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A fat Guy Dies By a shout, Gets introduced to Mr. Jump who was laughing his ass off the fat Guy Aka Kareem and then shoves into an incomplete Jumpchain
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This is just cannon with a TINY bit of difference. Don't waste your time reading this until the author makes his fanfiction and not semi copy/paste. We have a system but he doesn't use it or try to use anything to his advantage. Hell, he even acts like kid harry potter.
just garbage don't read he's just telling the same old harry potter canon.............................................................................
The story right now looks like it will follow canon a lot with the mc having extra powers so I’m not really excited about it right now but it is only on its third chapter but I hope the author will have the system give the mc very few quests about following canon or at least give the mc the option to do it or not since it’s pretty boring to read that and what would the point be to reading that. Also sorry if this sounds rude but I just finished a Harry Potter fanfic where it is just canon with the POV of the mc so it was pretty terrible.
I am writing this review because WHOA someone needs to point out that this story has changed TREMENDOUSLY since it was first posted apparently years ago. Now it is a jumpchain story beginning with the jumper in question in the setting created by George RR Martin, whereas before it was evidently set in Harry Potter's Earth. The writing quality is... interesting. I highly recommend the author get a beta reader and work with an editor to smooth out the chapters because the actual story is a funny one and the author has a working knowledge of jumpchains which are incredibly underloved tbh. If you can get past the walls of text the story here is very interesting and the logic mostly makes sense, even if the MC isn't a galaxy-brain. This story has potential and I recommend patient readers give it a chance. If they do I think they'll find something fun here. Good luck Author-chan, you can do it!
Read till chp 3 and it is BS..like ok the grammer and language is decent but the story is all bull..nothing unique or different from cannon..even with a fucking system the MC dosnt do ****
Lots of copying, poor formatting, and finally a rant.... Honestly, the initial plot was the usual one that holds potential. It hurts to see it wasted like this.
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Why wright this story if its a copy paste cannon at least harry couldn't defend himself the mc has no excuse??? it's pointles to read it. ...............
The wishes were absurdly powerfull, and the hp part was barerly interesting, but after that it was boring... so utterly boring... It lacks many things, like: Character development, Characters(most of the time it was MC and his creatures gaining power...) Plot... Purpose in MC gaining power... Satisfed readers... Purpose of MC having so many powers where he barerly uses them... And here i lost motivation to continue writing this review...
This loser author is copying entire canon, and he gave a system to the MC and given the quest to follow the canon and be stupid **** harry potter or die. You don't have talent for this kind of hard work bro. So, please stop writing this as a fan-fic and just say. You want to read potter verse and you are copying the book loser. For release of every chapter Iam going to post you are a loser on the reviews believe me loser. I don't want to give even a star but you know it's not possible.