DULL, LIKES FANFICTION, NOT SO HANDSOME, LIKES ANTI HERO PROTAGONIST, LIKE OP I MEAN REAL OP CHARACTERS
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When a fat man that did nothing but waste his time to prove himself created a hacking system that could hack anything on the internet, but just when he was about to rejoice he got struck by lightning and woke up to find something that only he could see. [ DING ! OBTAINED THE HACK SYSTEM ] [ FIRST GIFT : CHOOSE A POWER FROM ANY CHARACTER YOU WANT ! ]
A OP character that doesn't want to be a hero, he isn't a hero, he could even be a anti hero. ------------------------------------------------- If you don't like OP characters, this might not be for you. ( not telling you not to read, just that you might not like it )
When Aldous is visited by the people of the void, he must finish his duty. Even if it means completely giving into his inner demons. (Updating daily) ------------- Gift me some heroes Id: 439154367 Heroes I already have : Aldous Miya Balmond Nana Saber Tigreal Alucard Bane Eudora Zilong Layla Chou Odette Chang'e Faramis
MastersgtJames: terrible wishes. I mean... just assuming that MC will be reborn as magical... Wasting a wish on eidetic memory and a system... ugh. Could just gave yourself the ability to give yourself abilities.Harry Potter: Rise of the Serpent · C1
PettyOfficer: There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.
I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?
It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.
It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.
For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.
Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!
That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!
But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!
Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.
Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”
What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?
How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.
Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!
Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!
Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!
Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.
It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.Mutagen
Rawr_Kitten: Yes! Finally someone not brainwashed by the trope,harem,wish fulfillment cultVampire Primogenitor in Tokyo Ghoul Universe · C3
Acasualpawn: I'm sick of Qidian. Adding these mediocre novels for survey. Next one is Nine Yang Sword Saint. Really?
NYSS is edgy af. Thrashy novel..... What is QI doing. They don't even ask readers for what to add next...
Scamming readers power stone..... And i know this comment is going to be deleted soon. They are really good at deleting comments..Warlock Apprentice
Chibi_Senpai: That just sounds pathetic.Reincarnated in Teen Wolf/Supernatural:My Blighted Path · C14
Meph1sto: Yeah yeah what do you expect from a person having no money at all and just got insane powers? Go for world domination with his puny powers!I applaud you for your insane power of bull****tingDeath with benefits
A Warrior's Path
Daoist_Longnose: I am not exatly sure where to post this but I have to ask, am I the only one that think that the title is stupid af? Strongest 'abandoned son' does that mean that there is stronger not abandoned son somewhere or is it my english? Well it was just to say I don't like that novel but I took a long time before giving it a try because of the title.Strongest Abandoned Son
SamStrike: This is my second review now that I have catch up.
Writing Quality: 4
Not perfect, but it gets really good in the later chapters. At the start it seems pretty bad, but it get solved later.
Stability of Update: 3
1 per day from what I saw, but a story like this will never end if it continue with so much filler and useless chapters
Story Development: 1
Wayyy to much uselss filler, repetitive words and paragraph, instead of always describing useless things you could just do a summary not a whole chapter wasting a daily update on it
Character Design: 5
I like it. Even though sometimes it's annoying, it's good.
World Background: 4
There is still a lot to say about it, but it's introduced easily.
Too much filler and useless things; nearing chapters 30-40 when the mc goes to the village and there is all that feud of the two family.. All that is useless filler that does nothing to the story, you could have just have made a summary of it. You may say it's for characters development, but I don't see much of it, there is also way too much description of the others pespective, it's good to show other's point of view but not when you waste a whole daily update on it. There is only an update a day, and when you get 10 straight days of boring filler (that doesn't contributr to the story) you (I at least) stop reading and drop.Transcending the Martial Peak( The Story is being Rewritten and published. The Rewrite is called Transcending Limits)
HEHAASS: Here, 3 star review for you.
Here goes the review. Forgive me for using some words that our user friendly website would consider inappropriate.
The starting is s h i t ty. So is the plot. I don't know what to call the mc, retard or pathetic sh*it? Feels like a waste of time even reading it. This is the story of how a character can be beyond pathetic. Our Genius mc is gonna show you how things are done. How geniuses are supposed to be. If you don't think he is a genius, well, that's because he is only a child.
Honestly, just tell me the chapter where the mc turns chaotic.
If you didn't know I am a genius too. I just can't think like one because I ma a child.Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
pandabanana: Bro you said you dropped the garbage fire. I can’t see how you picked it up in the first place after you touched that burning heap of trash? (Chapter 1)Sovereign of the Karmic System
Rex_shed: Whatever kid......
It's not like I face. Not faced true side of world..... So I get worst scolding and mocking then you.... And still they don't disturb me......
TRY AGAIN!DORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
Rex_shed: Funny talking with you kid. Try to make me angry more next time..... See yeah till then.... Lil kidDORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
Rex_shed: Oh look! Who is back! A fucking**** is back to argue more..... Don't worry I will always be here to scold to you.... My 👶DORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
Rex_shed: Then don't read it.....you ****....
It's not like I need damn **** reader like you....DORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
Rex_shed: It's not like I forced you to read it......you damn fucking ****.....DORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
DORAEMON : I AM NOBITA(Not dropped but Rewriting)
Below_Average: Yea I'm sorry for the slow updates but school just kicks you in the balls, Ill have an update by Sunday.THE MUTANT LORD · C5
Below_Average: Yes, please continue I really like this and i can say a lot of other people do to.THE MUTANT LORD · C5
oXOBUNNYOXo: Feels bad no new chapters 😕THE MUTANT LORD · C4
Crow_OF_Judgement: Another one. This is like those korean k dramas where the mc is a martial artist, gets a job and just can't fit in. There was a guy who was writing things about his uncle being in the army and how he had a bad time adapting. Well, this is going to be harsh, but your uncle probably isn't the same level of genius as the mc here. The mc is a genius only when the author wants it. I don't know if I offend someone but I think even if people are in the army they have common sense. I am not in the army but I can tell that it's not always training and people converse with each other too. If you have read some novels like beauty and the bodyguard you can find 60% things that are similar to that novel here.
But keep going.Adopted Soldier
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AlmightyLord5th: I don't like or dislike your story. Although I was disappointed that the story wasn't something special and was filled with cliches, I haven't anything overwhelmingly negative to say about the story.
The MC is bland (so he's not overly annoying or great he's just there) the side characters are side characters.
The world building is fine i guess.
The reason why this story is a 2.5 (slightly below average) rather then a 3 (average) for me is the plot progression. Like I said the story is really cliche , and for many stories cliches are not always bad, but in the case of this specific story it's in your face bad. Things that should've been lengthened in small proportions for basic readers enjoyment like the 'romance' (if I can even call it that) happens way to quickly and way to forcefully. Also, yes I know the real world is filled with people who do things like *** quickly but this is a fantasy and not the real world.
Overall before I go on a long tangent and bore the c-rap ( only way I can spell that without getting censored) i'd like instead to rap this review up.
The story is not bad but it offers no memorial moments and I probably won't remember any of the characters names in t -minus 10 minutes. Yep already forgotten it.Dominating Evolution of the Cosmos
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