....'As dazzling as a feather.' Huh? Are feathers normally associated with "dazzling"? Bright, colorful, soft, gentle. Those things, sure I can imagine. But "dazzling"? Eeeeh?
As soon as we all got our numbers, we heard fireworks meaning the imperial selection had begun. A stunning young lady showed up in front of us. She was as dazzling as a feather. Wearing her blue moon dress and her white jade hairpin, she was astonishingly beautiful. She must be royalty, I thought to myself.
Fantasy 路 Dominique1412
I think the plot idea is interesting, but the format is...VERY off-putting. I shall continue reading in the hope that things smooth out after some chapters with the story progressing. So far, though, it's sadly awkward to read. Every time a character's name would be listed, it would sort of jolt me out of getting to a state of immersion. Then, the manner in which the characters actually converse is incredibly...stilted. Even though it says that the Author is from an English-speaking country, I have to wonder if English is the Author's second or third language. If it is, that's okay. Perfectly understandable in that case. But if it's not, it honestly seems like the Author is INTENTIONALLY writing the story like they've done a bad translation job. It's...truly strange. I really do hope it gets better because I really do enjoy the idea of the story with what I'm seeing so far. 馃槪
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Imperial Selection
Fantasy 路 Dominique1412
Same, girl, same....馃槶馃槕
Which was why she jumped on Wang Tao's wagon at the slightest show of gentleness from him, she didn't even know him that well only two months and yet she handed him her entire life just because she thought he was kind to her.聽 By the time she woke up from her obsession, she was an old woman in her thirties with a cheating husband on her back and lots of broken pieces of her heart that she had to pick up from the start.聽
Fantasy 路 fairytail72
Mama Lin is...WHEW, G.U.R.L!!! XD
ch 331 Let's chat
Fantasy 路 fairytail72
Please rest well! 馃槉
ch 146 Only Be a Child Once
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
ch 134 Scheming with the Papis (2)
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
That last line from the Emperor made me bust a gut! XD
ch 132 Calling Her Papi
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
Good, I want them to suffer!
*Warning: Violence and Graphic Scenes/Curses*
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
It's pretty easy, but hard for most. I don't have much of a sweet tooth and I'm SURROUNDED by sugary treats all day long. So, on the rare occasions I WANT to devour sweets, I just visualize I'm eating the cakes, pastries, and candies that are all over my work place instead. It helps that I've got a vivid imagination. 馃槄
ch 109 The Barbaric Blood Prince in the Girly Cafe
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
Nooo, my diet! That's a no-no, wicked Author-san! Seriously, though, I work in a bakery so I have a high resistance stat to such temptations. Muwahahaha
ch 109 The Barbaric Blood Prince in the Girly Cafe
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
As a rice lover myself: "I wish you luck, soldier! Make us proud!!"
ch 103 Big Changes in the Little Cottage
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
Editing note: Here is says "months", but you have said several times previously that the Imperial family would be visiting in only one month.
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Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
Had to send a gift just for that 馃槝馃槄馃槀
ch 64 Sudden Visit
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 64 Sudden Visit
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
There are no gender divides among face-slapping. The Slap comes for us all; young, old, man or woman Women just make more drama loudly so you tend to hear the Slap echo prominently in the stunned silence that follows.
ch 62 Who Came Up with this Scheme?!
Fantasy 路 RandomPotato
"fixed her intensely"? Uh, what? Did you mean "faced"? I'm so lost. 馃槕
The princess went through the questions she had prepared for me. I was so nervous that my whole body was trembling. The princess finally spoke out and I fixed her intensely.
Imperial Nanny Ying Yue
Fantasy 路 Dominique1412