Webnovel Author: Alanray64 - Novel Collection

Taking a deep breath, trying to calm herself down, and then back to her words "Although I'm not very good at magic, the Robins family is a family of witches that have existed for a long time ago, so as a member of the family I've met plenty of witches and none of them have as pure magic as you have, at first I thought you Were a dragon that kills my student then pretend to be him so I was a bit afraid but seeing your mana flow I dismissed that thought immediately, cause what I know about the dragon is their attribute was chaos so their mana flow will be the same...I have given you my answers,s-so can you dismissed that fire...hehe" M.s Hannah says, look up at him trying to look cute.

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

7h

Commented

He is such a narcissist

"I don't like it, I don't like being fed romance, I don't like being the third wheel!" Ye Fan said.

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Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy

Alanray64

7h

Commented

Have to say it but what a stupid woman. Seriously she is thick as two bricks to trust this guy.. such drama.

ch 126 Chapter 109: Simple, I Promise You [Subscribe Please, Long Chapter, Over 4000 Words]_2

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Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy

Alanray64

8h

Commented

Bai Susu saw the intense…. Little hard to see your own eyes unless in a mirror

This time, Zhao Xiaotian saw the intense love in his eyes.

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Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy

Alanray64

10h

Replied to Jedai_Finn

Vessel is a boat/ship, vassal is subordinate or branch famiky if you like.

Something you'd expect from the children of vessel families.

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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1

Alanray64

10h

Posted

It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

11h

Commented

Merried ? Married..

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

12h

Commented

..will not reply to him.. Sounds much better

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

12h

Commented

Reply

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

12h

Replied to Sug_Madic_xx2

Get someone to proofread. That whole chapter made me wince with the reading issues.

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

12h

Commented

Bad grammar here

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

12h

Commented

Rare level…dont think it needs all caps though

[congratulations to the master for obtaining RARE-LAVEL ITEM 'weapon mastery-{skill}']

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64

13h

Commented

Vassal families

Something you'd expect from the children of vessel families.

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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1

Alanray64

1d

Commented

Thought they were all known by their ID numbers, yet this guy knows her name?

"Mia, right? Judging by your name, you should be a woman. It just so happens that I need a foot-washing maid here, so don't stay in City 22 anymore, come to City 25."