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    The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan

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    What would happen if the Uzumaki Clan had a shadow clan that protects them in the dark yet where still destroy alongside the Uzumakis? well just like Kushina who survives the massacre, 2 survivors of the Kurogane Clan join the leaf and on the same day that Naruto was born their son is born as well, receiving the Yin half of the kyubi. Come and watch the story of Kira Kurogane, how he leaves the leaf due to the hate and anger that the people of Konoha is giving them, taking Naruto with him and joining Kumo and how he becomes The Grim Reaper of Kumo, while helping Naruto become Raikage. 1st time typing a novel so i hope u can understand, as for Flamers if u don't like, leave Action Romance Harem for Both Naruto and Kira Reincarnated M Rating in Future Chapters Smart OC Strong but Not OP MC (OP is later chapters for both Naruto and Kira) this Novel is somewhat similar to 3headed-dragon's fanfic novel The Yin and Yang of the hidden Cloud but with some changes. The author is amazing check him out in FanFiction.Net There will be a few bashing

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Reading Status: C19
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I'm glad that people like this fanfiction, the earlier chapters are badly written of course, since this is my 1st time writing, but remember, i said in the beginning that am writing from my phone so some errors will pass through without me knowing.

I have university and am literally studying both medicine and programming, so i really get tired afterwards. Any sane person would have drop this story but not me, i want to finish it, to truly finish it.

The 1st couple of chapters are badly written, something i will fix in the future, so if your still writing then am happy you like the story, if you don't then just leave and read other story.

Due to university, my chapters will come at least 1 every week, but after December comes, i'll be able to write even faster due to my having no university. Once December comes, i'll also fix those chapters but until then, i'll leave them where they are, otherwise i won't be able to release once every week due to me fixing those chapters, so please just hold until December.

REMEMBER I DON'T HAVE A LAPTOP AND I CAN ONLY WRITE THROUGH MY PHONE.

I hope you can understand that.

This has been the Author, peacing out ^-^ View More
The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan
1 week ago
You will see P.O.V.s and flashbacks after the three great locations part is finish, so wait for it and the reason is oretty obvious though but you will see in the P.O.Vs and the flashbacks. =) View More

Irina_Akashira: About the chapter itself

In my opinion, it has non sense
I would have expected something like that with Hinata, specially to be disowned, but not with Ino.
After all:
a) She hasn't any bloodline, so they can't apply the CRA to her
b) I can't see Inoichi simply accepting something like that
c) With Konoha's current situation, I don't consider credible that either the council or the elders force to something like that, risking to gain that fury of the Yamanakas, and their allies clans, the Sarutobi, the Nara and the Akimichi

You would need to clear soon

The most usual in a similar setting in other fanfics, would be that Danzo either bribed or pressure the elders of Yamanaka clan to put Ino in this situation

But I doubt that Inoichi was to accept something like that

In other fanfic, Minato convinced to Engage Ino with Menma, but I think that Inoichi would distrust the elders even more

Personally in this point with the current setting, I would propose, following something similar to Naruto and Kira but more elaborated, that:
- Ino "officially" rennounce to the ninja work in Konoha
- This way, the ninjas laws wouldn't can be applied to her, at least temporary
- Before the clan's elders try to retain her, proclaiming to be a "clan's matter" and nether civilian or shinobi council or laws are aplicable, get out
- Either simply get out from Konoha and Kira and/or some friends are waiting outside to go to Kumo, or Kira sends some summoning contract and reverse summon herself

The problems of this route

a) Unlike Kira and Naruto, who were "techinically" the leaders of their clans, and never sworn loyalty to Konoha, Ino was just a member of the clan and she had sworn loyalty to Konoha before
Either village or clan elders would can find some interpretation of some law, or simply invent it, to do their actions illegal

b) I dont think that she wishes that Hinata be alone

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C19
1 week ago
Remember, he didn't used his super sayian mode as well, so i believe he's the strongest in that world View More

cosmiccomment: what is his power level when he is going all out?

DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C60
1 week ago
...should i...shouldd i laugh at that joke??? But yea, she's one too xD View More

Irina_Akashira: You spoke about like cold and silent type, right?

In this case a female Haku would fit perfectly. She is literary "cold"

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C18
2 weeks ago
Because am prepraring the best for Kira, i'll br changing her background in the future, you won't see her until, after the 3 years timeskip but i can assure you, you will like her (well some people) and i mean, she IS strong because not even Naruto and Kurama together could beat her alone, i hope you underestand who am talking to. XD View More

AKARYUU: Still why to give better ones to side char (canon mc) and not true mc of the story. first it was suzumebachi who is useless and looks like **** and kurotsuchi who looks good to naruto, now ameyuri looks better and is not weak but still worse then mei in looks.:(

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C18
2 weeks ago
You can't see the pattern that am making? One of Naruto's wives will be Kurotsuchi and she's the granddaugther of the Tsuchikage, making Naruto close to Iwa and am going to do the samething with Kiri as well and besides, you can sue me because am more attracted with women like Samui who's the cold and silent type and Ameyuri, who doesn't need to be rescur and can even cause a massacre with a grin (strange i kinda thinking about a pink hair girl after i type the massacre part lol) View More

leonel551: Why naruto with mei?

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C18
2 weeks ago
I'll fully explain the Psychology part here, The Kunai is black when thrown it sound like the air is screaming a little (cant really explain well the sound it makes once it's thrown lol) i said in past chapters that substitution can be used even against other living being with chakra, so once Kira used his technique he threw the Kunai alonside it WITH the blade shining and the sound of a thousand birds chirping.

That was enough to cover the Kunai and the sound it makes once it's flying was silenced with the loud sou nds of thousand birds chirping, you know the same sound that chidori does once it's activate?.

Anyway because of that, the Kunai was never notice, like it never existed due to Living beings always following the light and since the blade was bright enough it cover the Kunai.

It's Psychology like tricking the mind.

I hope you guys ubderstand that =) View More
The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C18
2 weeks ago
Altough i do admit, am not good in politics so if i forget something that could be solve by politics, am sorry. View More

Irina_Akashira: My mistake

But the point about Hiashi be afraid to send her in other country, is still valid
And my suggestion, will scare almost anyone trying to do something to her, afraid to provoke 2 kages and feudal lords

And a last point o consider
This fanfic in this point, it has no sense, to hid Naruto's heritage anymore, considering both his power and the two potentially biggest "official" enemies (Iwa and Kumo) already recognized him
If as it was said and/or implied in several fanfic, between Minato and Kushina inheritance, he has the legal owning of almost half Konoha and some parts of the Fire Country, both feudal lords would can concede an official noble's title, and most Konoha's population considering to need to gain his favour
In these conditions, I doubt that someone be so stupid to go against him

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
Aboutthe Namikaze heritage, that will come out in the Chuunin Exam as well, reason why Konoha hasn't said anything is because only Sarutobi Hiruzen knows and due to being a Hokage and all that comes with it like responsibility, he obviously forgot but even if he didn't if he said something it will only bring negativity to Konoha, even though he's disgusted with how Konoha temporarily celebrated both Kira and Naruto's death, he still is the Hokage and the village is always first in his mind.

As for the Namikaze heritage, honestly why does he needs it? He's already known as one of the richest peraon in Kumo, to the point that the daimyo of lightning needs to treat him with respect. In my eyes the heritage from Konoha is useless, hell only reason am going to reveal it on the Chunin exam os dor the expression that Konoha will show as well use the birth papers and blood test too. View More

Irina_Akashira: My mistake

But the point about Hiashi be afraid to send her in other country, is still valid
And my suggestion, will scare almost anyone trying to do something to her, afraid to provoke 2 kages and feudal lords

And a last point o consider
This fanfic in this point, it has no sense, to hid Naruto's heritage anymore, considering both his power and the two potentially biggest "official" enemies (Iwa and Kumo) already recognized him
If as it was said and/or implied in several fanfic, between Minato and Kushina inheritance, he has the legal owning of almost half Konoha and some parts of the Fire Country, both feudal lords would can concede an official noble's title, and most Konoha's population considering to need to gain his favour
In these conditions, I doubt that someone be so stupid to go against him

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
Actually Irina, it wasn't Kumo who tried to kidnap her in my fanfic, it was Kumo, hell it was said that the Tsuchikage didn't knew about it until Konoha send the information back to him. As for what he did? It involve alot of people dying View More

Irina_Akashira: About you question about old people, think 2-3 things:
- Old people tends to to refuse or be unable to accept the chances
- If your current status/position lets you live in luxury, would you reject it for others?
- And about the elders in this story, either from a clan or village, or in other similar stories, you should consider an usual feature
They don't tend to be an "official" power in clan or village, but they to have "unofficially" authority to order other people
It tends to give them the power to do many things, and even being discovered, they are "theorically" just consiliors without real authority, so is the village's or clan's head who has to assume the "legal" responsability

Of course, this is a complete incoherence, but quite usual in these stories. And in many fanfics the Hokage (either Hiruzen, MInato or Tsunade) has no option but assume the "legal" repercutions or Danzo's actions

But even if your Hiashi be a good, I can understand to be afraid to send her in the village that tried to kidnap her in the past, specially if he make a comparison between the two villages' elders, risk that Kumo's elders force her to turn in a breeding machine

I would suggest that he request to be "married" before return to Kumo, and both Kages and countries' feudal lords as witnesses, specially considering that for your last country it was quite implied that both boys gained the favor of Lightning Feudal Lord
Kumo's elders would be be afraid to interfere in something like that

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
The uzumaki contract of the cage bird seal is what am after lol, but in my fanfic hiashi will be good but he will act cold due to the inteference of the hyuga elders (i wonder why all old people tend to always be greedy in their own clan) in all of his decisions, so he was forced to treat Hinata the way she'll be treated in this fanfic. View More

Irina_Akashira: It exists other posible route, different of the "bet"

My bet's suggestion was because it would involve both Ino and Hinata in same time
But seeing your other message, if you consider no problem with Ino, and the main matter is the Hyuga's elders (although Konoha's elders would oppose to both of the girls). It exists other quite usual route

It would more logical and less risly than a bet, but it cans be more boring for a shonen-like story
Essentially 3 words: Diplomacy, Buricracy and Contracts

Here you have 2 examples. Knowing that you can read castilian/spanish, turns easier show you examples

https://***.fanfiction.net/s/12393464/9/El-Nacimiento-del-Principe-Conejo
https://***.fanfiction.net/s/12720429/21/Hijo-de-una-deidad

Summary, many fanfics have speculated that the hyuga's seal was at first, given or sold for the Uzumaki, theorichally to protect the byakugan and avoid be stolen, and all the hyugas should have it in their bodies

But some moment the hyugas manipulated the seal, to essentially turn the half of the clan in slaves

This is a vilation of the contract, andthe Uzumaki clan has to "legal" right to reclaim to be returned the seal, forgiving ever use it again, and reclaim a heavy compensation for use it this way against their concent

In fact, it was implied in some fanfics, that Konoha let Uzushio being destroyed, at least partially, to eliminate any evidence of the contract

If like this setting, the best would be that the characters, either reviewing some documents of Kushina inheritance, or exploring the Uzushio's ruins, find the contract

Anyway, to like this route, the final conclusion would depends strongly of fire land's feudal lord and Hiashi's attitude
- I've never seen a version where both of them oppose it
- Following the first of the posted examples, if feudal lord bad and Hiashi good, the feudal lord would be humilliated, and Hiashi with Naruto's support, eliminate the caged bird seal and force all the hyuga to have the original or a new modified seal, aimed just to protect the byakugan, never control
- If feudal lord good and Hiashi bad, Naruto would can reclaim a heavy monetary compensation, putting the clan in a very bad situation, and offer to reduce the debt partially if they let Hinata go with them
- If both of them are good, they would can do both things

Even being extreme
If you still consider the bet's route funnier, I would suggest, partially inspired in the second posted example
Once Sauke and Konoha lose and Kumo's side win, Hyuga's elders not worry very much concidering that the "weak princess" would "accidentally die in a night" (or some similar thing), the feudal lord proclaim to order be revoked the seal, doing imposible the alternative plan


Pd: Ironichally, these authors never explain the initial reason for the seal be used/manipulated this way, but in a distorted version, it was explained that some past clan's head was like Danzo and he stole the seal from the Uzumaki, and decided to apply them to everyone that oppose to his methods
And "stupidity" (no se si lo digo bien, "estupidamente") the branch members and other clans viewing it, blamed to the Uzumaki

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
The way you now explain it, i have another idea about that too but i need to reach Chuunin exam first AND make friendship between Samui and ino, and Karui and Hinata and i know how, again Irina, thanks for some ideas you've given me. =) View More

Irina_Akashira: I'm happy that you seems to like my suggestion

The key point is that a bet like I suggested, would can be accepted for almost everyone. After all
- People in Naruto and Kira's side, would think that they wouldn't risk in a bet like that, except they are sure to win, and they can see Sasuke be arrogant and weal for understimate his adversaries
- Sasuke's fanatics, would never even imagine their "Uchiha-sama" losing, and seeing the "bet" as simply Kumo giving away some female for their god
- The Konoha's elders would be probably the most pragmatical, but as I said, they consider worth the risk to lose a "lone" byakugan against to gain a few new sharingan
- Obviosly the Hyuga's elders would be the most opposed, but the Konoha elders would pressure them surely.

On the other hand, similar to your point, I saw in a old fanfic with "western empire" setting, where they decided Hinata be "too weak" and sell her to the empire for money, and using a seal not just sealing her byakugan but her genes, so even she ever had childrens, they will never get the byakugan, so no worries. Finally emperor (cof Naruto cof) bought her and unseal her

You would can do something similar, or Danzo suggesting to the elders to put her the canon's seal, and if Konoha loses, just "kill" her a few days later

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
As for the Bet part... i don't know, i need to see how this fanfic goes XD View More

Kira_Aurelius: Yea after i upload the chapter, i decided to check the map of Naruto on the net and i was surprise about it, that's my ignorance there xD. Another thing, in this fanfic Ino and Hinata will be stronger than canon due to both Kira and Naruto's influence. As for the 'am an uchiha i deserve these two woman' i could make it happening due to Ino only as for Hinata, her friking clan elders are too damn arrogant even in canon they might not even give her away BUT if i make it that she has the cage bird seal i could make it work, since the hyuga elders are too arrogant, they will never believe that Naruto can take that seal off, it's a good way for that to give her to Naruto (am a HUGE naruhina fans, so am sorry, in any of my Naruto fanfics NaruHina will always stay together) for benefits but i don't know i might need help on that one.

On Ino's side, her father always wish to see her happy, it's the reason why he didn't even try to get rid of her fangirlsm to Sasuke, so if her happiness is Kira, he might even give it to her but with a fatherly warning that he'll kill him if she ever cries xD.

Am thinking of letting both Samui and Karui meet Hinata and Ino in the Forest of Death.

Also am planning a POV on Konoha on the peoples from Naruto and Kira's year like shikamaru and the others.

Am making another one on Danzo as well so wait for that ^_^

Also Irina, thanks for all the advice, it help me on my first fanfic greatly, so really thank you. =)

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
Yea after i upload the chapter, i decided to check the map of Naruto on the net and i was surprise about it, that's my ignorance there xD. Another thing, in this fanfic Ino and Hinata will be stronger than canon due to both Kira and Naruto's influence. As for the 'am an uchiha i deserve these two woman' i could make it happening due to Ino only as for Hinata, her friking clan elders are too damn arrogant even in canon they might not even give her away BUT if i make it that she has the cage bird seal i could make it work, since the hyuga elders are too arrogant, they will never believe that Naruto can take that seal off, it's a good way for that to give her to Naruto (am a HUGE naruhina fans, so am sorry, in any of my Naruto fanfics NaruHina will always stay together) for benefits but i don't know i might need help on that one.

On Ino's side, her father always wish to see her happy, it's the reason why he didn't even try to get rid of her fangirlsm to Sasuke, so if her happiness is Kira, he might even give it to her but with a fatherly warning that he'll kill him if she ever cries xD.

Am thinking of letting both Samui and Karui meet Hinata and Ino in the Forest of Death.

Also am planning a POV on Konoha on the peoples from Naruto and Kira's year like shikamaru and the others.

Am making another one on Danzo as well so wait for that ^_^

Also Irina, thanks for all the advice, it help me on my first fanfic greatly, so really thank you. =) View More

Irina_Akashira: This is my suggestion. A bet

I would can imagine Sasuke seeing to Samui and Izana with the sharingan, shouting/reclaiming that they have to be his girls (cof uchiha's breeding machines cof)
And most fanfics in this point, the elders pressure the yamanakas and the hyugas to accept Ino and Hinata turn his "girls" too

Either MC knowing it, or the girls seeing the situation, and not wishing see their potential "sisters" turning a duckass' bitches, offer a bet before the council

1 vs 1, see who is the strongest sharingan user before the entire Konoha and foreigner visitors

If Kumo's side wins, Ino and Hinata will come with them.
If Konoha's side wins, their "great uchiha-sama" will get the girls

Imagining Sasuke accepting, shouting something like "a true Uchiha will never lose against a fake uchiha (or halfbreed), also a girl". this last part to fight against Samui or Izana. If it was against Kira in an official confrontation, no need

And most Konoha's conciliors would be agreed, either thinking that they will win more sharingan users for free, or others wishing to see Sasuke finally humiliated

It is probably that Hyuga's elders wouls oppose, but Danzo and the elders would pressure them to accept

After all, I guess that from their POV, objectively, it has more merits than demerits
The risk to lose a lone byakugan's user when they already have a few hundreds, against to win 2 new sharingan users

Probably thinking, even losing, it would be quite easy to kill a lone weak girl later

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C17
3 weeks ago
No no, yo se que quieres decir asi que no estoy molesto por eso, y si quieres explicarme algo, pues porfa, aslo en ingles, yo no se pero entiendo el ingles mejor en el net que el español. =) View More

Irina_Akashira: No te cuestiono eso, cada uno tendra sus razones

Solo te pregunto que si al ver un posible error o hacer una sugerencia, te resultaría más facil de entender si la hago en este idioma

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C16
3 weeks ago
Si lo se pero cuando escribo por el internet, tengo hábito en escribir en ingles porq por el internet la majoría escribe en ingles xD View More

Irina_Akashira: Si hay tormenta no se puede hacer nada

Eres de Puerto Rico?

En ese caso, de ver un error o hacer un comentario o sugerencia, te va mejor que lo haga en este lenguage?

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C16
3 weeks ago
About the Pakura part, you just gave me a great idea, at tthe beginning i was actually going for Omoi to do something game changing in the Civil War, so i could had a reason to make him into a Chuunin, then let Izana take over from Team 10 and be with both Karui and Samui, but your idea sounds amazing but that would be me creating a new character and that's going to be a pain but no pain to gain right?

As for the Sharingan, i actually made the Sharingan a weaker version since Samui isnt a Uchiha like instead of instantaneous copying, she will need a few moments, and she will be able to see even more clearly through her Sharingan but not too deep like Sasuke who said that he's able to see microcosm , and she will be able to awaken the Mangekyo but no Eternal unless she exchange eyes with one of his sister-wives, reason why i want my MC to marry more women.

But if the person has 2 bloodlines like Mei, she will still be able to use them BUT she will need to retrain it, and it can't be OP since the person STILL need to retrain it and even train to awaken the Sharingan, it's not that she will suddenly gain it.

Anyway thanks for the ideas and thank you for reading my story 🙂🙂🙂 View More

Irina_Akashira: Ty for the update

To be honest, I didn't imagine that you really would give the sharingan and others to Samui

This bloodlines is too much OP

Maybe you should do some limit, like be unable to copy oposed or incompatible bloodlines, doing for example:
- With dojutsus/eyes, be imposible to got both sharingan and byakugan
- With advanced natures release, needed to be similar (like Mei's boil and lava release) or one of the two elements was one which the user had a high affinity,
In case of MC, it has to have part fire or lightning
To accept, would be in this case, scorch, boil, lava, storm and explosion
- With body's bloodlines, it would be the most delicated. If they have already taken the Uzumaki's bloodline, I would suggest that they just can take Senju and Kaguya's bloodline, to have the same origin

About Pakura

Your MC should think that even with 4th Kazekage Rasa's death, it wouldn't guarantee Pakura's security, because his accomplices would try to kill her to incover their complicity

Suggestion

They would can create a provitional team for the chunnin exams, composed for Izana, Karin and some other (either from canon or invented)and Pakua as Jounin sensei
Even Suna's shinobis seeing her and alerting their council, I doubt that they can protest against a "dead"

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C15
4 weeks ago
He's a Jinchuriki, they are pretty much safeguarded inside the village they 'belong to', truthfully the hokage would NEVER let Naruto have the same rights as Jiraya who's known has a Sannin but the word Jinchuriki kinda says everything. I know this is fanfic but in Canon, all Jinchurikis except the 8th tails were treated as weapons of mass destruction and a village without one was treated has well they kinda look down on it, you could say that what Madara did was enough to bring all Villages together and erase the hate the people have against a Jinchuriki but because that hasn't happen yet in this fanfiction The jinchurikis are still treated as weapons and deep down i myself knows that the Hokage think as well.

What i mean is that Naruto has everything needed for him to hate the village, In reality Naruto would have never help Konoha for all those beatings and near deaths they have cause him, i always believe that they should suffer, what Canon is teaching you is that 'no matter how much time someone tries to kill you, yoy should always forgive them' bull**** i would never follow those words, actually any sane person would never follow that say.

wow i kinda wrote alot lol anyway that's what i think about that situation View More

Adypoker: Why does he have to betray them in the first place?
He only has to ask the Hokage for the permission to be like Jiraya...

Gamer Naruto · C43
4 weeks ago

Flyzar: Hinata as First Wife, Ino as Second Wife(screw Sai) with Shion as a Mistress!

Gamer Naruto · C43
4 weeks ago
True, but if i go logical, it would take me too much time to even release a chapter due to so many reasons, and besides this is fanfic, i could make it so that Kira suddenly fly for no reason at all xD. I will make it so that the Raikage knows about that secret technique but due to the clan laws, that techniqur belongs to the Kurogane Clan and cannot be shared, so only Kira's wives can awaken the Sharingan along with the Absorb bloodline. I know there will be alot of other logical problems with this reason but hey, this is a fanfic 😁😁😁 View More

Irina_Akashira: I just suggested the most logical route

Also, it would be quite funny mocking before Sasuke, seeing which he named the "dobe" is engaged or married with most would consider the last female Uchiha

And while writing this answer, I've thought a thing

If Kira and Izana want to keep the Kurogane bloodline limit as a secret, and get other bloodlines, I would suggest a bit more complexed story
Izana would can proclaim to listen from her parents, and for this reason Kira didn't know, that the Kurogane bloodline is able to save genetical information from the most distant relatives' bloodlines, being able to awake them fullfilling certain conditions

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C14
1 month ago
I also hates 'the sins of the father also falls to his child' crap, it doesn't end well everytime due to that View More

Kira_Aurelius: Yea the invented story will kept about Kira's relative being a Uchiha, as for Izana being engaged to Naruto that will happen after the Civil War

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C14
1 month ago
Yea the invented story will kept about Kira's relative being a Uchiha, as for Izana being engaged to Naruto that will happen after the Civil War View More

Irina_Akashira: If they aim to keep secret this Kurogane bloodline, but Izana gets the sharingan too, they they would can keep the invented story that some relative was an Uchiha and thet received

Anyway,maybe you should engage her with Naruto or some other, to avoid Konoha pressure to engage her with Sasuke

Also, I see that you've done a "reasonable" Onoki
It wouldn't be weird that they hate minato and/or Konoha for the actions in the war, but blame Naruto when he hasn't even born, just ti be his son is ridiculous

Being in most fanfics, and implied in canon, one of the main "oficial" reasons to keep hidden his heritage

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C14
1 month ago
The Jutsu will be given by Fenrir, it's a very old jutsu View More

Kira_Aurelius: Am writing the next chapter and i wanna ask you guys this, you i make it so Kira used a Jutsu that let Kira's future wives be able to have the Kurogane Bloodline? (Yes that also means the Sharingan, and just like the Kira they won't need to kill someone important to them to awaken the mangekyo but it won't be able to become E.M.S until the wives trade eyes with themselves)

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C12
1 month ago
Am writing the next chapter and i wanna ask you guys this, you i make it so Kira used a Jutsu that let Kira's future wives be able to have the Kurogane Bloodline? (Yes that also means the Sharingan, and just like the Kira they won't need to kill someone important to them to awaken the mangekyo but it won't be able to become E.M.S until the wives trade eyes with themselves) View More
The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C12
1 month ago
Kira never stole the scroll, he copied the content without stealing it, he used his brains there so Konoha doesn't even know they copied the scroll and never will xD View More

Irina_Akashira: You should explain this matter about the spies in next chapter, maybe with a flashback

Maybe other PoV to comment about Konoha's reactions. They can't protest very much. After all, they were "officially" civilians, never sworn loyalty to Konoha, and they went wolly to Kumo. Except they can prove that they stole the scroll, they haven't violated any law

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C10
1 month ago
Haha that chaptet will be after the invasion :) View More

soulruler: Can we have the reaction of the konoha people when they find out about Naruto being the 4th son

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C12
1 month ago
I really have no idea what u just said but from what i can read you're angry that my OC is supportive, well he kinda is until i reach i certain part, they'll be time when i fully concentrate on Naruto, other times it will be my OC and another thing, i hate the 'damsel in distress' troupe so most of the time the harem will be strong altough not as strong as Kira and Naruto but strong, if yoy don't like my story then i can't help you View More

SucoDeFruta: Naruto mc????
Porque você está copiando tudo do original?????
Porra o mc e uma reencarnação e se comporta como uma criança, você faz o mc ser mas fraco e patético que Naruto, você faz parecer que naruto e o ser mas importante na vida do mc, naruto e melhor que o mc em tudo, Ninjutsu, taijutsu, funjutsu e mas inteligente que o mc, a única coisa boa que o mc tem e o sharingan, sua história e uma merda igual o original, onde o mc e babá do Naruto e fica sempre se comportando como um personagem de apoio, se fosse para ler merda os leitores teriam ido ler o original seu merda

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C10
1 month ago
On off-screen due to Naruto's seals, A managed to find ALL spies from other villages including Konoha and ROOT, so they didn't get to send a msg back about Naruto and Kira, so they dont know that they are in Kumo, is only when i do the wave arc, that Kakashi himseld meet them and will be even more surprise after Naruto use Wood Style and Kira the Sharingan pissing off Sasuke as well and Konoha cant do nothing due to war and Kumo will win the war, they'll be even allied with Kiri as well since thats the next arc after their first C ranks and B ranks of course, the Chuunin exam is next after wave arc, i hope u guys can understand that :) View More

Kira_Aurelius: The reaction will be after i do the wave arc, so yea wait for that

The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C10
1 month ago
The reaction will be after i do the wave arc, so yea wait for that View More
The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C10
1 month ago
Author here, do not worry, if nothing happens irl ill release the next chapter by tonight with the timeskips and the appearance of borlth Naruto and Kira's 1st wife i hope u guys can wait for it :) View More
The Uzumaki and Kurogane Clan · C9
1 month ago
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