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MotivatedSloth

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Replied to Walbert_Waly
And who are you again?

ch 0 -1 Going premium, current delay, basic promised info:

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

Eastern Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth
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Replied to Runaway_Cactuar
Well, I can only pity you if you live in a country like that. From what I know, wherever there is law, only being a politician/insanely rich person can save you from consequences of the law.

Sitting on the wall of the couch, this girl actually started swinging her legs while looking at me with her head lowered! Was she trying to seduce me or something? I couldn't deny that she had some sort of tomboyish charm, I was way too experienced with the ways of mister thumb and his four mistresses that were guided under the watchful eye of the experts from all over the world skilled in the arts of ars amandi! She was way too inexperienced and lacking make-up to tilt the balance of my rationality!

Road to the Crown

Road to the Crown

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Replied to Liam_A_2565
Well, all my novels are within a single Sloth'sverse so well, we have that.

Formerly known as Bart, my current name is too weird to spell it out. While I'm obviously capable of doing that, you, my fellow earthlings, would never be able to do the same. What? Earthlings? Let me explain everything from scratch.

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

Eastern Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Formerly known as Bart, my current name is too weird to spell it out. While I'm obviously capable of doing that, you, my fellow earthlings, would never be able to do the same. What? Earthlings? Let me explain everything from scratch.

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

Eastern Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to Nizar_Abdennour
He is not a superhero :3

Kneeling over my mom, that man picked her up in his arms. His face filled with sadness and a strange determination. And in the next moment, he suddenly vanished from the place along with the corpse that I hoped to bury once I would return to the earth.

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

Eastern Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to Xerstoren
There is one problematic thing about judging your own story - You can't do it unless you put it aside for a few weeks (few months at best) as to cut all the emotional and memory ties you have to it. It's even harder to do if you constantly write it. For example, my battlesmut novel (the one with longass title). It took me a while to realise how trash it was. I can now openly say that the first 150 chapters are beyond awful, while chapters 150-300 are below average. Only later the plot ideas and all allowed me to salvage the story and turn it into something I could be proud about. Then comes the worst part about anything I wrote so far (with only a few exceptions) Given how excited I get whenever I sit down to write something new... Most of the beginnings I write are just bad. Because they are written based on the idea, with the solid background work coming into play only once I calm down and actually think everything through. I would say that around chap 20 is the time when I kinda lost the purpose here (the initial drive) and had to transition to a proper writing - hence some problematic parts around that part. You could say, I was only ironing out what I actually wanted to write back then. Then comest the EGO part. I have a pretty fragile one, so before I can fully detach myself from my own writing, I'm rather... short-fused in terms of criticism. This was only reinforced in this novel when I had a reader who was so insanely dumb that he was clueless about things that I outright explained in a paragraph before he started ranting about it. (Imagine it like that - A paragraph explains who X character is, then in the literally next paragraph the reader makes his rant about not knowing who X is). This made it even harder to objectively assess the criticism, as whenever I saw a similar complaints (even if they made a fair point) it was instantly covered in the shitty aura of that idiot reader from before (who I outright asked to drop the novel and stop bothering me). In the end, you made valid points. Yet, given how I'm about 170 chapters further down the story, there is very little I can do to fix the problems you brought up. As much as I would love to do it, I apparently made exactly the same mistake as I did in my Phoenix novel - in order to make it more interesting, I artificially complicated it far more than I should. Take another point for the fact that its my last novel I will ever write in first person narrative and the anguish of doing so even though I already switched to third person in all my newer (? more recent? Younger?) novels. Overall, you made some valid points, you are not here just to trash the novel and pour your emotions on it. That's the sole reason why I have a fuck and actually replied both honestly and openly to it. With that in mind, I can only suggest you two options - either give up since the flaws you pointed out are likely to keep bothering you for the next few chapters, or try to toughen through it to reach the points where I'm more comfortable with the novel itself, allowing its plot and the ideas I have for it to shine. (not trying to force you here, just my rational approach to the situation). Whatever you choose, thanks for a proper feedback and I will do my best to keep that in mind when working on my future and current projects. In the end, writing is an neverending process of growth and learning, and I'm really thankful you could be a part of my growth :3
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Replied to bluedragon191292
my to my - my. that was sooooo far in the past, forgib meeeeee

Seeing this random cultivator prostrating himself under my feet, I couldn't hold my to my anger. Stopping my cultivation in an instant, I took a moment to calm my energy down.

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!

Eastern Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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