This author has a disturbing habit of using "filling" chapters to show what useless background idiots online say without actually progressing the story. it's relatively sad.
ch 27 Chapter 27: I underestimated, I didn't dodge...
Games · Gray Ashes
will change it and give an actual proper review when it can be unlocked and read
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Reading the next sentences. it sounds like the tail never actually hit him. Rewording this to "The tail lashed out at him , forcing him to stop and dodge" would make a lot more sense
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Urban · FETI
Jesus, the author is a moron for the use of present, past and future tense and the mtl a foolish adullesant for not correcting it and expecting to be paid
The more mana the embryo absorbs, the stronger its aura has become. At the end, when the embryo finishes absorbing as much mana as it could, it flew down and Rezen reached his palm out
Fantasy · KenceRussel
yeah...learn to edit. A crater can't hit anything. it's a result, not an action
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Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
'God of Smithing' Smithy would be where he forges. Smithery isn't even really a word
[Host has found Val Volundr, the being known as the 'God of Smithery']
Fantasy · PhantomMedjay
this entire paragraph, among many others was obviously not edited. he was heartbroken to see his daughter growing so fast. Already she was choosing a random little boy over her father.
A heartbroken that his daughter was growing so far, Val couldn't help but tease his child a little and her new friend.
Fantasy · PhantomMedjay
this is slowly becoming redundant. the translator never seems to actually edit these things and the author repeats knowledge every single chapter for no reason other than to fill put the word count. this is done poorly as well, with no actual progress being made in a story that has 500 chapters at this time
ch 115 Rich Battle Returns
Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
that entire paragraph hurt my eyes.
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Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
it is a pity that the author doesn't appear to even bother to attempt and keep notes so that they can keep the story somewhat accurate based on previous chapters. good for a free read, not worth spending for, though
"It's a challenging situation," Dick acknowledged silently. Despite his F+ level strength, the Goblin Slayer, a black Steal level adventurer, was equivalent to a D-level monster, a force not to be underestimated.
Reborn As a Goblin With Simulation System
Fantasy · Rqmk