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  • Angel Smile

    Angel Smile

    Realistic Fiction

    4.6

    The background is set in a quiet small town in the outskirts of Seoul. In this town, people were friendly, except for one particular neighbourhood. In this neighbourhood, everybody lived their lives as if treading on eggshells. All because of one particular household: the Lees. People surnamed Lee were a dime a dozen, but these particular set of Lees were unique. Dysfunctional. The family consisted of four people; the father and breadwinner Lee Do Joon, the delinquent son Lee Hyuk, the top student Lee Gun, and the town's most beautiful girl Lee Yeo Ri. Lee Yeo Ri was regarded as a saving grace, but before anybody knew it, the saving grace was slowly disintegrating from within. Hidden underneath her perfect, angelic smile, was a girl that was slowly being crushed and torn apart. This is her story. — TRIGGER WARNING — This story contains depictions of rape.

Moments

ScorpiaEvergreen: They're probably gonna be like, "Who the heck is the guy who defeated us? Some really famous guy?"

"Let's look it up... are you all sure it was this one? The information says this is the recruit, though..."

O.o

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C591
3 days ago
Reading Status: C15
As of this review, there is only 15 chapters posted.

The narration is compelling. Right off the bat, the narration shows that the protagonist isn’t some damsel-in-distress, even if she has several issues (crippling loneliness, paranoia, holes in her memories, to name a few). The setting, being three years after a zombie apocalypse, sends us straight into the protagonist’s daily life, right before she encounters someone who sends her routine off its course. I have no idea where the future would take the protagonist, and frankly I don’t care. After the first few chapters, I’m stuck thinking, ‘God, just let this girl rest,’ because I can almost feel the exhaustion in her POV.

The story is written in a way that makes me think that the author is no writer—no, the author of this story is a storyteller. Why is that a bad thing? Well, for one, it shows that the author does not give a rat’s ass about proper punctuation, spelling, and capitalisation. There’s little to no problems with the grammar, though, which is nice. Is the author a native English speaker, perhaps? That being said, these problems can be easily fixed with a little bit of editing.

Overall, it’s a pretty okay story.

Do take my opinion with a grain of salt, though, since it is still very early in the story, from what I can see. Good luck to the author, and don’t stop writing if you can help it. View More
3 Years Later
3 days ago
I pretty much use English except for the honorifics, and the only time that I can remember where I used Korean instead of the proper English word was for the FL’s nickname (Lee Cheonsa, instead of Angel Lee) since it was meant to be read as a normal name. Hope you don’t mind!

I don’t particularly care if people use words from another language in a novel, but if they do it in a cringy way like “oh senpai is so suteki my heart goes dokidoki step on me kudasai i love you desu” then even I’d be put off by it and would probably react the same way xD luckily I’m waaaay past that weaboo stage so I know how annoying that could be u.u View More

VateRise: Using only those honorifics is fine. As long as everything else is in English. You don't have to change them! It's my personal view. I can deal with honorifics, but if you for example use korean words to mean something that could be just written in english... Yea.

I'll give you example with Japanese. Instead of using cute, you'd use kawai... This just makes me cringe, when people do that. So again, you don't need to change anything at all, just because I say so. I only hope that everything else is in english.

Angel Smile · C1
5 days ago
Sorry ‘bout that. In my head they’re literally speaking in Korean (picked up Korean as a third language, not fluent but I can understand it at least). It’s awkward to use the English word for things like ‘big brother’ so I just leave it as is, especially since IRL you’d be marked as rude if you call people older than you by name, even if you’re close. I’ll work on replacing the formal ones with Mr/Mrs/Ms in future edits, though. View More

VateRise: Again. I will read it but I'm not happy with the korean honorifics in an English novel. It's still much better than those kawai **** in English novels. Like people watch way too much anime.

Angel Smile · C1
5 days ago
Reading Status: C112
[Shameless self-plug v2.0 - Rewritten review]

Could be better. Lots of overused grammar. Some mistakes here and there, and the plot is meh.

It’s a story about how an innocent and weak girl got corrupted and made into a black-bellied white lotus. She hated herself for being useless, so she... ... .

The male leads are hardworking, but their efforts doesn’t translate to the result they want. Being victims of domestic violence, they are subconsciously under the impression that their father was an insurmountable obstacle to their happiness, so they make all sorts of plans to skirt around him instead of facing him straight. Because they wasted so much time, bad things happened.

The supporting leads are caring, but they hardly interfered with what was happening with the main leads. Can’t blame them; they’re pretty much kept in the dark until all hells broke loose.

The adults are pretty much absent, if not useless. There are some caring ones, like the teachers, but realistically, there are not a lot of teachers who would go above and beyond in order to take care of their students, and this might cause a lot of people to get frustrated—but alas.

Life goes on, our heroine is doing better than ever, but unfortunately, she’s lost a few screws along the way. Oops?

If you read this review until this point, then thanks for reading. If you decided to pick up the novel after reading this spoiler-laden review, then welcome aboard.

Thanks and have fun reading~ View More
Angel Smile
1 week ago

40fantasy: Am I the only one who thinks these two guys are chicken **** cowards? Between the pair of them and their buddies, how have they not deleted that asshole from the face of the earth already?

Angel Smile · C52
3 weeks ago

40fantasy: This is wrong on so many levels! Even if this isn’t incest it is still wrong. He just witnessed her being raped by his own father for crying out loud! His first reaction to her shouldn’t be kissing her and she sure as hell shouldn’t be okay with it. Come on!

Angel Smile · C32
3 weeks ago
Thank you for the feedback! To be honest, I didn’t know which genre I should put this story in, since ‘Drama’ or ‘Tragedy’ isn’t regarded as a genre in this site. I did consider putting it under Realistic Fiction, but I personally thought that the story isn’t quite realistic. I mean, Yeo Ri herself is a pretty unrealistic character, so 🤷‍♀️ but if it makes readers feel more at ease, I’ll change it~ View More

40fantasy: Dear author,

Before I started reading this, I read some comments about it being underrated even though the writing was good and that piqued my curiosity. Having read this far, I can see why. It isn’t that your story/story writing is bad (certainly NOT), it’s just doesn’t feel like it belongs in the ROMANCE genre. In my opinion, most people who follow this genre are trying to escape from the cruel realities of life - trying to find a ‘happy place,’ kinda thing. The graphic details of the horrendous crimes committed in this story rob the reader of that sweet escape. I think this would do better in the ‘Realistic Fiction’ genre. But, then again, what do I know😀. Bravo!👏👏👏👏It couldn’t have been easy penning this down.

Angel Smile · C28
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C385
Great read. There are some minor mistakes and I don’t really like how they used the [first name][last name] format instead of the [last name][first name] format that is usually found in Asian novels, but hey, that’s just my preference. I found myself wanting to write after reading it. View More
The Great Storyteller
2 months ago
I see you have contracted Second Lead Syndrome.

My work here is done~⭐️ View More

williana96: Author honestly I know I haven't been commiting a lot on your chapters but I just have to say or ask you can you please tell me how the morning cause I really love Gun for the FL and yes I know the FL and the older brother is enloved but just him to be the most like his too hot temper but barely care about the consequences before acting sigh for some reason I'm really sad knowing that someone as Gun that always there , showing love, care, and courage to FL is the the ml specially how he work his ass off try to give them both a good life and add to that he got the exact character of a Ml I mean I know the FL needs a brotherly love and stuff but damn she already has a brother and Gun is also one too . So please as the story has a lot of twist please I let him be Ml and I know I have no right to to tell how right your story but damn it hurt so see such a love character not be the Ml

Angel Smile · C205
2 months ago

Chryiss: Nor sure why A.w.w.w got censored but ok! Anyway, take your time author, health is more important! Rest up and relax 😊

Angel Smile · C205
2 months ago

Chryiss: A*** Gun... they’re all so scarred 💔 Glad Ha Jun is there to keep them in line with their nosiness!

Angel Smile · C205
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
Superstars of Tomorrow · C1
3 months ago

Chryiss: Thank you for uploading and thinking of us readers, but make sure to rest! >_<

Angel Smile · C198
3 months ago

Ruth0: Aww I do hope its a happy family reunion she really deserves a happy supporting elderly devoting grandparents

Angel Smile · C199
3 months ago

Chryiss: Happy Birthday~!! 🎂 🎈 🎉
And congrats to your cousin!

I predict this is the beginning of her stardom! 😌

Angel Smile · C196
3 months ago

Chryiss: Loool the usernames and kekeing 😆

Angel Smile · C197
3 months ago

LavaRush: Please bring hyuk-yeo ri's moment. A lot. And please not make gun like her too. My little heart can't afford it

Angel Smile · C197
3 months ago

mary_tan2001: I hope another chap coming lol, I love it😘

Angel Smile · C197
3 months ago

EvaPhantomhive: It's only been a few days but I already miss this novel a lot T_T

Angel Smile · C197
3 months ago
Thank you for the kind review! :) FYI, this version is quite toned down compared to the one in my head. Good to know someone didn’t cry~ View More

Sollkiri: This story is very well written and the story development is quite good even though its underrated. I'm really impress on how it is written! Good job Author! hoping too see another story!

Though its a gem on its own genre but its still too gray for me.

Sorry, I am a apathetic, cold-hearted blackheart. A story like this won't make me cry for a ****** ***** little girl.

Though it was a good read! Thanks!

Angel Smile
3 months ago

Sollkiri: This story is very well written and the story development is quite good even though its underrated. I'm really impress on how it is written! Good job Author! hoping too see another story!

Though its a gem on its own genre but its still too gray for me.

Sorry, I am a apathetic, cold-hearted blackheart. A story like this won't make me cry for a ****** ***** little girl.

Though it was a good read! Thanks!

Angel Smile
3 months ago
Thank you for your kind review! :) View More

Sepkiki: You know what dear author;??
Your story made cry so bad
Like for real it made my heart ache💔💔😓
But Im glad that her so called died
N I'm sad that her lover went to jail and moreover protected his sibling
I just hope oppa gets out from jail n they end up together n forever so I really love them together 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Angel Smile
3 months ago

Sepkiki: You know what dear author;??
Your story made cry so bad
Like for real it made my heart ache💔💔😓
But Im glad that her so called died
N I'm sad that her lover went to jail and moreover protected his sibling
I just hope oppa gets out from jail n they end up together n forever so I really love them together 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Angel Smile
3 months ago
????? Are you... keyboard smashing? ._. View More

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Angel Smile · C28
4 months ago
Oooooh, can’t wait until Essie gets to the academy, and Neu’arth. She’s probably gonna stand out so much. Also, I wonder if Essie’s powers can manifest within Neu’arth’s barrier ((since she’s so... unconventional)) 🤔 View More
Canaan: My World To Live · C22
4 months ago

Chryiss: Yes, that's my biggest difficulties in reading stories. :') Goldfish crew, haha!

Lmao I only realized it when I saw a power stone from you when I last checked who voted. And I was like emergasdfghkl I'm reading your story! And same for binge reading. It's torture to read a bit each day waiting to know what happens next. I forcefully don't let myself read a story I really like because of that.
That's why your original is so nice. ^u^ Us readers are lucky. Although I said I don't have much time, I can't deny I'm still a bit of a lazy arse, so I wish I had your dedication. :')

You're welcome! That review was half me being emotionally attached to the characters and pleading to their creator on their behalf. XD But that shows good character creation like I mentioned before. I shall prepare myself to die a little bit more before I get a happy ending. *cough*

Angel Smile
4 months ago
Near the end of the story⭐️ View More

queenlux: When is their brother getting out of jail

Angel Smile · C193
4 months ago
Reading Status: C21
As of writing this review, only twenty-one chapters have been posted.

To be honest, I kind of regret picking this up. This is because... there's not enough chapters! It's too short! I can't wait! Uuuuuuuuuugh!

First of all, the grammar and vocabulary used is high in quality. It is easy to read and very beautifully crafted. My imagination was very pleased throughout the whole experience.

Also, bonus points because I like fantasy, huehue.

The story is well-written, and the world-building is very in-depth. I could see the amount of attention and detail the author had placed in the plotting and planning of the world. I pretty much skimmed over some parts of it (like the part where the currency system was explained), but it's a necessary part of world-building, so I advise other potential readers to actually read them instead of skimming past them like I did (oops). I will, however, go back to re-read those parts in the future, though (probably).

Reading this story, I was completely immersed as I moved from one chapter to the next. Imagine the sense of disorientation I felt when I reached the end of latest chapter. I literally, verbally, said, "What. That's... it?" out loud. Lucky I was alone in my room so no one was there to witness the crazy rambling of this one thirsty reader. This was why I was reluctant to start reading the story when I saw the double-digit number of chapters. -3-

It really felt as if I was forcefully pulled out of the world and now I crave for more. It shows just how well-written the story is, in all of its mystical glory. That being said, I won't force the author to churn out more chapters than they could physically, emotionally, and mentally is capable of, though! As a fellow writer, I understand how draining it is to push out chapters after chapters. It takes a toll on your mind (and body, but mostly mind) and sometimes I wish the story would write/type itself out, grr. -3-/

All in all, it's a satisfying read and I don't really have any negative critique that I could think of right now, especially since the story has only barely begun. I have high hopes! Thank you for sharing this world with us readers~ View More
Canaan: My World To Live
4 months ago
Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I'm the same type of reader too; if a character isn't mentioned frequent enough, my goldfish brain would be like, "Who the eff???" so I make it a point to mention the characters as frequent as possible ((since even I sometimes forget who's who >w<)).

//gasps// How did you know I was reading your story?! Now I feel embarrassed because I hadn't touched it after I read the first chapter. :x Don't get me wrong; I'm a bingereader and MWTL only has some twenty chapters, so I thought I'd leave it to 'stew' for a little while. The genre is right up my alley, though! I'll drop a review soon~

I'll keep your tips in mind~ Thanks for reading! :) View More

Chryiss: I’ve actually been silently reading this story ever since I stumbled across it, but I didn’t realize you read mine too. *bashful author* Also, I’ll have to be more vocal in future commenting I suppose. I was just too sad at points. Anyway, onto the review now that I’ve finally caught up these last dozen plus chapters.

This story reminds me of a premium novel in how well it’s written. The characters are the absolute charm and selling point so to say of the story. Author is amazing at building characters and making them memorable. As a forgetful little reader, I need well developed and frequently mentioned characters to engrain their names and who they are in my mind. This is easier said than done, but this story does it skillfully and believably.

Of course, with that said, that’s why it’s so painful to see them go through such tragedy. I feel like I’m just in a dark tunnel in the story with a few cracks of light. I so badly want them to be happy, safe, and stable in the end, but with Author’s allusions, I don’t think it’s happening any time soon (like Hyuk and Yeo Ri reunion). Don’t make them suffer too much anymore, okay Author? This poor reader’s heart can’t take much more. 💔 On another note, maybe some face slapping? That’s always mood lifting. Ah but really, don’t mind me; just continue on, you’re doing great!

In short, if you’re debating whether to read this, go for it! Honestly, the only possible turnoff is the tragedy and taboo themes along with graphic descriptions, but besides that, you will not be disappointed. This drama comes to life.

Angel Smile
4 months ago
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