i love this story so far it has a neat idea with the music thing
ch 0 6 the Dungeon and the odd bunch
Book&Literature · Monty_Linden
i like the concept and story so far keep up the good work
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Video Games · eliot_green
really love this story so far
ch 10 Chapter 9: Scholar's Haven First Day
Video Games · DaoistSLWwmk
Good so far
ch 0 -1 Prologue
Book&Literature · Zhorvak
I neeed more
ch 11 Ancient letter
Book&Literature · Cadenadeaventuras
Love the book so far
ch 0 7 Ch 7 - The Boundless Foundation
Anime & Comics · The_Square_Squad
really good so far
ch 0 3 Well deserved spanking
TV · OnanMaster
Thank You for the chapter. don’t mind The nitpickers
ch 30 The College of Winterhold.
TV · Caio_Bernardo
i love it so far looking forward to the rest
ch 0 4 Unbreakable Shield - Chapter 4 ( knowledge is Power )
Anime & Comics · crowkenz
I personally think a Softer family based mafia character would be good so Not as carefree and adventure based as luffy but not EvIl like doffy but wIth a similair group
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Anime & Comics · PullUp
this had me chuckling like a maniac got i love this
ch 35 B&E 1/2
Others · resistingsea
I like the direction so far
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Book&Literature · moh999
I really like the story so far it's a interesting take on a one piece fanfiction
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God i love this books so far
ch 15 CHAPTER-16: RECRUITING 'DEVIL CHILD'
Anime & Comics · Devil_Riez
this early in the story van augur or laffitte are still free and could be a good fit for sniper and navigator. also monet get monet
ch 0 4 CHAPTER-4: PIRATE ESTABLISHED(SECOND CREW)
Anime & Comics · Devil_Riez
I Really love this story so far
ch 39 38. Upper Yard
Anime & Comics · PeekACoo
I like this story so far keep up the good work!
ch 0 7 Chapter 7
The Greatest Kage
Anime & Comics · YELLOWPIKACHU