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So now there will be time travel? View More
Star Wars Return of an Empire · C19
16 hours ago
Star forges are so cool though they open up so many possibilities. New tech different options and combinations. A weapons/ship freaks wet dream lol. Always liked the old republic better, more fighting and less intrigue business and writers seem to have a more creative aspect to them, guess I mean is there are options to go with since there are no movies from that era.

The clone wars have almost been done to death it's almost getting as bad as Harry Potter, scenes in the stories are by wrote from the movies and its getting boring. Same senate scenes the same anakin council scenes the same obi kamino scenes and such. Everything is laid out authors just seem to try to mix it up a bit between cannon scenes. Not saying some or god but I bet lots of readers gloss over a lot of the story. View More
Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
19 hours ago
To me this just brings the story down. He tells the dean to fk off but then follows his female teacher like a puppy. Idiotic View More

Otaku_Daoist: This is something I just can't stop hating. U reincarnate, no problem, show ur skills n knowledge, no problem but let a girl/lady get u a master from someone who's not worth it at all............ seriously tho why?!!

The Eternal Supreme · C24
22 hours ago

Otaku_Daoist: This is something I just can't stop hating. U reincarnate, no problem, show ur skills n knowledge, no problem but let a girl/lady get u a master from someone who's not worth it at all............ seriously tho why?!!

The Eternal Supreme · C24
22 hours ago
Finally someone actually brings it to the bastard early before he gets his hands on the clones. View More
Star Wars Return of an Empire · C18
1 day ago
So just a bunch of short stories nobmc? View More
Star Wars: Chronicles · C1
1 day ago
Any suggestions on stories with the vong in them? All of them here that talk about the vong coming never get completed. View More

Doruk_C: Actually I hope you read this author. The weapons have actually regressed especially small fire arms and big weapons(super weapons) also regressed. Most importantly the droid tech regressed toooo much. In old times zakuuls army’s were made of robots probably better than clones also there hk series assassination droids which could kill sith and Jedi of old times used by revan . The ship building technology has not improved because of war. At the moment the republic navy still has hammer heads and smiler smaller cruiser used in the time of revan. So actually heavy capital ship weapons only improve when clone wars is 2-3 years in. Also the stealth tech has regressed so much that it could be called non-existent. In old times while capital ships had stealth. Interdictor technology also regressed cause they haven’t been used. They will only slowly come back in the time of empire but still will not be too efficient until really later years. In the end it’s good say that all warfare based technologies started to see improvements in the Late clone wars but the true leap happens in the times of empire especially building of larger and better ships.

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
I always hoped someone in these stories would find a repository on some old republic era planet with all the old technology from that period and introduce it into the present. In this story with the vong coming they will need it. Even the personal shield the bh used is lost to time. Those would be really useful, imagine if the clones had that tech.... View More

Doruk_C: Actually I hope you read this author. The weapons have actually regressed especially small fire arms and big weapons(super weapons) also regressed. Most importantly the droid tech regressed toooo much. In old times zakuuls army’s were made of robots probably better than clones also there hk series assassination droids which could kill sith and Jedi of old times used by revan . The ship building technology has not improved because of war. At the moment the republic navy still has hammer heads and smiler smaller cruiser used in the time of revan. So actually heavy capital ship weapons only improve when clone wars is 2-3 years in. Also the stealth tech has regressed so much that it could be called non-existent. In old times while capital ships had stealth. Interdictor technology also regressed cause they haven’t been used. They will only slowly come back in the time of empire but still will not be too efficient until really later years. In the end it’s good say that all warfare based technologies started to see improvements in the Late clone wars but the true leap happens in the times of empire especially building of larger and better ships.

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
I knew they found one forge but I didn't think they found rakatta prime even if they had the info in the past its been 4k years and who would even think about something like that in the present era,, the current jedi dont even know who revan was except for Yoda, it's all locked under tight security. kind of like koraban being taken off all star charts, these type of place tend to vanish in history. Besides it the story isnt cannon anyway so he can go any direction. I just thought going that way would solve a lot of problems and open up a ton of options. I always liked reading revan stories and he used the forge. View More

Doruk_C: True it was not known until the legacy era I think to Jedi. But the old Jedi order in time of revan found the Rakatan prime system. The planet of lehon

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
You mentioned mace will be a 3rd party in the conflict and that's going to be really hard to do ie credits ships men.

One suggestion I can offer is the force taking him to find the lost karten fleet which is massive but then it will need repairs and upgrades and such so you will need credits and repair facilities. Or you can use a star forge which is like a Dyson sphere that makes everything you would need only need to input raw materials and it does the rest fully automated and robots, could make it build a more advanced robot army.

So here's the idea, you haven't told is which planet they are setting up on so you could make it rikaata prime which has a star forge and massive debree of ships which is great resources and then throw in rikatta/sith ancient sites for a little flavor. So the gives us a really hidden base and a factory with resources all you need then is people or you could have it make robot forces.

Something I have always wondered about was what if the sith IE mace in this instance finds out about the clones and what if he sends a virus to reprogram them to take control since they all chipped and we do have capable slicers in the crew, so using the star forge for ships and the clones for an army it would be massive. Crush the republic make some kind of treaty with the jedi and confront the vong together. Anyway its just a what if lol View More
Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago

Ruined_Leprechaun: I know right...all Padme did is how an older women would treat a child and he just goes appears as if they had some romantic relationship, 10 years ago, that was put on hold until they meet again...

Star Wars Return of an Empire · C16
1 day ago

fearlessj2008: Anakin doesnt deserve padme hell if wasnt for him doing all he did I dont think she would die like that. Thanks for the chapter keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing how palpatine plot fails and what happens afterward.

Star Wars Return of an Empire · C16
1 day ago
And the good thing about the star forges is you can input updated tech from current day and the forge will combine it with rakatta tech as in the power supplies that tapped into the force. Just takes mace to do his sithiness to take control and rakatta prime is close to one. View More

Tealcove: For the teck help, have them do a trip to Corellia, because even in starwars legends, and cannon, both of their super dreadnaughts were 1 v 100 class capital ships with their shielding and weaponry. There is even mention of it in several of the Starwars books, and even the size comparisons from a Venator class starship and the Corellians ships is jaw droping...... or you could also have them visit one of the two remaining star-forges still in the Galaxy at this point in legends...... just a thought.... if you want to see ship I'm talking about, type in Corellian dreadnaughts, in Google.... you'll see what I mean

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago

Tealcove: For the teck help, have them do a trip to Corellia, because even in starwars legends, and cannon, both of their super dreadnaughts were 1 v 100 class capital ships with their shielding and weaponry. There is even mention of it in several of the Starwars books, and even the size comparisons from a Venator class starship and the Corellians ships is jaw droping...... or you could also have them visit one of the two remaining star-forges still in the Galaxy at this point in legends...... just a thought.... if you want to see ship I'm talking about, type in Corellian dreadnaughts, in Google.... you'll see what I mean

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
He could find a star forge or an old rakatta planet. The republic never found rakatta prime I dont think. Would be all kinds of rakatta and sith old tech. Sith used it as a base at one point. View More

Doruk_C: Also I have seen some comment on fleets he probably can find old abandoned shipyards of the empire and can go to just since they weee imperial territory and supported the formation of the empire later because of this. Maybe since he is going to rakataan he maybe after rakatan relics such as star forge.

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
I would love to see Fay go to the dark side View More

Raiseshu: thx for the chapter XD and please search info of Master jedi Fay and what do you think of her
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Fay
https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=AYSkGdNbS9U

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
Something I hope you can look at is the planet belsavis the mother machine is there and that could be a really good shot at getting his wife's body back or a new one. You can find it ok wookipedia. It was used in another story where the guy from the past had to have his body rebuilt. View More
Star Wars: Wrath of The Force · C25
1 day ago
What's AO3? View More
The Sith Warrior | Star Wars: The Old Republic · C1
1 day ago
Ty so much for the agreement lol. Female leads ruin so many good stories, glad I am not the only one that sees it. If I find a story with a female mc I drop it just like now. They always go off on some romantic side tangent.... :( we really need more sw fanfiction here but sadly the last 2 started were both female leads which is a loss to the readers 😭😭 View More

meFoxtrot_Romeo: Well I can't say you're wrong. I have my fair share of reads on female leads having their potential lessen all because of an introduction or even their interactions with the love interest.

The Sith Warrior | Star Wars: The Old Republic · C1
1 day ago
Good start but too bad the mc is female. Female mc stories always end up sidelined with romance that screws everything up. View More
The Sith Warrior | Star Wars: The Old Republic · C1
2 days ago
So are the vong making an early move? View More

Tealcove: Ps...(SPOILER) the Ravager is not involved with the 3 lost worlds...

Star wars : Champion of the force · C15
2 days ago
Dude not cool. I know little to nothing about ravenger, i know was a republic ship until darth held it together but that's about. So is this supposed to be the cliche bad thing to counter the mc and if so why so obvious. First I thought it might be an ai restarted by 1 of the 2 women to give him a ship but now no idea. View More

Tealcove: It's not Nihllus... but close... that's the only clue you get

Star wars : Champion of the force · C15
2 days ago

Thelazybatman: Maybe one of the first times ive seen a fan fic that gave dooku a legit chance
Nice
A lot of the Jedi that left were redeemable if given the chance

Star Wars Return of an Empire · C15
2 days ago
Ya dooku is a good one but he just went about it wrong :( View More

dadaoist: Dooku is my favorite jedi, hope he will become his master

Star Wars Return of an Empire · C13
2 days ago
Why do you use will and would so much? One instance was ento would walk over to whatever, .. why not use ento walked over, why the future tense stuff. Just use present tense. Unless it's far in time like ento will be a great farmer or ento would have made a good farmer.. using future and or past tense so much is annoying unless it's called far and future tense doesn't mean in the next few seconds View More
Star Wars Return of an Empire · C9
2 days ago
It's not about me being a problem it's about common sense. Why get ripped off buying coins here when you can read the same thing for free. I have spent plenty here in the past until I am fed up. I had over 800 coins this last time that I purchased this last go. So I pay for coins then I unlock chapters to read but that's not good enough, now do I not only have to unlock chapters but now I even have to pay to be able to see the chapters to then be able to unlock them and not only that the coins keep vanishing and no I do not do the free login thing when we got gems for it so in other words these are coins I paid for that are vanishing daily. So ya not going to happen not going to pay to read here anymore and by the way I have lost over 80 coins in the last few days and they keep going daily.

You are a fool to think people dont read the stories for free, sure you might keep a few readers but you will lose a majority and you sure as heck better proofread and edit because people will not pay for it if you don't.

Anyway that's my option about it and my experience with this site so ya pretty much done with train of thought. View More

ForTheWin: I mean most famous Japanese novel are contracted anyways and the company take 50 percent. Which is the same webnovel. If you read for free and don’t pay, then u are the problem. Yes webnovel make money, but they have too. Otherwise how can they maintain this site?

Reincarnation Of Third-rate Swordsman · C104
2 days ago
Why not just tell them to go off. Why give your best tech to a competitor. Just stop producing the CPUs and withdraw from the market then see what kind of outrage happens when the public cant get the goodies. View More
I Found A Planet · C366
2 days ago
No they are not trying to help the author they are trying to make money for themselves period and they treat the authors like trash, see if you can find some posts out there, there ust to be quite a few about the issues. Research who owns WN and see look at what is all under there umbrella or properties, you will be suprised if not shocked at what they have their hands into.

I understand the guy is in a bind and sees this as income and that's cool but he needs to figure out what he really wants to do. If this is just a pastime then it's cool but if he really wants to be a writer for a living then he should reconsider signing because for me writing a story is like raising a child and it becomes part of you, it would be terrible to have spent your time and energy on something that wouldn't even be wholly yours in the end. I equate it to a divorce where she gets custody, ya you still get to see the kids from time to time but the bitcch is still taking half your money and controlling your life ;) View More
Reincarnation Of Third-rate Swordsman · C104
2 days ago
I guess your reply to me was deleted so I couldn't reply. There is a good example for you anyway. My point was once the story goes behind a pay wall you will lose a ton of readers. Why pay for it when you can read the same thing somewhere else for free. They are not a good company to work with and there are far better company/contracts out there, WTF 50 percent is lost by signing that is insane. Hell you can take all the chapters and make an ebook and put it up on amazon for free and do better then here and a lot do that, they use here as a sounding board for edits and ideas and to be honest I as a reader would rather donate to a good author than be forced to pay. There are a lot of authors here that take donations from here and do well, you just need to have a repport with the readers. View More

ForTheWin: WN isn’t as bad as you think. China do business better than most countries. A lot of people are just assuming, but now is 2019. Is different. I got contracted before and they are very professional about it. I think ur story is good enough, I mean I have seen **** story yet can still be contracted.

Reincarnation Of Third-rate Swordsman · C104
2 days ago
Why sign a contract though, beside a bit of cash of course. I mean you lose total control of your content, they can sell or whatever and in extreme cases they can take authorial control if you content is hot enough and you slack off. IE your story turns into a hit (they start making a lot of cash off it) and you stop writing for whatever reason they can assign their own author to start writing.

Honestly you would make more cash off whatever that site is (brain fart csnt remember it right now) it starts with a P or even that give a cup of coffee site. I know lots of authors where I am that write here and us it, they make a ton more cash and have full creative control.

Let's be honest with all the changes here a lot of readers just find a story and if its pay they just wait for ******** etc to post chapters a day later, personally I have over a dozen windows open to various sites with stories from here on it. Because let's be honest we are not really supporting the author here just the site with and donations ie coins and with the money grab changes of not being able to get free gems or coins as it is and blocking the majority of completed chapters behind a pay gate. Not sure the name but where we have to pay to even be able to see the available list of chapters and it's only open for a certain time. The site is really going to far trying the cash grab.

So long story short, you contract you will lose readers once the pay block comes up and lose control of your writes to the story. You never know you might want to make a book with your story if it's good enough but you would be SOL. View More

ForTheWin: We can talk on discord, I can help u out. Otherwise all the chapters u wrote will be wasted. U can ask me any question, since I got contracted before, so I know how it work.

Reincarnation Of Third-rate Swordsman · C104
2 days ago
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