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LV 13I love words, I love writing, but despite a writing being the subject of my university degree, I found myself working in IT. Funny how these things happen.
2018-06-05 Joined AustraliaBadges 8
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I think you could take a more informal, conversational tone for her self narration- unless she's supposed to sound a little stiff. I'll keep reading and see how the flow changes over time and try to give a bit more detailed feedback.
ch 12 The Bond Between A Mother And Daughter Part 2
Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
Fantasy · invayne
huh I now understand a joke in ch760 of legendary mechanic. Thanks!
Is an animal trainer who doesn't want to be a fortune-teller a bad clown?
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
I know this is a reference, and it feels like a throwaway gag, but does this imply that there was an impression of awakened/beyonder traits in the general subconscious/ common mythos before the calamity?
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
That is horrifyingly hilarious. Is this what it means to listen to your heart?
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
He's not locked in there with it, it's locked in with him!
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
How much more dangerous can things even get...
ch 749 A Leisurely Life
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
cuttlefish would make an excellent DnD DM
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Of course he was. Some things cannot be changed.
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
What an unforgettable anthem. I have no doubts who composed it.
ch 730 "Communication"
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
I feel like an author is orchestrating all these 'coincidences' and I don't mean cuttlefish.
ch 727 Harbour Homeland
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Take pleasure in the small things.
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
How great a calamity is a portable warhead considered?
ch 724 ‘Wronged’
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Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
When danger reared its ugly head he bravely turned his tail and fled-
"He said... 'Run'."
I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey
Urban · Devotee
Even the supernatural have their own worries and insecurities...
ch 22 Remember To Drink Milk
I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey
Urban · Devotee
I wonder what book 'chicken soup for the soul' will transform into.
ch 19 Entrust It To Me
I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey
Urban · Devotee
Um, they were able to get close to the ozone layer before having their brains blasted out, so surely they could just figure out the surface area by the curvature of the horizon ?
When they tried to deduce the Other World's surface area based on the gravity, tides, the planet's rotation, and orbital revolution, their guess was that it was about the same as Earth or even larger.
Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow