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I liked this chapter better, It felt more.. real? Dunno if tht's the word
ch 0 6 Walking
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Fantasy · Emilbks
I think you forgot to put an offend after the afford to
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Fantasy · Emilbks
i think it would be more easy on the tongue to say "-maintenance gear for swords-", but this is me nitpicking
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Fantasy · Emilbks
smithy starts?
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Fantasy · Emilbks
I'd say which, but maybe it isn't right, I am not a native speaker
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RE: Souls War Apocalypse
Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
Still pretty long, arming swords (most heavily used sword in the middle ages) were between 70 to 80 centimetres, but it's a good length, ust less controllable.
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Fantasy · Emilbks
Yeah mennnnn!!!
"Tavern War! For Skyrim! WOOO!" (Jonrad)
Dragonborn Saga
Video Games · El_Don
maybe say what the food is?
Upon entering the nearly empty eating area, Claire sits down at a one-person table. A waitress quickly appears by her side, giving her a menu to choose from. 'Hm, the standard looks good." She asks the waitress to bring her, her food. Her food is delivered around 10 minutes later, the breakfast consists of 3 slices of healthy bread, a little butter, and some fruits.
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Fantasy · Emilbks
meters*
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Fantasy · Emilbks
a 1.5 eters sword is a pretty big one
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Fantasy · Emilbks
I do not think that referring to a sword's hilt by whose is correct, because that would mean that the sword is a who
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Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
I don't even know what *** the mc is
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RE: Souls War Apocalypse
Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
You have a problem with pronouns. Her is for referring to females. His is for referring to males.
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Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
huh I mean, huh?
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Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
This guy is here because he's good for nothing else.
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Fantasy · CamilleDirithyl
how so? okra is tasty
Finally, she boiled some okra. Green vegetables were very important to eat.
From Sidekick to Bigshot
Urban · Er Fengchong
mouth watering
ch 0 8 Steaks and Eggs
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Fantasy · Emilbks