the people they defeat should be the new orange class members! One battle and done! Especially if there are over 1000 students. Gonna be there forever otherwise. Plus that gives them real enemies that will concentrate on bringing them down in order to get even for the insult of beating them and demoting them to the orange class

Magic of Ages · C42
6 months ago

LittleMissLaughter: Next chapter please! I'm enjoying the story plot development

I am a Mafia Boss · C20
6 months ago

Ivy1234: Nice story...looking forward for more updates.

Magic of Ages · C37
6 months ago

CaptKay: Good but too short. Thanks

Magic of Ages · C37
6 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C35
7 months ago

Gryphi: I find it fun that she is sort of op but also not, but I find it a bit to slow paced. but it's a great novel thanks for the daily updates

Magic of Ages · C35
7 months ago

CaptKay: Wow! Beautiful.

Magic of Ages · C35
7 months ago

CaptKay: Good read.

Magic of Ages · C34
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :'D

Magic of Ages · C34
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C33
7 months ago

CaptKay: Thanks.

Magic of Ages · C33
7 months ago

anarth: Adoi, sayah lage mau INI, apasai lage tungo lambat lage adah baru chapter, 2long cepat lah!!!! Saya mau INI character mio, dia banyak pandai, Jacob, tungo sikit nanti u lagi sayang banyak mio, hehehe

I am a Mafia Boss
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C32
7 months ago
Thank you so much I appreciate it. I will definitely make some changes. You are a beautiful human being. View More

nothingisit4me: The great Nothing here to fix first chapter grammar errors! (You don't have to listen to me, I'm just being nosy) Sorry!

"The sleek black car pulled up the driveway and man with white hair, a trimmed moustache and a black suit, walked towards the back door and opened it."
"moustache" ---> "mustache"
comma after mustache
needs an article like "a" or "the" before "man"

"From inside a girl stepped out." --->"From inside, a girl stepped out."

"A row of men who stood parallel to one another, in black suits and wearing glasses, bowed." --->
"A row of men, who stood parallel to one another in black suits and glasses, bowed." The way you used commas for this sentence feels wrong.

" Welcome back young miss!" They shouted in unison.--->Delete that random space before "Welcome" and the space before the quotation marks. If you're doing it on purpose, then that's fine.

"'They want to unify with the uninvolved clans to gain more power and surprise the others'"--->needs a period after "others" and before the quotation mark.

"She never thought it strange to have so many men in the house, but later on discovered that they were a gang."---> sounds better if there was a "was" after "it" and "strange".

Those are just some examples that stuck out to me. Some phrasing is awkward due to the misuse or missing commas. Furthermore, there are some punctuation errors for where the period and comma goes for quotes.

But, it was a good start and with an interesting chapter end. Yay gangsters! Gotta love em'!
>3</

I am a Mafia Boss · C1
7 months ago

nothingisit4me: The great Nothing here to fix first chapter grammar errors! (You don't have to listen to me, I'm just being nosy) Sorry!

"The sleek black car pulled up the driveway and man with white hair, a trimmed moustache and a black suit, walked towards the back door and opened it."
"moustache" ---> "mustache"
comma after mustache
needs an article like "a" or "the" before "man"

"From inside a girl stepped out." --->"From inside, a girl stepped out."

"A row of men who stood parallel to one another, in black suits and wearing glasses, bowed." --->
"A row of men, who stood parallel to one another in black suits and glasses, bowed." The way you used commas for this sentence feels wrong.

" Welcome back young miss!" They shouted in unison.--->Delete that random space before "Welcome" and the space before the quotation marks. If you're doing it on purpose, then that's fine.

"'They want to unify with the uninvolved clans to gain more power and surprise the others'"--->needs a period after "others" and before the quotation mark.

"She never thought it strange to have so many men in the house, but later on discovered that they were a gang."---> sounds better if there was a "was" after "it" and "strange".

Those are just some examples that stuck out to me. Some phrasing is awkward due to the misuse or missing commas. Furthermore, there are some punctuation errors for where the period and comma goes for quotes.

But, it was a good start and with an interesting chapter end. Yay gangsters! Gotta love em'!
>3</

I am a Mafia Boss · C1
7 months ago

nothingisit4me: Sorry, "mustache" is technically correct, but I follow the US spelling,

I am a Mafia Boss · C1
7 months ago

nothingisit4me: For some reason, when I read the first sentence, my brain farted and I thought Mio was the bald one with tattoos lol. >3</

I am a Mafia Boss · C2
7 months ago

nothingisit4me: Plot twist! >3</

I am a Mafia Boss · C9
7 months ago

richardsrobinr: back to reading,thanks for the chapter

I am a Mafia Boss · C17
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C29
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C30
7 months ago

Mr_Grim_the_Sloth: Thank you very much for the chapter. :')

Magic of Ages · C31
7 months ago

CaptKay: The story line is beautiful but I'm afraid if it continues lingering for too long, I may lose interest in reading more. So far I've not understood why she's in this world and I can feel the book is losing its edge with too many details and delay pattern stories.

Magic of Ages
7 months ago

anarth: Ayuh!!!! Don't say that mio!!!!!

I am a Mafia Boss · C17
7 months ago

Darks31: this story is a Disney movie mc powerful but is all ways begin save by princes charming. you need to stop making your mc week, you really kill it when you made male in to princes charming

Magic of Ages
7 months ago

Darks31: Story feels like a Disney movie. The mc girl is a princess with powers but is being save buy prince charmings all the time
** when I say she like a Disney princess is because of the sing and the sidekick creater.

Magic of Ages
7 months ago

nothingisit4me: Whoo! Mafia and love! The protagonist, Mio, is a strong female lead, which is a plus. I liked the interactions between her minions and the mysterious Jacob entering the fray. While the story had just begun, I cannot say that much about it.

The grammar is fine, but there are some punctuation errors here and there along with awkward phrasings.

But, keep writing author! Fight on! >3</

I am a Mafia Boss
7 months ago
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